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Posted: 11 years ago
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Holi ka FirstNight.😉

Part 3


[I'm so sorry guys, what was suppose to be an One Day trip to 'Batam' extended into another 2 more days. Throughout the whole trip YHM forum was something that never left my mind. Though in the past I would have enjoyed the trips regardless of it being extended even for a week, this time somehow though I did enjoy, I couldn't wait to get back to the forum. At least if I had my laptop with me, it would have been better but anyways wifi was like shit at the hotel so it didn't matter. I'm glad to be back. I won't be able to sent out PMs right away as I literally just stepped into my house now back from the trip & the first thing I'm doing is updating the 'SS'. But as soon as I'm done with my stuff, will sent out the PMs. Truly sorry for making you guys wait for so long, and as a compensation, during my free time over at 'Batam' had strated with the 4th part though had started writing it, using my phone, there's lots of edits to be made as a phone is certainly not as convenient as a laptop when it comes to such things. Will try my best to post the 4th part by today instead of making you guys wait for another day.]

=>>[@Blue Raman ~~ @Pink Ishita]
=>>[@Green Raman's Naughty Inner Voice ~~ @Purple Ishita's Naughty Inner Voice.]

"Ishita..Ishita".. Arre Ishita nahi, Jhansi Ki Rani bol. Shut up yaar! "Ishita" "Haan Raman." "Why are you just standing? You might catch a cold, dry your hair." "Ji Raman. Thoda sa help."
Yeh kyaa hai? Nothing much, could you just help me with my suitcase Raman. Arre of course yaar.

Are you thinking, what I'm thinking? What in the F*** is going on with these two donkeys? Mind your language. Oye hello, don't teach how to talk. Keep your lectures with your Doctor oh sorry sorry dentist Ishita Iyer. Dushman! Whatever!! Can we just keep aside our fight and deal with these two love birds. Thika Thika
Both these bewakoofs are giving me a headache. Are you sure it's not from your hangover? Not funny. It wasn't meant to be.
You have to pay for this bloody CEO of the year.
Because you married that Jhansi Ki Rani, I'm stuck with this non-stop lecturing freak. Such a insensitive jerk. Can you just focus? Yeah yeah, whatever. Tell you what, you deal with her & I will deal with him. Achaa! the only good thing that has ever come out from your mouth today. AAAHHH bloody hell. Anyways just few days ago, they wanted to murder one another & now they are acting like Sunny Leone's Cousins. I think they went to watch Ragini MMS 2, that's why these two seem sooo comfortable being wrapped in just the towel. Hmmm, maybe?! Ok ok, let's get back to our work. Stop ordering me ok! Tum meri biwi nahi. I would rather die than get married to you. OH WOW! Let's get married right now. F*** YOU! Same to you.

Ishu..Ishuuu. Arre meri Ishita Iyer... Mrs Ishita Raman Kumar Bhallaaa. Kya? Why are you shouting, I'm not deaf. Well, you were 5 seconds ago, until you heard the name Raman.
What is your problem now? My problem, my problem... YOU ARE MY PROBLEM. Kyon??? Kyoun! Are you the same Ishu who shut her eyes tight, everytime she saw her Ravan wearing the towel.
& have you no shame? Still in your towel, cooly drying your hair. Chi chi chi, aiyooo murugaaa. What has happened to our Ishu?
By the way, you have beaten meri Amma in the overacting category. Raman is not in the room, he went to the bathroom to change. He's a good man, stop talking bad about him. ME? I am talking bad about him! Tum bachcha bana rahe ho! Yeah yeah, you're totally right because I was the one who gave him the name 'Ravan', who slapped, pushed him, argued & fought with him. You're absolutely right Ishu, I'm the one who has got it all wrong.

**Meanwhile...in the Bathroom**
How long will you keep checking yourself? Just because the poor mirror can't say anything, doesn't give you the right to torture it Ravana Kumar. Arre yaar! By the way, do you think I should shave? For what? Looks like the beard has grown quite a bit. Nahi, it's perfectly fine. No yaar, see the hair has grown quite a bit, think I shall shave it off. Kyon Raman? Afraid that tumhara Jhansi Ki Rani will be hurt when you kiss her. OUCHHH! Arre Raman, be careful. don't want to leave a scar on that handsome face na. What rubbish? I'm shaving because, I want too! That has got nothing to do with her. Stop with your imaginations. Hey hellooo, at least my imaginations can be said out aloud unlike your imaginations oh sorry sorry, I mean WILD IMAGINATIONS.
Kya wild imaginations? Hmmm, the ones you've been having after the holi dance. HAHAHAHAHAHA, you do know that, there's no way you can hide anything from me my dearest CEO of the year.
Thika Thika, go on continue with your shaving.

