Inconsistent and comprised story writing and characters-DT NT Pg7 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Oishi_S

You don't know?😲 She is the invisible person who exists only in the photo frame of Bhalla household🤣

Originally posted by: redwine1

I am not disgruntled

I like to point out what I see

Well I still don't agree

<font size="3">In same way Raman has said that multiple times to her that he is over Shagun </font>

She still believes he loves her in latest episode

Now in same way I say that she is not over subbu

Atleast in her conversations with Raman it seems so

She has said multiple times she knows hurt and pain of being abandoned

Which means she clearly has not somewhere forgotten the pain and in short reason of that pain subbu

Now coming to meeting her friend after years

I agree she is excited

But now she has been meeting him continuously for past 3-4 days now that should be enough to calm her down

And to me as a guy it looks slightly over the top and out of character

And to me layered writing is compromised when she fails to recognise anything other than mani like in last night episode where she gave credit of finding out Romi was drunk to mani when clearly it was Raman who also found out by himself












Well this is your view

And you are entitled to your view

I respectfully don't agree

Well I am just saying what I feel is inconsistent

That's all

Originally posted by: ...EhSaas...

Lucky main chhoti likh rahi thi lekin yeh to bada ho gaya fir bhi adha hi likha hai mani Vrat ki wajah se

Leo

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

first... if I would have read yours and Megha's replies first, i wouldnt have bothered replying... my keyboard wouldnt have suffered so much

second... the whole reason i wrote my Ramayan reply without even watching the show is YOU + ZD + Leo and your Gujju discussion last night. sab log Mani Mani kar rahe the, ki maine bhi bol diya "aata maajhi satakli 😆"

and Jaya - this is not fair. You lit a match under me, and now you are on Mani Vrat 😭 who will give me all the detailed information about his character and track yaar ???

Originally posted by: mnr123

Well clearly u r not liking this Ishita's Mani jaap n thats y u made this post.

I do agree with u on this. Sometimes I feel stories need not have a deeper meaning all the time. Sometimes to make the story look special it feels like devoid of any logic. Simple things like Mihika putting coffee on Ashok's legal papers cant ashok make another copy 😆 Cant she tell at least Mihir about it to avoid the confusion later, but she chooses to remain quiet so that we can see an intense drama later. 😆 Then Ashok spilling coffee on Mihikas phone (I found it so juvenile. 😆) nMihika crying that her phone is damaged n she cant show that Monica clip 😛. Well this story when EK launched she said its for " matured Indian audiences" 😆 😳. Any urban person wud know what happens when coffee or water spills on ur phone 😆.

As Madhubala said Humour if devoid of any logic looks silly. Its the same tracks devoid of logic looks silly. Maybe this sillyness has creeped in for 7.30 slot I think No we saw same illogical stuff when Ishita went n got Param home alone or when she got drunk Shagun home.

I guess the makers want to portray that a woman who is falling in love with Raman (as they showed n 22nd n 23rd Sep )prefers to spend more time with her best friend over the person with whom she wants to fall in love with (i.e Raman). Y coz any woman in her place wud do that I find this argument again silly.
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Ishita ok initially started Mani Jaap by saying ki I want to make Ravan jealous n admit his jealousy or love but clearly now it is not working. If this is a track to make Raman understand that its ok to be sensitive sometimes u need not b the so called alpha male, sometimes u need to use ur heart instead of ur Brain n anger (showing him n example f Mani) then also its a wrong track. 😆 Raman has so many times shown his sensitive side.

Ishita's refusal towards Mani's so cAlled carrying a torch for u statement. First time in party she says I m married lemme find u a nice girl here (trying to brush aside the topic) second time in coffee shop when asked her if she lovers her husband she says its not necessary to have love in marriage it can still work again not clearly saying I am happy in my marriage. Third time on bench she says u have no copyrights over me n laughs off. If somebody is ur best friend n if u say something to them seriously they will not get hurt but be happy that u came clean wid uf issues ( if I tell my best friend ki the topicu r discussing with me I am not liking please we will not discuss this she will understand) This is called maturity, somebody with whom u have gone to school n shared homework n played with is not ur best friend.

Maybe Mani didnt wanted to come in between Ishita n subbu hence he was not there in Ishitas life n went abroad but y did Ishita not share her pain with him then? What r best friends for only happy times ? Even Mani asks her Subbu k baad itna sab hua u cud hv called me I wud hv come to u she has no answer to that.

Hence this Ishita Mani relationship does not feel like two best friends but just good frirnds chatting n remembering gud old days. Clearly Ishita finds no emotional anchor in Mani n then when she spends quality time with him giggling n laughing she comes across as silly nothing else.

I know some people r liking it but m reAlly not liking this track n if this continue m thinking f not watching YHM. It currently looks like Ishra story is not progressing although both r asking each other valid questions. I guess i will give it a break for 2 -3 days.

Very well said mnr

Agree with you on this

I can get legal papers done in 3 hrs flat

The story needs to have some logic

Yes what a point

She supposedly is in love with Raman

But she is mostly seen spending time with mani

She seems to be ignoring Raman

She is quick to praise mani for anything

But praise for Raman does not come even after golu knowledge he gave

Originally posted by: ...EhSaas...

Your post inspired me to write long thesis otherwise I was going to end in one line 😆

Mani ke bare me to kahi se bhi pata chal jayega is forum pe jitne topic ishra pe nahi bane ab tak utne mani ke bane hai one week me 🤣 😲

lucky

@zener

Will write detail reply later

But agree with you

See I may sound like a khap panchayat scumbag

But marriage has some limits and boundaries

And to me ishita is constantly challenging them

Any sensitive person like her and who claims to understand Raman would not push mani envelope so much knowing his bg

Now what ramsn did does not matter

As it is about consistency in ishita character

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Haila... maine tumko inspire kiya ??? 😎 i feel proud now

Ab aayi Mani ki baat >> mujhe bas aapki vishesh tipanni mein ruchi hai... kripa karke Jayaji, aap apni param mitra Luckyji ke liye Mani Vrat tod dijiye na... 😃