ISHRA~~SS: Holi ka FirstNight. [Updated, Part3-Page8]

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malini

@malini96

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

That was sooopeer awesome work
U nailed it
U should tease us this yaar...
And plzzz continue soon
I can't get enough of ur updates even if u 10 times a day

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Priya

@BombayPonnu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Woah!! Im literally ROFLing.. Shit.. The inner voices are hilarious!

Freakin Awesome..

Do continue!!

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Diana

@Artemis_1122

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

I love it!! the inner dialogues are hilarious 🤣

and the rest is very romantic. 😉 😳

looking forward to the rest.

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Wow Shiva😃😃 read both parts in one go..Loved it❤️..esp the way you have expressed Ishu's thoughts and emotions running through her mind😃..plus its super hottt😉😉😉..pls PM me when you update..😊😊 Would love to read more😊

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Sruthi

@DilMereSuntaNhi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Enjoyed it to its peak 😆😆😆

Its not fair to make us wait...😭

Loved the humor part...the most.

Well done yaar...You have done an awesome job.👏👏🤗

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Appu

@Parvathi12

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Hmmm... I dont like you... you are eviiilll... haye haye poor ishu... she toh will go mad man... n yeah.. I thought ull continue from the towel scene only.. par koyi baat nahi... cant wait for the next part... you are tohthe awesome. ... n I love ur style of writing... thanks for the pm man

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Neeharika

@Npadz

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Hahahahaha that was hilarious! Loved their naughty inner voices 😆

Looking forward to the steamy romance 😉 . Please PM when you update 😊

Edited by Npadz - 11 years ago

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: eternalasha
HilFrickinLarious.

My favourite part... Hands are so mainstream. Paisa Vasul.

HAHAHAHAHA,😆. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It would have been nice though we had gotten such a scene in the show as well.😉

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: PreciousPri
Fantabulous work Shiva!!!

Loved it.. again a very funny and blunt inner voice 😆

You got me alright! I thought scene would continue from towel scene!

But anyways with IshRa I am more than happy to wait for part 3 😉

I'm glad you loved it dear.😃 I wanted both Raman&Ishita to have an inner voice that actually mocks them, & that's also why I started from the flashback as to introduce Ishita's inner voice. Part 3 will be out tomorrow night.😆

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: akrj01
Love the inner voices, can't wait for Part 3 - do update soon.😊

Thank you dear. I'm in love with the inner voices too. Just imagine with we had something like that in the show as well.😆 & part 3 will be out tmr night.😉