ISHRA~~SS: Holi ka FirstNight. [Updated, Part3-Page8] - Page 3

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Nice One... You Must Continue... 😛
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Do continue yaar...🤗
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Nice continue.. Post soon n pm
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Originally posted by: ForbbidenLove


Thank you so much Malini.😃 Will be updating soon & will definitely PM you, no worries.👍🏼

thank u sooo much😃

i am already waiting 😉😉

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Originally posted by: .ProperPatola.

Really good start! Love the humour but I hope to see some serious convos in future if you are planning of having them...otherwise a light hearted one is always welcome...


I loved them monologues of Raman! Continue soon!


Thank you so much dear.😊 This will be a full fledged light hearted😳 short story, just 4/5 parts. However, I'm planning to write an 'FF' based on the current status of the show, "Giving a total contrast to how Ishu is in the show & in my story", shall see how that goes.
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Originally posted by: Santhu.The.King

Nice One... You Must Continue... 😛

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Do continue yaar...🤗



Originally posted by: SnigdhaGautam

Nice continue.. Post soon n pm

Originally posted by: malini96

thank u sooo much😃 i am already waiting 😉😉


THANK YOU SO MUCH GUYS.🤗😃 Not going to make you lovely people wait too longgg, 'Part 2' of the story will be updated later today.😉
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Holi ka FirstNight.😉

Part 2


=>> [@Pink is Ishita & @Purple is Ishita's Naughty Inner Voice.]


Arre Ishu, pati se patini, ithna matching matching. Ishu, Ishu, Oye Ishuu, are you listening to me? Ishita was lost in her own world seeing Raman standing in front of her, wrapped in a towel that too.

**Fashback** Ishita in the shower, scrubbing the colours of her body. Aiyooo Kadavule, why are these colours not going?., even my skin might start peeling off but this colours...AAAHHH. All because of that Ravana Kumar. LIAR LIAR pants, oh no no SAREE on fire. Who are you calling a liar now? Dr.Ishita Iyer, we are inside the bathroom not a conference hall with 1000 of people, that you asking me who am I referring too as a liar?Hahahaha, very funny,.. Why am I a liar now? hmmm for blaming Ravan for everything.

But he is the reason na. He is the one who applied the colours on me. & what were you doing princess? What do you mean by, what I was doing? What were you doing when Ravan was putting, haha no actually painting, the colours on you. Actually Hats off to Ravana Kumar yaar, just see the wonderful art work he did on your body, what a talent, see how nice the colours look on you. What was I doing matalab? Arre, first bloody scrub the colours off your ears, making me repeat everything twice. Why didn't you stop Ravan from applying the colours on you? Instead, you were standing there like a twilight fan girl who saw Robert Pattinson & Taylor lautner, with your eyes wide open, all ogling at tumhara Ravan Kumar.NO...NO I wasn't. I tried to move away but..but.. Move away? Don't make me kick you Ishu. Moving 2 steps away is not called moving away. Not even steps, 2 inches & you call that moving away.

Mein kya kar sakta hoon? He held me so tight, that I wasn't able to move away? Tum pagal ho? First you said you moved away, now you are saying he held you tight. Are you trying to make me go mad? Is this conversation even important now? Ji Haan. It's very important. I might even propose this to Amir for him to discuss about this on Satyamev Jayate. Tumane kya kiya.? Mein kiya tum ko Ravana Kumar say Pyaar. What rubbish? Pyaar var nahi. Don't be ridiculous. I'm not being ridiculous, you are. You should have seen your face during the dance. Your whole face was so red from blushing. Nahi, that was because of the colour it had turned my face red. Oh really...& now if I smack you also your face will turn red. Shall I?

Can you just let me shower in peace? Ok ok fine, shower shower. By the way, did you lock the door? Kya? Did you lock the door?What if suddenly Ravan comes in, just like how you always walk in when he is in the shower?he won't do that. How come you are so sure? Ok but still go and check if the door is locked na. I'm telling you right, he won't come. Arre, wait a minute, thoda sa doubt! Are you so sure that he won't come in or is that you want him to come in that's why you are refusing to check the lock. Ishita ignored the voice & continued with her shower. & visions of her Ravana Kumar and their dance was the only thing that had consumed her mind.

