An Ishra SS: Sirf Tumhare Liye - Final Part page 13 - Page 10

Originally posted by: JniISHRA83

It was superb yaar 👏..

I am glad you found it good ... Thank you ...

BTW, this is my 100th post ... 😃😃

Originally posted by: JazzyM

You had me teary eyed. Thank yo for exploring Ishu's emotion. So far, in the series, Ishita's innermost feelings has not been really explored. Surface, yes but not in-depth. Her outpouring was well written. To be able to move forward, the suppressed emotions need to come out. Loved Raman's hug too. The support system is needed. Words don't matter, actions speak louder.

Thank you JazzyM. Awww ... don't cry ... I have always felt that no one has every explored this part so it was kind of necessary ... Yes, to move forward, we need to make sure that we acknowledge our pain and that is when friends are needed.
Thanks a lot for the kind words ...

Originally posted by: Oishi_sonu

I am...I am speechless. This was just freaking amazing. The way you explored emotions, the way you showed Raman turning into a friend, a soulmate. This was lovely. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story.👏

Thank you Oishi. It always feels good to hear that your work is appreciated.

Absolutely loved the way you portrayed Ishita's thoughts and feelings ... the lines are so well written that I could actually feel them.

Loved how you showed that more than the person ...it was the loss of her lifetime friendship and relationship that pains her the most. Did she really deserve such a punishment for something beyond her control. Ishita in the show should have all the pain, insecurity and emotional conflict from this bitter experience. You managed to show us that beautifully Bhanu.

I loved her talk about Bala and Subbu ... the same words but the different meanings that they had. One of my favorite parts of this update.

Raman's understanding that she needs to just let go and this time he was there for her ... all the way *sigh*. Aww Bhanu ... I can't pick a single line that I did not like in the last few para's. It was all just so well written. Emotional kar ditha tumne *sniff*

PS -- I am being expecting another fantastic OS from you ... you are not allowed to go silent girl 😛😆

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

wow what a beautiful update👏

behind a strong woman there lies a girl who knows that she has to fight the demons ofher life but quitely wishes for a prince charming to be her knight in shining armor. I love the way you describe ishita story. I am glad of raman hug act, it was so different and pleasant unlike the reaction of subbu and bala and others.

very beautiful story, i ove ishita strong and brave character.

Hey Javeria such beautiful lines 😊. I guess your lines are truly apt for what I wanted to depict for Ishita in my story ... She may put a brave front but at the end of the day, she is also just a normal girl who is as hurt as anyone if someone crushes her heart.

And like you said, real prince charming may not necessarily may not necessarily be a knight with shining armor, but his presence itself may be the best thing to happen to a girl and that is what God has presented to Ishita in form of Raman.

Thanks for your kind words.

Originally posted by: avni_19

Hayeee hayeee!!! Sooo perfect way of ending! Definitely u did not disappoint me. Great going janab!


U write amazingly! Keep writing. We are here to appreciate u!

Thank a lot Avni. Glad to know that I did not disappoint. I wanted to write a small epilogue but eventually decided against it since it felt good to end on a open note ..

I hope the writing muse hits me again so that I can come up with something new ... but as I have said it a million times till now 😆😆 .. I am a novice, so I really need some strong idea before I can even think about writing on it.

Lets see ... fingers crossed ... something shall come up ...

Thanks again for all the appreciation throughout

Originally posted by: lourel24

It was super duper awesome yaar.I was literally crying.SUPERB 👏

Thank you for your kind words. Glad you liked it. 😳

Originally posted by: smilydear

Beautifully written update ... You mentioned all the emotions of a person who had gone through a betrayal in friendship , love and the worst came when they uses your weakness to betray you and let you feel that you are good for nothing .. you mentioned the cruel reality of your society who give pain to those who were already in pain . and the most important thing you mentioned is A women is a great enemy of a women ... All those functions are women oriented functions and they are the ones who mocked , who stopped , who make fun of other women! WHY ??? . Women needs to wake up and had to start all this from there own family and friends if they really wants change .

I loved how Raman handle the whole situation . You elaborate the saying of a friendship quote "I don't know whether i can bring smile on your face when you are crying but assure you I'll cry with you " . They are not the exact words but the meaning is same. n I love it . Raman did the same he was there for her not judging her , not stopping her, just be there for her , with her like a shadow . This definitely means she got her true friend .

If you want to write any new story PM me. I would love to read your thoughts. Thanks for sharing.

Thanks a lot smilydear. Yes, you are right. Somehow, this is the sad part of our society that we make the mockery of an already suffering person and as you rightly pointed out ... most of the times it is done by females only ... our society is a patriarchal society but the customs, cultures are specifically developed and traditionally followed for centuries by females only ...

Till today, for any ritual, you turn towards an elder female of the family because she has followed them herself for years ... sadly, over the years, some of the same customs have become a burden for society ... and that is where the problem comes ... At the same time, lets not forget that it is us who change the society so if we change, a part of our automatically changes. Therefore, we should introspect and change ourselves and surely the world will be a beautiful place to live ... I guess it already is ... 😳 ..

As always, am always up for ranting ... but your thought provoking words acted as a catalyst ...

I loved your lines. Yes, I have also read them multiple times and I guess they perfectly depict the relationship between our protagonists at the moment. Sometimes, mere presence of someone is all that matters. That is an assurance enough that whatever happens, you are not alone and believe me, it prevents so many disasters.
Yes, they are showing something like this in the serial as well .. Raman does not express his emotions very explicitly but still his eyes and his actions speak otherwise. They totally tell you that I care and that is what matters at times.

As I said, lets see, when can I write something new ... I am right now out of ideas ... 😳😳 .. so dunno may be sometime ... will definitely let you know when I start something new.

Originally posted by: chathu

Lovely SS ,

Thank you dear

Originally posted by: whitelily

Perfect ending for perfect story

Thanks a lot whitelily. Glad you liked this part.