IshRa TS: I see you, I see you not. (Final Pt 3 - Pg 10 - 10/05)

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Omg i m speechless...
Wat a masterpiece...hats off to u...
Their face off ..opened up to each other...their eyes did the talking too ..
Loved it

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

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+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

This is so beautiful

loved it

would love to see this type of confrontation btw Ishra.

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KPDT.DIVAN

@KPDT.DIVAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Completely speechless.. I hv no words...

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

It was so beautiful Nidoo...

Raman & Ishita are complex characters...

Raman has no control over his words..

Ishita has no control over her actions..

They r flawed but unique in their own way..

The Open talk is what needed in the show...

But what you wrote is pure bliss..

I m confident that CVs won't give as half as u gave it in here..

Lower my expectations on CVs after reading this final beautiful piece..

Edited by kaa1202 - 9 years ago

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-K.13-

@-K.13-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Yet another lovely piece of writing & I enjoyed the open-ended nature of the TS...

On screen the CVs have dug themselves into a grave of a messy "relationship" that will be fixed, undoubtedly with stupidity as if any ounce of realisim was added to this - IshRa would be no more

Hope you continued you inspired writing streak! :)

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-Atii-

@-Atii-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

OMG I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO START

I HATE YOU

SO MUCH

THIS Has to be the best TS EVER omg. I CAN'T EVEN

I LOVED LOVED IT!!

I loved HOW THEY INTERACTED WITH THEIR THOUGHTS

AND IT WAS SO PAINFUL WHEN HE TOOK HER TO THE CLIFF AND SPOKE TO ROOH

OMFG THIS IS PERFECT

I CAN'T EVEN

I LOVE YOU.

Edited by -Atii- - 9 years ago

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WittyFlair

@WittyFlair

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

That was absolutely wonderful! I really loved the concept of this story. Great job!

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Zoyamalik2005

@Zoyamalik2005

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

I loved it. Loved it. Thank you for making it so realistic. I really hope their forgiveness on the show doesn't happen at bullet speed. This was sheer magic and now I have to go away and lower my expectations...again 😆