An Ishra SS: Sirf Tumhare Liye - Final Part page 13

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Hello All, let me introduce myself. My name is Bhanu and I am usually a silent reader of this forum. But, thanks to the Shagun track, I got so depressed, that my mind decided to become and ostrich and royally ignore Shagun track altogether. Instead, it went into Ishra land and came up with a lot of "What Ifs?" This is one such version of my thoughts penned down. As per this track, the accident mystery was resolved and Param is culprit and is right now in jail. If you like Param (:-P), then you are free to think the mystery is not solved ... both ways, this fiction stays clear of the Amma accident altogether.
Lastly, please remember, I have never ever written anything and this is my first shot at something and am literally too nervous to post it ... so please read it once and give me your honest opinion on the same. Originally meant to be a One Shot, I have broken it down into a Short Story as I realized it will be for the best.
Thanks .


PART 1


Tick Tick Tick Tick. 3:21 AM. Raman looked at his watch hopelessly yet again for the tenth time as sleep evaded him. They had called it a night over three hours ago but sleep seemed to be a foreign entity to him today. Turning over, he looked at the sleeping frame of Ishita on the couch. She looked like an angel with the soft moon bestowing its light on the sweet angel. He slowly walked over near her couch; leaned forward and whispered more to himself than her ... "I promise Ishita. I will bring back happiness in your life. You will be happy. I promise. I promise. " With this, he turned around to get back to his bed only to turn back and whisper "And haan ek aur baat ... pata nahi mai ye kabhi tumhe kahunga ya nahi ... par jaanti ho ye sab mai kiske liye karunga ... "Sirf Tumhare Liye".
As he came back and settled in his bed, he was fully aware of one, very obvious fact ... That something between them had changed that nite and although he was just reluctant and too stubborn to accept it ... it was going to affect and change his life rather both of their lives ...

