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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

wow what a beautiful update👏

behind a strong woman there lies a girl who knows that she has to fight the demons ofher life but quitely wishes for a prince charming to be her knight in shining armor. I love the way you describe ishita story. I am glad of raman hug act, it was so different and pleasant unlike the reaction of subbu and bala and others.

very beautiful story, i ove ishita strong and brave character.

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Bhanu

@btalwar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Ok, time for stupid questions ... guys can I delete my own post ... as in just one comment in this series ??

Edited by btalwar - 11 years ago

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Hayeee hayeee!!! Sooo perfect way of ending! Definitely u did not disappoint me. Great going janab!

U write amazingly! Keep writing. We are here to appreciate u!

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

It was super duper awesome yaar.I was literally crying.SUPERB 👏

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smilydear

@smilydear

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Beautifully written update ... You mentioned all the emotions of a person who had gone through a betrayal in friendship , love and the worst came when they uses your weakness to betray you and let you feel that you are good for nothing .. you mentioned the cruel reality of your society who give pain to those who were already in pain . and the most important thing you mentioned is A women is a great enemy of a women ... All those functions are women oriented functions and they are the ones who mocked , who stopped , who make fun of other women! WHY ??? . Women needs to wake up and had to start all this from there own family and friends if they really wants change .

I loved how Raman handle the whole situation . You elaborate the saying of a friendship quote "I don't know whether i can bring smile on your face when you are crying but assure you I'll cry with you " . They are not the exact words but the meaning is same. n I love it . Raman did the same he was there for her not judging her , not stopping her, just be there for her , with her like a shadow . This definitely means she got her true friend .

If you want to write any new story PM me. I would love to read your thoughts. Thanks for sharing.

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

res 😳

Bhanu so sorry for the delay in editing

reply to the reply 😆 - yep I agree with the way he handled things Subu lost respect or perhaps even a chance at redemption you know, esp since he couldnt face her and I agree their marriage had it happened would have ended disastrously cos once a coward, always a coward.

And I agree the floor mopping scene with the FBs as well as the scene where she sees Subu walk in with his wife or when Amma asks her to tell about Raman in the same epi and she sees him looking at her with the mixture of curiosity and pity showed there are a lot of unresolved/pent up feelings there not dead just buried deep.

Am short on time these days LOL so cant rant more but thanks for not being bored with my previous rant and 😆 that's cute that your hubby teases you so and word on Frost! the man is a wiz!

coming to the OS: OMG this was so beautiful I love the way you ended this the way this whole chapter went with Ishita narrating/pouring her heart out to Raman and in the end the fact he offered her no platitude, gave her no condolences or sympathy just held her tight was simply beautiful.

Words are meaningless sometimes you know, you can say stuff and yet... yet it cant mean anything at times which a simple gesture like a smile or a hug can do and Raman opted just for that.

Also the end was so lovely with the way you wrote how Raman is becoming that friend Ishita missed, longed for.

I wish this hadn't ended here, but understand sometimes you see a story only up to a point and then you have to let it go, I do hope though you get inspiration again sans a bad/long track 😆and are back soon with a new OS/SS. 😊

Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago

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whitelily

@whitelily

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Perfect ending for perfect story

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Bhanu

@btalwar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli
awww beautiful heart-touchin update..it made me teary eyed at various places...u r such a BRILLIANT WRITER...the emotions of characters were very well expressed..👏👏👏...

totally LOVED LOVED this SS...👏👏...plz comeback with a new one soon 😃

Niki ... 🤗 .. As always you are the first one to comment dear ... Thank you for heartfetl appreciation ... If feels so good to know the my work is appreciated ...

You are making me blush now ... am in no ways brilliant yaar ... am just a novice who is trying to learn something new ... the next story ... lets see ... may be sometime ...

Till then ... thanks a lot ...

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Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: dreamy-sa
res😳

wow such an awesome update... love u🤗

Thank you for your lovely comments dear ... hahaha .. love you too ... 🤗

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Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_
Wow..just wow
2 words "ghar chalein" meant sooo much to her probably even a long conversation between them at that time wouldnt comfort her that much...
Beautifully written
Thanks for the pm buddy

Thank you Dipsi ... Yes, I believe sometimes our actions speak louder than words ... and whatever Ishita has suffered cannot be changed by few soothing words ... my entire idea was to show Raman's presence made a difference for her.

Thank you for the appreciation ...