An Ishra SS: Sirf Tumhare Liye - Final Part page 13 - Page 11

Originally posted by: kritu17krits

wow dats simply amazing

Thanks a lot kritu17krits. 😳

Originally posted by: princessaaliya

brilliant, brilliant ss!

loved it...

Glad you liked it dear. I am floored😃 😳.

Originally posted by: paru_rox

Absolutely loved the way you portrayed Ishita's thoughts and feelings ... the lines are so well written that I could actually feel them.

Loved how you showed that more than the person ...it was the loss of her lifetime friendship and relationship that pains her the most. Did she really deserve such a punishment for something beyond her control. Ishita in the show should have all the pain, insecurity and emotional conflict from this bitter experience. You managed to show us that beautifully Bhanu.

I loved her talk about Bala and Subbu ... the same words but the different meanings that they had. One of my favorite parts of this update.

Raman's understanding that she needs to just let go and this time he was there for her ... all the way *sigh*. Aww Bhanu ... I can't pick a single line that I did not like in the last few para's. It was all just so well written. Emotional kar ditha tumne *sniff*

PS -- I am being expecting another fantastic OS from you ... you are not allowed to go silent girl 😛😆

Parul ... 🤗 ... Thank you for your kind words dear .. am so happy to know that you liked my attempt ... Yes, the entire idea behind my thought process was simply .. why does no one ever think that Ishita is a damaged soul as well .. we have had so much of Raman's past ... ok that guy went to hell and came back ... but how does this make Ishita's suffering any less ... and how can she be treated like a punching bag every time and asked to get normal immediately after a small sorry is uttered ...

Unfortunately, whatever I wrote is actually a sad face of our society and we still have so many people treating the sufferers are misfits. Not only for this, we have many more important issues like rape, widows, female Feticide . The list is endless.

Getting back to the update, I have always liked the relationship between Ishita and Bala. It reminds me of my little sister with my husband ... sometimes she easily discusses things with him rather than me ... am there to fight 😆😆 ... anyway, I love their bond and something like this is depicted in Bala and Ishu's relationship. But, even then, discussing Subbu will be a taboo for them ... because all said and done ... it cannot be changed that Subbu is indeed the real brother of Bala and you cannot take away sibling love from that man ... I also loved writing this part ... it is one of my favorites in the entire story and had visualized it even before I had started writing anything ...

My understanding of Raman is that it is very difficult for that man to express something emotional ... he can make you eat your words when it comes to witty comebacks but emotional talks is not his forte ... even during the confession scene where he finally apologizes to Ishita, he did not look comfortable and it was a big step for him ...

So, soothing someone may be a bit challenging for him ... he can understand the problems well, may be even solve them ... but can he express them ... so I was always clear that Raman will always help Ishu in an unconventional manner ...

Thank you so much ... I am floored ... 😳😳😳 ...

About the next OS ... as of now my mind is blank ... no new ideas as of now ... lets see ... may be the future episodes bring a new idea for me to start something else ...

Till then, see you in your posts ... I have to go and read your post as soon as I finish this.

You ended this beautifully dear! This has been a wonderful journey! 👏

Excellent. Ishita's was sharing her past to Ravan kumar n he understood her other side. What a hug! this gesture showed everything to us without a word.

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

You ended this beautifully dear! This has been a wonderful journey!👏

Thank you dear . 😳 😳

Originally posted by: felciya

Excellent. Ishita's was sharing her past to Ravan kumar n he understood her other side. What a hug! this gesture showed everything to us without a word.

Yes. My intention was to display that actions speak louder than words. Thanks for the review 😳 😳 .

I just read all four parts together. This is incredibly beautiful. The way you have conveyed their emotions, I had a lump in my throat. Your exploration of Ishita's past was simply amazing. If only we have such an exchange between Raman and Ishita on screen as well.

I sincerely hope that you write more!

You made me weep. I read the whole story at a go and this was one of the most beautiful and profound pieces I have read on this forum!

Originally posted by: happenstance

I just read all four parts together. This is incredibly beautiful. The way you have conveyed their emotions, I had a lump in my throat. Your exploration of Ishita's past was simply amazing. If only we have such an exchange between Raman and Ishita on screen as well.

I sincerely hope that you write more!

Thank you dear 😊. Yes, I also hope that something like this happens in the series also.