2 days ago ... sometime during the evening ...
Raman had come back from work contently enjoying his tea while Toshiji was narrating about her day to him. Suddenly, Amma walked in with a beautiful envelope in her hands.
"Namaste Amma. Aayiye andar aayiye. Kaise ho aap ? Aapki tabiyat to theek hai?" Raman enquired from his mother in law.
"Mai theek hoon beta. Mera health ab dheere dheere better ho raha hai. Raman, Ishita clinic se aa gayi kya ?" Amma enquired enquisitively.
"Nahi Samdhan ji. Abhi nahi aayi. Kuch emergency operation karna pada hai use to aaj late ho jayegi. Phone aaya tha uska." Aap baithiye mai coffee banwati hoon. Toshi ji added.
"Nahi nahi Coffee nahi. Thank you. Abhi mujhe Vishwa ke liye dinner banana hai ... bahot late ho gaya aaj to ... mai sirf Ishu ko ye envelope dene aayi thi ... Vo uske college se aaya hai ... maloom nahi kya hai ... 2 din se rakha hua hai par mujhe yaad hi nahi rehta ... mujhe lagta hai ki mai old age me bhoolna shuru ho gayi hoon" Amma added worriedly .
"Of course, budape me aisa hi hota hai ... specially agar sirf idly dosa khao saari zindagi ... Punjabiyon ki tarah chicken mutton khao and dekho kaise meri tarah fit and fine ho jaoge".
Amma eyes widened and was about to retort when Raman sensing the dangerous turn this conversation was taking immediately got up and took the envelope from Amma and added "Amma, vo Appa ke liye dinner banana tha na aapko. Aapne decide kar lia kya? And aap tension mat lo, mai yaad se Ishita ko ye envelope de dunga."
Amma looked at the watch and totally forgot to retort to Toshiji, blabbered hurriedly "Aiyyo mai to aaj bahot hi late ho gayi ... Raman beta main jaati hoon; please Ishu ko ye envelope de dena."
As soon as she was gone, Raman gave a look to his mother who was proudly smirking as if she was holding the FIFA world cup in her hands. Shaking his head, Raman entered his room and casually placed the envelope on the table.
Few hours later, a visibly tired Ishita both from the surgery and the relentless traffic home due to sudden showers entered the Bhalla house and crashed on the sofa. Everyone had slept she noticed but for the small light which was coming from her room. Raman was awake. Tired, she got up to freshen up and crash on the bed. The surgery was of a child who had unfortunately met with an accident and she was their along with a team of other surgeons and therefore had dinner with them before leaving the clinic.
"Aa gayi tum. Kaisi thi surgery. Itni late tak kiske daant tod rahi thi .. Dekho uske dard pe bhagwaan pe aansu baha raha tha ... tabhi to bahar baarish ho rahi thi ". Raman looked up from his file sensing her presence and retorted.
Ishita eyes widened and she angrily answered, "Ek bacha tha chota sa. Accident ho gaya tha uska. Kaafi chot lagi hai face pe."
"Oh. Ab kaisa hai vo" Raman immediately asked forgetting his satirical taunts concerned about the little child.
"Ab better hai. Heavy sedation pe hai par out of danger hai. Multiple fractures hai. Kaafi time lagega usko recover hone me. But thankfully, kuch internal injury nahi hui hai to theek ho jayega with time." She added and yawned heavily. "Mai change kar leti hoon. Bahot neend aa rahi hai."
Raman nodded and went back to his file. Ishita quickly took a shower and changed into her night dress and went to the couch with her pillow and quilt. It is then she noticed the beautiful cream colored envelope lying on the table. She immediately picked it up and asked "Ye kya hai ?".
Raman looked up from his file and quickly added "Are haan. Amma ne ye sham ko tumko dene ke liye kaha tha. Ye tumhare college se kuch aaya hai."
"Mere College se. Kya ho sakta hai ?" Ishita immediately opened it enthusiastically and started reading it. Suddendly, Raman noticed a change in her stance, her eyes had a faraway look.
"Kya hai", curious, Raman asked. "KYA HAI?" he asked a little louder, when he found her frozen to the spot. " Ishita, suddenly came back from the trance masked her emotions immediately and answered with a half-hearted smile, "Vo kuch important nahi hai ... college reunion hai 2 din ke baad usi ka invitation hai."
There was something in his eyes which made him curious. It was there for only some time; but it was definitely there. Fear, Nervousness. What made her feel like this? Suddenly, his inner self scolded himself. Since when did Raman Bhalla in his sane mind read Jhansi ki Rani's eyes and be worried. Remember, "Sirf Ruhi ke liye". He mentally scolded himself for that and immediately came back to hi Ravan Kumar mode more to shield his inner thoughts than get a rise from her.
"Kya hua? Itna ghabra kyu gayi vahan jaane ki soch ke ? Dar rahi ho ki jis professor ko maar peet ke ye degree tumne haasil ki thi, kahin vo mil gaya aur usne tumhara raz khol dia to? Ya fir, I know know the real reason now, reunion me jaogi to mujhe ye sachai pata chal jayegi na ki tum hamesha se hi itni MOTI ho ... log hairan reh jayege ki tum kitna khati hogi maintain karne ke liye . " He patted himself for coming up with such a retort.
Ishita who seemed to be lost in her thoughts immediately got back to the world and retorted. "Kuch bhi. Mai tumhari tarah nahi hoon. Kitni mehnat lagti hai doctor banne ke liye, tumhe kya maloom. Aur haan, mai moti nahi hoon."
"Of course, tum moti nahi ho. Aur London Antartica ki capital hai. Dono baatein ek dam sach hai." He said with a straight face only he was capable of managing.
Ishita fuming with anger now but unable to come up with a retort stomped her foot, cursed him in Tamil and lied down on the couch. A few seconds later, she got up and retorted, "Aur haan. Mai vahan jaane me darti nahi hoon. And as you know, it is reunion with family. Isliye, do din baat ki date mark kar lo. You do need to see the royal world of doctors Ravan Kumar. Gud Nite"
"Doctors nahi Dentists." He added quickly and smiled at her Tamil outburst again. Content with his retorts, he also lied down on the bed and quickly sent an email to his secretary from his phone. "Cancel all my appointments in the evening after two days and add private event in my calendar".
Putting his phone down, he closed his eyes and soon the sleep had engulfed his tired mind and body.

