ISHRA~~SS: Holi ka FirstNight. [Updated, Part3-Page8]

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[This is my first attempt at writing a story on ISHRA. Thought of making it into an 'SS'. Had tried my hands on making their VMs & Webisode Series,😃 so decided to give this a try as well. I'm a full on full tamilian like our 'Ishita Iyer'😉 with no proper knowledge of hindi, it was all just learned through years & years of watching bollywood movies and shows. Therefore if I have made any mistakes in the hindi dialogues, please mujhse maaf karo.😒] As for the story, I did not want to rush their Romance in part 1 itself, so decided to take it slowly & also have added a touch of humour to it.]

With Love,

Shiva❤️

Holi ka FirstNight

Part 1


Index

1st part: Page 1

2nd Part: Page 5

3rd Part: Page 8


=>> [@Blue is Raman & @Green is Raman's Naughty Inner Voice.]


PERFUMEEE! That's it, PERFUME! It had to be the damn perfume screamed Raman, a silent scream though just for him to hear. STOP IT Raman STOP IT, you've got to quit thinking about her! You are driving me CRAZYYY now, the voice begged... But...But... I'm sure, it wasn't the perfume, the scent was different...it was more like...more like. More like what you idiot? It was more like her! & may I ask, who is this 'Her' you're referring to now?

Arre yaar, you know, HER... that DR. Is..Is..Ish...Ishi... Ishita. Thank god, tumhara Jhansi Ki Rani, naam is short, lekin it might have taken you another 100 years to complete her name. Kya tumhara problem, Raman?!! The donkey who had presented you with the "The Best CEO" award should be thrown into a tank full of crocodiles. Tum best CEO nahi tum BRAINLESS CEO. Ever since you came back from the Holi event, you've become MAD..PAGAL. Just look at yourself, still wrapped in your towel for the past 20 minutes, why now?, waiting for Christmas oh no no, waiting for the next Holi is it?

[Raman immediately got up from the bed and headed towards the cupboard to grab his clothes., in the process however, he banged into almost everything that was in his way.]

"What the hell is wrong with me today?" [Raman Kumar was no longer the 'Ravana Kumar' it seemed like he was turning into 'Ram Kumar' now.] & there we go again, how many times will you ask the same question MR Ravan, you're giving me a headache... [Raman went into trans mode while taking out his clothes from the cupboard. As visions of the dance kept replaying in his head, out of the blue, a smile had dawned his face.]

How? How did I fail to notice her divine flawless face, with her eyes replaced by the stars that was so bright, it was shining brightly even under the board daylight, her perfectly shaped lips that could drive any man crazy, her symmetrically aligned nose...Symmetrically aligned nose?,say what? Arre, tum mathematics gold medalist mein janta hoon & 'Geometry' was your strongest & most favorite subject, lekin you don't have to go all technical on her nose yaar! [Ignoring the voice, Raman just continued...]

& her sweet scent... I'm telling you, that was the reason why I just stood still in-between the dance. The moment, I grabbed her saree pall and pulled her close to me, leaving not even 0.01cm of space... *Aayee Na mathematics gold medalist, murmured the voice, this time rather silently though* Even the wind could not go through us, despite the clothes being barriers, I could feel the warmth of her silky smooth skin and seriously who needs bhaang yaar, her scent was thousand times stronger if only...if only, it wasn't for the noise that the stupid crowd made, I would have never let go off her. ACCHA! Mere liye thoda sa doubt! Doubt?Kya doubt? In this very room surrounded by walls where you have all the privacy in the world, you will maintain 6 feet distance from her but in front of 100 over people, you don't want to let her go! Where should I go & bang my head? bloody brainless CEO of the year! Mein kya kar sakta hoon, my vision had been blurred all this while, by the leftover bits&pieces of my past but now I'm no longer blinded by the past. MR Raman Kumar Bhalla, if your vision was blurred than you should have seen the eye specialist and bought yourself a good pair of specs, so you that you can see clearly na?! Anyways I hope that now, tumhara vision se koi problem nahi? Arre bolo na?, tumhara vision koi problem nahi na?

NAHI NAHI NAHI, [Raman screamed as loud as possible.] FANTASTIC! Than I suppose you should be able to see your Jhansi Ki Rani staring at you? & oh, Mr CEO of the year, don't forget to tighten the knot of your towel in case it falls, we don't want Jhansi Ki Rani's vision being blurred na!

KYAAA? [Raman turned around & there she was staring directly at him, or more like through him...Raman's breathing went still, he looked at her, then up to the ceiling and around the room, at the same time fighting hard to keep his composure but then when he shifted his gaze back to her, his jaw dropped and he just froze.] "Perfect couple na tum dono, seems like both Husband & wife took a oath of substituting clothes with towels is it?", the voice commented in a teasing tone. [Wrapped in just a medium sized towel barely reaching her knees with water droplets dripping from the tips of her hair having some sort of a secret race between them, the water droplets made their way down her slender neck and finally making their way towards her cleavage before they disappeared.]

"Seems like you both are, all set to play Holi part 2?" said the voice before bursting into a fit of laughter, [breaking Raman's trans.] "Mein kya karoon" [Raman murmured in his mind voice trying to look away but failing miserably as his eyes refuse to focus it's gaze upon anything else expect for his 'WET' Jhansi Ki Rani. Time stood still...he was not sure if it was seconds, minutes or hours that had passed], "Ishita" he called out finally breaking the silence. &...

Should I continue YHMIANS?

P.S. Feedbacks & Criticisms Most Welcomed.😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome yaar...
Plz Do continue soon
I can't wait to read the next chapter
And i f u can plzzz pm me 🤢 😭
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Loved it, couldn't stop laughing at Raman's "inner voice". Would love to read the rest, please update soon.😊
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Aahhh...!!!!!!... no no no ... u cannot staaappp derrr... cotinue continue continue. ... pppllleeeaaassseee
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Pls continue loved it👏👏So hot
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Continue??? Yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai
You must continue ... I dying to know what happens next
I loved Raman's inner voice 😛 very funny and blunt
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haww...pm.me next update please...that means.definitely continue
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Awesome...👍🏼
Do continue... nd plzz pm me if possible...
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Thanks dear😊 & will update soon.
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Originally posted by: -Raz-

haww...pm.me next update please...that means.definitely continue


Hehehe, of course will PM you dear😃 & thanks.

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