ISHRA~~SS: Holi ka FirstNight. [Updated, Part3-Page8]

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Just came across this SS today and I'm really liking it. Raman and Ishita's naughty voices are so funny and I can't wait to see Raman and Ishita give in to the attraction that they feel towards each other.

Have sent you a buddy request, please PM me the next time you update. 😊

Heyy Accepted the request Buddy.😉 Thank you so much & am glad you liked it.😊 Will defo PM you, when I update the 4th Part.

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divya17.8

@divya17.8

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Loved it...👍🏼

Plzz update next part soon.. waiting...

Nd thankxx for the pm...🤗

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Brilliant SS Shiva Di!Pls continue soon & pm Me!& Pls can U send Me a friend request?

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KP_DT_Fan

@KP_DT_Fan

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Hey Shivu,

What kind of a writer you are man.I have no words to express. The story is brilliant. I was totally lost into your story so much imagine my mom had to bring me back into reality. You are the best.Please update the next part fast.

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RishuDarling

@RishuDarling

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

I have read parts 1 to 3 today. Very entertaining. I love the inner thought conversations, the internal struggle. The desire to be correct and polite but opposite to that the wild burning passion of which both do not act upon (yet). Please do feel encouraged to write more, perhaps also not for IshRa alone. Mihir-Mihika (Mihir or MiMi?) When I read your stories its like I am reading a book and can understand the characters better. Eagerly waiting for the other parts. Signing up in advance for other stories you will write as well and you will receive my honest feedback 😊