ISHRA~~SS: Holi ka FirstNight. [Updated, Part3-Page8]

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: malini96
That was sooopeer awesome work
U nailed it
U should tease us this yaar...
And plzzz continue soon
I can't get enough of ur updates even if u 10 times a day

Am really glad you liked it dear.😊 HAHAHAHAHA, "Slowly & Steady wins the race" this is my moto in regards to this 'SS'.😆 & won't keep you waiting for too long, part 3 will be out tmr night.😉

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: RaYaKapoor
Woah!! Im literally ROFLing.. Shit.. The inner voices are hilarious!

Freakin Awesome..
Do continue!!

It's more like the 'Inner Voices' are the Hero&Heroine of this story.😆 I'm glad you like it. Part 3 will be out tmr.😉

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Artemis_1122
I love it!! the inner dialogues are hilarious 🤣
and the rest is very romantic. 😉 😳
looking forward to the rest.

Thank you so much dear.😃 More Romance+Humor coming your way soon.😆 Part 3 will be out tmr.

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: simples28
Wow Shiva😃😃 read both parts in one go..Loved it❤️..esp the way you have expressed Ishu's thoughts and emotions running through her mind😃..plus its super hottt😉😉😉..pls PM me when you update..😊😊 Would love to read more😊

YAY! I'm so happy to see your comment here Aish. I really missed seeing your wonder posts & comments.❤️😃 This has now boost up my level to churn out a even more awesome Part 3 for you all. & of course I would PM you.👍🏼 & thanks dear am glad you loved it.😊 Part 3 will be out tmr night with the double the MASTI from the 'Inner Voices'.😆

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Sweety_98
Enjoyed it to its peak 😆😆😆
Its not fair to make us wait...😭
Loved the humor part...the most.
Well done yaar...You have done an awesome job.👏👏🤗

No worries my dear, Part 3 will be out tmr night.😃 & thank you so much Sweety, am glad you loved & enjoyed it.🤗😳 It would be nice to see this humor in the show as well.😆

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Parvathi12
Hmmm... I dont like you... you are eviiilll... haye haye poor ishu... she toh will go mad man... n yeah.. I thought ull continue from the towel scene only.. par koyi baat nahi... cant wait for the next part... you are tohthe awesome. ... n I love ur style of writing... thanks for the pm man

But I'm not as evil as Raman Kumar in the show.LOL😆 Wanted to introduce, Ishu's inner voice thus started from the flashback. & don't worry dear, part 3 will be out tmr with lots more intense romance&humor.😉😉 "Slow and steady wins the race", my motto for this 'SS', hehehe.😃 & I'm glad you loved it dear.😊

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Npadz
Hahahahaha that was hilarious! Loved their naughty inner voices 😆
Looking forward to the steamy romance 😉 . Please PM when you update 😊

Heyyy! Thanks dear, I'm glad you loved it.😃 Yes, Yes more steamy romance with humor is coming up very soon.😆 Part 3 will be out tmr night. & I would definitely PM.😊

Edited by ForbbidenLove - 11 years ago