**Flashback of Dance** Ishita:Are you dancing with me as to show what a good husband you are in front of your business colleagues and friends or...or.. She looked away avoiding eye contact. Instead of answering, Raman took a step towards her, and all at once, everything happened too quickly to even make sense of it.

One second he was standing three feet away from her, and in the next he had a hand on her hip and was pulling her close. Ishita wanted to fight his grip and she actually was... through her thoughts though. Leaning in close to her, he took the colours in both his hands and started from the tip of her fingers & slowly made his way up her arm, her shoulders & he slowly turned her around, making her face him. Ishita's eyes were closed but when she did not feel Raman's hands anymore, she opened her eyes only to see Raman staring at her. He was staring at her so intensely, that it felt like he might just devour her any second. Ishita with a confused look...it wasn't a confused look for, "what are you doing?" but it was more for, "why did you stop what you were doing?". Raman cupped her face with colours in his hands & Ishita at once just shut her eyes and felt Raman remove his hands. She understood. Raman wanted to see her emotions through her eyes. Well with 100 over people staring at you, there's only so much you can do right. Ishita opened her eyes slowly & again Raman cupped her face with both his hands and started applying the colour on her forehead, nose and neck. He than took the colour & applied it to his cheeks. Ishita was left wondering, with his bizarre behaviour. And before she could even signal him to ask him about it, Raman leaned close to her with the tip of their noses touching, he gave his famous heart melting smile before coloring Ishita's cheeks with his. I mean come on yaar, who uses their hands nowadays, hands are so mainstream. Cheek to Cheek coloring is the new trend. WOOOHOOO, Yay! the crowd started cheering & clapping breaking Raman & Ishita from each others trans.

**End of Flashback** Mrs Raman Kumar Bhalla, you've been in the shower for almost 40 mintues, are you done? Can we leave? Ishita came back to reality. Oh shit! Kya? I forgot to bring my clothes yaar. In a hurry, I just grabbed the towel. Oh god, what am I going to do now? I've got an idea. Kya idea? Why don't you just call Krishna? Krishna? Arre yaar, Krishna, lord.. lord Krishna.. Ishu for crying out loud, you're a hindu, don't embarrass your Appa-Amma by asking me who is lord Krishna. Oh sorry sorry, I got confused. haan lord krishna, so? call him for what? Ishuuu, you know he has lots of saree in stock, I'm sure he will be able to give you one now. You think you are very funny is it? YES, of course. Mere liya no doubt,on how funny I am. Ishita starts hitting her forehead.

Can you tell me what to do now? Hmmm, why don't you just go out, take your clothes and come. Tum bachcha bana rahe ho! Raman will be in the room, how do you expect me to go in a towel? Fine..Don't go. After some time, he will come inside. Aiyooo kadavule. It's been so long, I'm sure he would have changed and went out by now. Did you hear any noise outside? I'm sure his not in the room, just go, get your clothes and change.Thika... Ishita wrapped the towel around her and slowly made her out, she got a little braver as the room was quiet, which made her think that Raman was definitely not in the room until, she saw him standing by the cupboard. and she froze. Her brain was telling her to run back into the shower but her feet refused to listen. & she just stood still, until she heard someone call out, "Ishita".


[How was it guys? hahaha,😆 I know you would have thought, that it would start from the whole towel scene & what will happen after that. But like I mentioned earlier, I'm not going to rush with the Romance part. Waiting&Teasing makes everything worthwhile.😃 But no worries, Part 3 is definitely going to be super duper ROMANTIC & STEAMING HOT not forgetting the humor as well. Let's see how Raman & Ishita's inner voice tease/torture them even more. Hope you guys enjoyed this 2nd part/ Do leave your likes & valuable comments. Love you guys.🤗]

Edited by ForbbidenLove - 11 years ago
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HilFrickinLarious.

My favourite part... Hands are so mainstream. Paisa Vasul.
Edited by eternalasha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantabulous work Shiva!!!
Loved it.. again a very funny and blunt inner voice 😆
You got me alright! I thought scene would continue from towel scene!
But anyways with IshRa I am more than happy to wait for part 3 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love the inner voices, can't wait for Part 3 - do update soon.😊

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