Hey, finally the first part is finished. As I said earlier, this is my first work and I will really appreciate the honest reviews and comments. I will post the second chapter sometime tomorrow. Till then keep reviewing. Cheers. Bhanu.






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Part 1 --> Page 1
Part 2 --> Page 3
Part 3 --> Page 6
Part 4(A) --> Page 10

Part 4(B) --> Page 13
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Hello people. Thank a lot to all of you who liked my first attempt.

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As I already said, I am a silent reader and very new in terms of using the website. So I will try and PM you but I need to figure it out. Anyway, this is where I have given a glimpse of the real scene in my mind. I am not too happy with the outcome and have checked it time and again. But alas, with my limited vocabulary, this is the best I could manage. Please review and comment.
I have started writing the next version but as it is a weekend, I hardly get time to sit on my laptop. Therefore, I will try and update the next part by Monday. As I said, it is an SS, therefore, I intend to post one or may be two more parts for this. But, I am not sure because I am going by where my mind is taking me to ...
Enough of my blabbering ... please review ... here it goes ...
Cheers
Bhanu.





PART 2


Beep Beep. Ishita lazily closed the alarm of the clock and got up from the bed. After freshening up, she went and prepared breakfast, got ready and was about to leave when she realized that today they had to go for the reunion. Suddenly, nervous again, she closed her eyes and thought ... was it a good idea to go to this reunion. She had avoided this earlier as well for obvious reasons. So many thoughts, doubts and confusions suddenly invaded her mind at once. Frustrated, she closed her eyes, took a deep breath and blurted out, "That's it. Come on Ishu. You have to face it one day. You are a married woman now and you cannot run away from the truth forever. Besides, you are going to miss meeting all your dear friends just because you are scared that what if he turns up ... huh ... Well you already know that he never anyway liked these parties ... so do not panicand instead worry about what you want to wear tonight. You have not even looked into your wardrobe for God's sake"... she pushed her worries aside and started to look for a suitable dress for the evening. But her mind still wandered helplessly. Helplessly, she started murmuring soothing words to her in Tamil.

"Tum jaanti ho na .. apne aap se baat karna pagalpan ki pehli nishani hoti hai ..." Raman entered and added. Out of her reverie, Ishita looked at him and chose to ignore what he said, instead she said, "Aaj sham ko jaldi aa jaana. Hame reunion ke liye jaana hai."

"Hmm" Raman said.

With this, they walked out of their room to their respective offices. Evening came quicker than Ishita had expected with her being swarmed by the appointments. She rushed back to her home, quickly got ready and came out of her room.

"Are waah Ishita puttar. Aaj to bahot pyaari lag rahi hai. Kyu Ruhi? " Toshiji added looking at Ruhi who was busy playing with her soft toys. Ruhi came running and started clapping. "Wow, Ishima, aap itne sundar ho. Mujhe bhi aapke jaise banna hai. Acha chalo, round round ghoomo, mujhe dekhna hai."

"Round round ? "

"Haan Ishima. Dekho aise" Ruhi twirled with the frock folds in her tiny hands. Ishita laughed and obliged the cute request of her daughter. She tookthe pallu in her hand and twirled and then turned around a model. Ruhi got excited to look her and started clapping and jumping.

That's when Toshiji noticed Raman standing at the doorway looking at the entire scene from there. Shelooked at her son's face and smiled fondly.He seemed to have forgotten everything else was openly gaping at his wife shamelessly.Raman was spellbound, he had to confess. Ishita had stuck to wearing a saree but traded her traditional Kanjeevaram sarees with a pale blue georgette net saree and man she looked gorgeous in it. The correct word was probably divine. She had kept her makeup and accessories minimal but what made her look divine was the smile which reached her eyes and brought a twinkle in them when she was withRuhi. Truly, Raman was mesmerized.


