IshRa TS: I see you, I see you not. (Final Pt 3 - Pg 10 - 10/05) - Page 11

Originally posted by: Boo2014

I don't what to say, but this TS has been amazing. Truly one of your best works to date.

🤗

Originally posted by: lourel24

It was just outstanding.

Originally posted by: nafnaf

Oh wow that was absolutely out of this world!!!

Loved the fact that they can still talk to each other without actually talking but through their eyes even after 7 years!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Him walking towards her and she walking back away from him!!!!

It felt like it took hours to get close enough when it was only a few minutes!!!

Then a feeling of deja vu - he grabs her wrist and utters that famous sentence: ""Aaj bhi, biwi ho tum meri!" heard she."!!!!! unbelievable!!!

He brings her to that most fearful of all places!!!

The way he talks to Ruhi shows that he comes here often!!!

All the emotions he has gone through!!!

Her words to Raman that she actually believes: ""I killed our daughter, I killed my precious little Ruhi, here, at this very point... I had not even registered what happened when you asked me to get out of your life... you claimed that I was a bad omen... you claimed that I was too manhoos to bless anyone ever... You hated me, you'd always hate me!" As Anku says Ishita trusted Raman so much that she actually believed those words and lived with them all this time!!!!

And then when he tells her how would she like it if he was dead??!?!?!

Going through all those thoughts and then finally both with dawning thoughts: In her state, all she could do was look up at him, hope to finally be able to read his eyes since he had no reason to mask his emotions, now that all his hurt was out in the open.

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"I thought, better motherless, than with the one who has the potential of killing them one day"

"Better wifeless, than with the one who would take away his precious kids one day?"

"And better daughterless, than with the one who would only leave them with immense pain"

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Comprehension dawned on his face. It was not his turn to lose whatever remaining colour he had, his turn to be speechless, motionless, and breathless.

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"I drove her to this conclusion!"

"You blamed her for Ruhi's death"

"I was supposed to protect her too"

"But you told her she was the biggest curse in your life"

"I was hurting, how could she take my words to heart. She, who knew me better than my own self?"

"She was hurting too, and you too knew her better than her own self!"

"I didn't mean for her to... kill herself..."

"You should have known that out of all the people in the world, only you could have the impact on her mind that you did"

"I called her... a baanjh"

"And it never hit home until then"

And finally neither of them could take it any more as there was too much hurt between them!!

Although at the moment it is impossible for them to be together but that love, that care, that immense chemistry, that bonding, that attraction all of it is still there after all they are soul mates so eventually after a lot of hard work they will become Ishra again!!!!

You have done an excellent job on this shot!!!

Although when I read the final line I did shout " nooo"!!!!!! but you are right that is how it should be!!!

Thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: ...Forever...

Part 1

I dont know what to say..

I love for this!!

BTW, I am Sonal 😆

Love love you

Raman again and again trying to hate her but successfully failed.

Originally posted by: ...Forever...

Part 2

Their emotional talks with eyes.

All emotions just like this...

Can't be better than this.

Originally posted by: -Nidoo-

Hi Sonal, I'm Nidoo 😃

Great to see you commenting here 😳 Thank you!

Originally posted by: ...Forever...

Last part

You were right.

It was painful.

I can't even imagine how would have you felt while writing this. But, wait a second. This thought, I mean writing a TS on this concept... This was kabilya tareef.

Worth a read!

Do write more.

And do PM me.