Raman comes out from the bathroom, wiping his face & sees Ishita standing near the fan drying her hair still wrapped in the towel. His gazed fixed upon his Jhansi ki Rani's glowing face, her exposed shoulders., Who am I kidding?!LOL He was thinking about the treasures beyond the pink towel which at that moment seemed to be his biggest dushman. Just than Ishita turns to take her clothes from the suitcase & spots Raman. I'm really sorry, thought you would have changed by now. It's my fault, should have knocked before entering. Raman, I should be the one saying sorry for taking so long. I will be done in a minute. Can't help it when you've got such a beautiful luscious long hair, it will definitely need time to dry na. Raman instantly blushes upon realizing what he had just blurt out.
Vah kyaa kar rahaa hai? Oh god. Oyee brainless CEO, why the hell are you blushing? Blushing is meant for the girls na. Wipe that bloody blush of your face & stop disgracing us Men. Don't listen to him Raman, his such a male chauvinist. Who the hell invited you now? You women can't stop poking your nose into other peoples affair is it. You...You... I just hate you. Wow, thank you. Keep the hate coming yaar. Raman was about to turn and walk out, when Ishita called him.

"Raman." "Yeah Ishita." Mere liya suitcase ka zip is stuck. Let me see. Raman walks over to where Ishita is standing with the suitcase & tries opening the suitcase. Both Raman & Ishita are working on the suitcase Well, like in all the indian movies, we all know what's going to happen next right. Ishita's towel knots loosens & finally gives way.Aiyooo. Ishita screams covering face and Raman in shock turns away immediately. Arre Ishu...pagal ho tum. Is covering your face the most important thing right now? Hai hai Raman, dil bole hadippa! Raman without turning around bends down picks up the towel & passes it to Ishita and she within a quick second wraps it around her body, grabs her saree and starts to walk off when Raman holds her hands & stops her not only her but for a second Ishita's heartbeat too stopped. Everything around them stood still. She could feel him getting closer to her as each second passed by. But strangely, more than feeling nervous, she was feeling excited. EXCITED? You should know how Women are. One touch & everything comes crumpling down. It's our disadvantage but yet that's also our Biggest Advantage. He put his arms around her and she turned to face him. He reached over and touched her face, hesitantly, gently, she was amazed by his touch questioning herself on how is it that behind this so called arrogant, insensitive man came about a touch as soft as feather. He brushed a strand of hair from her face. And when their eyes met, just for a fleeting moment, a tiny wisp of time that hung in the air like fireflies in summer skies, she wondered if she was in love with him. Raman eyes were so darn INTENSE&POWERFUL that no hands were needed. His eyes were doing all the work. Leaning in, he kissed her. His lips were soft soft, and he was surprisingly gentle. Maybe it was simply that he'd caught her by surprise, but even so, Ishita found herself kissing him back. The kiss didn't last long, and it wasn't the kind of earthshaking, soul-destroying kiss common in movies these days; but even so, she was glad it happened, and for whatever reason, she realized it was exactly what she'd wanted him and had been waiting for him to do. In the instant their lips first met, there was a flicker of something almost electrical that made Raman believe the feeling would last forever until... KNOCK KNOCK..."Bhai, Bhabhi dinner is ready, everyone is waiting for you both, please jaldi aao na."

[Actually the "Whole Towel Scene" was not suppose to end up with just a kiss.LOL😆 As I was writing the 4th part of the SS, during my trip, had decided to cut that part out and change into a lighter one. Didn't one the 'Steaming Sequence' to seem too artificial. And since there's only 2 more parts left to this 'SS', and it would end with ISHRA doing you know what. Felt it would be more suitable to leave the Steaming scenes for Part 4 & Part 5. Don't Kill me. Actually it's the trip's fault, if not for that, my brain would have never diverted.😉 & Like I said earlier, motto for this SS is , "Slow & Steady Wins the Race".😃 Hope you guys enjoy this 3rd part as well. Do leave your valuable Likes & Comments. Love you YHMIANS.🤗] -Shiva
Edited by ForbbidenLove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arrey yaar😊..I loved it❤️❤️..You are so awesomee😃👏..You write so well dear⭐️..Esp love the inner voices and the way they think😃😃..esp Raman's naughty inner voice😉😉.."dil bole hadippa"😆😆..When ishu's ahem ahem came off..😆😆..Shivaaa😃...you rock👍🏼..Aaahh..the third part esp was sooo romantic😳❤️..So sweeet of you to PM it to me😊..Please continue soon😃..and thanks alot for the PM dear..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg... Where am i ??? Ishra's heaven???

Thank u sweetie...this is forya 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful...

nicely written...👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmmm... Steaminess factor increasing.
Do continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It took me solid 45 mins to read this man...I had to keep my fone down n tend to my cheeks which were hurting due to excessive smiling. .. hoye hoye... I just love this ff...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: simples28

Arrey yaar😊..I loved it❤️❤️..You are so awesomee😃👏..You write so well dear⭐️..Esp love the inner voices and the way they think😃😃..esp Raman's naughty inner voice😉😉.."dil bole hadippa"😆😆..When ishu's ahem ahem came off..😆😆..Shivaaa😃...you rock👍🏼..Aaahh..the third part esp was sooo romantic😳❤️..So sweeet of you to PM it to me😊..Please continue soon😃..and thanks alot for the PM dear..😊


Awww, thank you so so much Aishu.😳❤️🤗 Hahahaha it will be great if there a Dil Bole Hadippa scene fro Raman in the show as well.😆 & it's my pleasure dear, I'm glad you loved it.😃❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: peric

nice ... continue soon


Thank you.😊
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Thanks Jojo.😊
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Originally posted by: 13MEGHA05

wonderful...

nicely written...👏


Thank you so much dear.😊

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