Eagle ..Goal.. Finish Line - Completed page 16 added a missing para! - Page 12

hahhaha thank you thank you for your muaahhhsss

RagKor is always fire fire and when I imagine Meejay my lappy burns ha ha

Precap... he he he thadaplo...

OK Part B title any guess

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Awww tooo beautiful ...I'm blushing now.😆

Jealous raghav 😛

Ufff I can't wait for part B 😊 I know something something is there ..😉😃😃

Thank u sumi dear ❤️

thanks Kavi

blushing blushing ha ha ha

happy I blend jealous RagKor cute moments?

something something ting ting 😉

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Part 9

Thanks a lot dear for such a wonderful update I am very upset after the news of Vj sir return in Udaan but after reading ur story I feel so good Again a nice update Finally our lion is raging & eagle & lion both end Hira Laal evilness Raghav is in action & teach lesson to Hira Laal was just and finally our marathon runner 501 win the race Eagarly waiting for next update because next update is surely full of RagKor moments

Part 10 A

Fantastic as always Enjoyed each & every moments Really enjoyed to see jealous Raghav & also jealous Chakor Both RagKor prossessive for each other Loved Chakor gave credit to Raghav and just because of raghav she won the race All family members are looking great I imagine chakor in lehanga & Raghav is tuxedo & lastly raghav babu want to go home soon just to romance chakor & never control himself Thanks for updating soon & now waiting for next update soon that is surely full of RagKor romance

Just waiting for next update

And thanks dear for posting soon it was much needed

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The hospital scene was very heartbreaking . It's sad to see Rati' break down, her mourn & want to die as she doesn't want to be burden by anyone, but the way Ragkor consoled & encouraged her & specially, the boys did a commendable job. I must appreciate Arjun for his knowledge & his sapience & the way he motivated Rati with giving the example of Monica Seles. Even when Chakor was not getting confidence as being a mother if she could be able to leave the children, then Arjun reassured her that they will take care of their angels & motivated her by referring to Mary Kom. Loved the employees & their wives, unconditionally they came forward to help Ragkor.

I loved the Chakor's lines to Rati in hospital when she was warning to her not to participate in the marathon "I don't worry about that as I'm used to it " & "I know I'll be harmed but with Raghav with me nothing can come near me "

The face off between Raghav with Rathod & the officials was tremendously outstanding. Hats off to Raghav for handling the whole situation with so much patience & intelligence. Loved his line "when you were in power you did a wrong thing when things were right " & showed Rathod the mirror. He shook all the marathoning officials by his outspoken. I just visualized Vj in the entire conversation. It was so beautifully written & the dialogues are just wow .His teary eyes brought tears to my eyes hearing that " Let 501 get back to track " . Ultimately his efforts & our wish got success. He is an example of a ideal husband, though I'm slightly biased towards Suraj & will always be but you made Raghav character so much perfect as a son, husband & father that I compel to love, adore & respect him more & more.

I just tried to imagine Lal's face, hearing that Chakor, the 501 is returning to marathoning . Loved Raghav's possessiveness & the entire massage session. It was very nice & once again described everything in details . He arranged every possible thing which make her comfortable right from the Jacuzzi tub to the mini vanity van. Loved the four boys were taking care of Chakor, specially Lalit took the responsibility of keeping her shoes safely. The "Chakoriya" reminds a lot, not only her but us too.

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Amazing Sumi di..I read it yday before sleeping n it instantly cheered me up,a perfect sterss buster update👏Ragkor,d boys&d roses all of dem were a sheer treat😉boys were so adorable n Ragkor n d boy's shopping, Raghav choosing a yellow saree for ChakorRakor moment before d felicitation ceremonyChakor in a lahenga n Raghav in a tuxedowas imagining MeeJaythn our zealous Raghavawww such a cuitiepie poosesive husband he is

Chakor's speech d way she spoke abt Raghav n thanked himRaghav's reaction so touching n heart warmingcan't wait for d next part...it's going to b sintilating for sure..d way it started it's quiet clear eagerly waiting..

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Again a lovely part, with thrill , suspense and flow of events bang on.

lovely , little filmy writeup that keep us in edge till she wins a race

its was like movie...i mean in sports movie we know our team would win but the thrill in it, the way one reaches finish line , that was full on filmy

poor boys hurt, with tears till she continued with his words ringing around her , I can visualise❤️

dont look back , focus on finish line and i am sure my eagle will win..thats lovable.

you gave a conclusion for neha, rati too..good.

omg, before partB comes only i was like visualising Ragkor in part A and going 😳☺️...😆

I loved it all. be it the shopping or the dressing up in room, the venue nokjhok, felicitation, her thankyou speech, Aa kissing her eyes, family in full matching dress, the happy day for all of them, and the final sneak peak .

loved it all.

oh the boys chose for their mom&dad, lovely, then Raghav choose that yellow saree for chakor, again nostalgia moment, that dream of his which was still a dream alone ..

thanks for going to fulfill it again.

then the dressing up in room,loved that small moment, naughty raghav babu, he too is waiting long.

wait Raghav babu, we too waiting, sumi as asked to wait till partB..lol

then all the praises she and arjun got

and then her thankyou speech, i loved how she thanked all and specially thanked raghav.

so true, without your loved one support, one cant fly high. This time its Raghav who did that.

then loved the jealous raghav babu and possesive chakoriya..lol

Rati conclusion was good. happy that our birdie and her handsometa indeed put evil down and make goodness prevail.

then coming back to their back home. nice ...

waiting for the sneak peak..you indeed teased us with it..lol

avoiding quotes.

a big smile on my face when I read your comment...

yes to be honest whenever I remember Chakor and her race her simple that pink and black beads thread and the orange cloth on her wrist always flashes. I am happy and trust me i felt too too emotinal when I wrote the marathoning part especially the line Ace Runner 501... 😭

ha ha filmy type 😆😆 I know it was but happy all liked it...

Raaghav has to be in action na... and I like Govind and Raagahv bonding too...

the boys yes, Ar always like Chatur Chakoriya...

about my chweeto never leaves a moment to kiss his mumma 😉 making his daddy J😆.

the dream

Ragahv babu was very patient till his eagle landed, then he cant stop himself but yeah thoda aur thadapna padega!!!

about jealousiness and Raghav action it was Kavi and Smita request so tried to blend in and I love RR's action na..

sneak peak he he will post in some time when the temperatures are soaring high or should I wait till late night😉😉😉