Inconsistent and comprised story writing and characters-DT NT Pg7 - Page 5

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

I am sorry... Rinki who ???? 🤣

also when raman thought dat mani is chusa hua aam,so he was comfortable for everything.bt d moment he found mani goodlooking smart rich guy,he became jealous & insecure.for wat?is it courtsy to greet ur hubby or wife friends.bt d moment he meet mani he treating him like enemy.also showing off time to time to outsmart him like sambhar competition as well in puja knowledge.is it nt better to discuss ishita abt his feeling instead of shooing her away as usual.raman himself dont want to improve his relation.

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

I am sorry... Rinki who ???? 🤣

Originally posted by: ankitasen

You are right. She's still hurt not because of Subbu but the reason he gave to reject her. The reason is still valid that she can't conceive. So the wound wont heal easily. But she's fallen in love with Raman and she realized it fully. She earlier said about her "pehla pyar" but now the "pehla pyar" is completely washed out by "true love". She accepted it in the balcony convo, they (Ishita and Raman) were just meant for each other only. In case of Raman, the reason he had for rejection is no longer valid, he is filthy rich now. I believe even after post confession, she would get more hurt thinking she wont be able to bear Raman's child.

Very well said

But the reason for pain is subbu

And she keeps remembering of pain from time to time

But my problem is lack of any sort of reaction when mani keeps bringing out subbu

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

arre haan ZD... i am also saying the same thing...

if Mani was shown to be her friend for some time, then fine... but its like suddenly ek dost paida ho gaya, and they are all trying too hard to prove to us that yes Mani was always a part of her life...

arre where was he when her Amma was looking for alliances, when she was struggling to adopt a child???

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Vyas, if this show had remained at its old home the 11 PM time slot I bet there wouldnt be a any Mani or clownish Raman. I CAN BET...

I agree many pieces of 11 PM slot were ridiculous and inane, "possessed Ishita", bringing Param back, bringing Shagun back etc.

But I feel the 11 PM slot would have allowed the story to remain a lil refined. This slot places unreasonable demands on the Producers to produce TRPs. You must have other leading ladies behave exactly this way (I dont want any others at this time) and walking away with good TRPs.

Well this is an interesting argument

And it somewhere makes sense

although ishita is a very mature girl but in case of mani she is behaving like a teenager. she keeps on saying mani mani mani which doesnt suit to her character.

if ishita has nt forgotten subbu she wld nt hav fall in luv with raman.its impossible for a girl.subbu is his past.wen present is satisfying &good ppl treat past as story & lesson.ishita too hv move forward long time back.she used subbu past to explain her & other feeling & pshycology.

Originally posted by: appuss

Hi... there is major inconsistency in ishra relation progress and the time slot change has added to it. One day you feel raman loves her., next day it is ishita, the next day both and the very next day cvs show both are not intrested. It is just commonsense to realise that they want to prolong the confession. I find it very silly, confession can come with the flow of the story. Cvs need not make it seem like at last they fall in love left with no other choice... now i'm not interested in their painful past at all... high time to finally move on, especially raman. Prolonging confession does not make sense to me anymore... 250 epi over and still the cvs want to keep us guessing. cvs will show them falling for each other when they are convinced that ishra is the last male and female remaining on planet earth and they are left with no choice than finally fall in love. Too much dragging kills the essence of the show. My opinion...

Very good post

And I agree with you

Inconsistency is my main grouse here

And you have shown another reason for it

It is clear that they are committed

But feelings don't remain constant

Originally posted by: redwine1

Aaah dude ... ur one disgruntled customer ...

Just a kostin .. since i am one of the people to gush over "layered writing" .. did u by any chance wonder what is layered writing ... ? lemme know maybe i cud help throw light on it ..

lemme try helping u here what is layered writing in reference to what u have written about Ishita being "mature & level headed" well heres a woman who is clearly over the moon to meet a best friend since childhood ...she is gushing giggling et all .. just like a young girl ..

the next scene they show this same woman single handedly handle all the rituals of her household .. rituals she has no clue about ..

the next scene they show this woman talking to her husband about an issue pertaining to his ex .. which could potentially impact their 2 kids ..

While Debating kindly make sure you do not get personal and aggressive with the TM for airing their views which may not suit your taste ,everyone is free to air their views but the manner in which you do that is what counts and is important so please keep the decency in place


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