"Papa aa gaye, papa aa gaye. "Ruhi ran and wrapped herself around his legs. Raman happily picked up Ruhi. That is when Ruhi quickly added. "Papa, Ishima ko dekho. Kitni beautiful lag rahi hai aaj. Ekdam fairy ki tarah. Haina, Papa."


Looking directly into Ishita's eyes who by now had realized that Raman had witnessed the entire scene and fidgeting nervously with the pallu of her saree, Raman added, "Yes beta. Aaj tumhari Ishima actually bahot beautiful lag rahi hai."

Surprised, Ishita looked into his eyes to find nohumor, satire or mockery in them. Instead, they looked, dreamy as if he was ... mesmerized ... Mentally kicking herself for thinking the impossible, Ishita brushed aside her thoughts and quickly added, "Thank you. Ab chalein. Kaafi door jaana hai and ham already late ho gaye hai."


An hour later, they reached the venue. It was a beautiful farmhouse in the outskirts of Delhi and due to the showers yesterday itself, the breeze was cooler and atmosphere was pleasant with soft music playing in the background. They were greeted and guided to a section of people who were already huddled together in groups. Voices of laughter and joy filled the atmosphere.


Ishita scanned the party and the members and Raman again felt that flicker of nervousness and fear in her eyes. It was as if she was trying to spot someone. He made a mental note to ask her about her anxiety later, he walked with her to a group of people standing right in front of them.

There were gasps of recognition mixed with happiness and surprises. "Oh my God. Its Ishita right, Ishita Iyer? Wow, how have you been all these years? And you still look as beautiful as ever. "Ishita immediately recognised her as Radhika from her batch and they were quickly engrossed in the conversation. Introductions were made and Raman had already shaken hands with so many doctors, correction Dentists.


"Itne saare Dentist eksaath. Agar kuch bhi ulta bola to sab milke mera ek ek daant alag tod denge. " He chuckled to himself. That is when he felt a hand on his shoulder. He turned around and found a tall, slender man looking him. Raman's eyes moved from confusion to recognition in a flicker of second. "Abe saale, Kartik, tu yahan pe. Oh my GOD. Kitne saal ho gaye na. Probably close to 15 years. Kaisa hai tu, kahan hai aajkal." Kartik who happened to be a schoolmate of Raman quickly filled in Raman. Although they were good friends in school; different career choices had made them choose different paths and over a period had lost touch with each other. It turned out that his wife Kavita also happened to be a Dentist and was the batchmate of Ishita. It was indeed a small world.
"Chal udhar bar ki taraf chalte hai. Jaise ki tujhe dikh raha hai hamari respective beewiya apni guftagu me magan hai to in dono ko apna reunion karne de and ham apna karte hai". He laughed.


Raman looked at Ishita as he planned to introduce his friend to her when he noticed Ishita had moved further and was engrossed in an animated conversation with another friend of hers. She looked so relaxed and happy to be among them. Her eyes were twinkling and it was evident even from the distance that she was enjoying this reunion immensely. Being a working mother living in a joint family did take a toll on her ME Time'. Therefore, he smiled and contently moved along withKartik to let Ishita enjoy with her friends.


Ishita had not even realized that she was missing a big part of her old life till she had met with her old friends again. True, things were now pretty different from when they used to be in their college days; now all of them were responsible adults with their respective professional and personal lives, yet it was nice to be reacquainted with her old self yet again. Although, Ruhi did bring out the child in her which she enjoyed and loved immensely, yet all these familiar faces had a strange sense of deja vu to it. And now that she was sure that her fear was baseless as she did not find him anywhere in the party, she had dropped the last bit of anxiety from her mind and was enjoying this party immensely.


Suddenly, the conversation turned to the respective personal lives. That is when Nisha, another friend asked her "Ishita, kaun hai vo lucky insaan jisne tumhara dil finally jeeta. Hame bhi milna hai usse jo hamare College ki sabse pretty girl ka life partner ban gaya." Ishita smiled and started looking for Raman when Nisha's husband Rakesh who was also from their batch and later on married Nisha after courtship immediately added, "Arre Madam, idhar udhar kahan dekh rahi hai ... aapke better half to ye idhar se aa rahe hai. Aur manna padega Ishita, tumne bahot achi training di hai bhai ... ye to acha khaasa baby sitter bhi hai" He laughed.


Confused, Ishita turned left and felt the ground beneath her shake uncontrollably. She had dreaded to meet him even in her nightmares. He was the sole reason she was sceptical to attend this reunion function altogether. Standing in front of her with his arms protectively wrapped around his son was SUBBU.


She immediately felt that she was entrapped in a dark tunnel with not even a flicker of light anywhere near her. The air had become so thick and it became harder and harder to breathe with every passing second. How can it be possible? She had scanned the entire party hall just to make sure he was not there. Over the years, they had a silent pact where they avoided crossing each other's path during family functions or wherever it possible for them to meet.


"Ishita, Ishita", the faint voices calling her name became louder and she was back from her trance. Rakesh smiled and added, "Aur Subbu, to finally tumne cheen hi lia hamare batch ki sabse sundar ladki ko. Yaad hai Nisha, mai hamesha kehta tha na ki ye dono to ek doosre ke liye hi bane hai and in dono ki shaadi hona to pakka hai." Ishita was too shocked and numb to respond. "Vo, vo mai aur Ishita ... aisa kuch ... " Subbu stammered while looking at Ishita; but Nisha immediately stopeed him and . "Arre abhi bhi sharma rahe ho ... unique hi Jodi hi tum dono ki ... Rakesh sahi keh rahe hai ... saare college ko pata tha ki tum dono ke beech me kuch to chal raha tha ... chalo acha hai Rakesh .. hamari tarah ek aur prem kahani bhi shaadi me badal gayi." Then she moved towards Subbu and took the little baby in her arms and started cooing him. "Ekdam tumhari copy hai ye to Subbu. Kitna cute hai na Rakesh."


Meanwhile, the small toddler sensing foreign arms around him felt uncomfortable and started crying. "Alle, baby ko aunty nahi mummy chahiye ... lo beta ... mumma ke paas chale jao ..." and then Nisha passed on the baby in the arms of Ishita before she could respond.


It was as if the entire world came crashing down on Ishita at that moment. She felt as if thousand daggers were pushed inside her heart all at once. She wanted to scream at the top of her voice. But not even a tiny whisper came out.She clenched her eyes hoping that this nightmare will end but nothing happened. She gave a humourless laugh at the irony of the situation. She had imagined, prayed, hell enacted carrying Subbu's baby in her arms. It was her dream to become the mother of his children. But today when she finally holding his baby in her hands; the weight seemed too much for her to handle.

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Raman laughed whole heartedly remembering one of the past incidences of their school and turned around to check on Ishita. It had been a while since he had seen her and he wanted to be back with her before the Jhani ki Rani bombared him with anotherseries lectures about why couples should attend the party together. He could see her with the same group. She was holding a small baby in hands. He smiled thinking about Ishita's natural affection for kids. She had become Ruhi's mom instantly. Not only Ruhi, the kids in the complex, Ruhi's friends, Ananya and for that matter any child was fond of her. It was an irony that she could not conceive but God had his own way to compensate for her loss, he had deduced. He was about to turn around when he happened to look into Ishita's eyes. What he saw will probably haunt him for the rest of his life. His wife's eyes were dead. There was no spark in it, no fury nothing ... simple ... NOTHING ... DEAD. Even from this distance, she looked white like a ghost. Something was definitely wrong. He noticed a man standing next to her fidgeting with the collar of his shirt. He could not place it but he looked familiar. He had definitely never met him but he had a very familiar face. Familiar?? "Oh Shit." Suddenly, every piece of puzzle fell into place and the final result shocked him ... he was familiar because he resembled Bala ... he was looking at Subbu.
Ishita was holding Subbu's kid in her hand.


Immediately, Raman dropped his drink unceremoniously and ran towards Ishita.


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