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Beautiful story Sumi. The race parts were thrilling, loved how Raghav convinced Rathod and how everyone helped Chakor in her win.

The happy family scnes and shopping trip were soothing, it was cute that the boys chose Ragkor clothes.

Possessive Ragkor was fun, I could imagine Meejay in this scene.

Part 10B was a surprise treat, love the continuity in the progress of Ragkor across all your stories. They have opened up to each other, not just them, you too have become adept at right hot yet clean scenes.

Originally posted by: nemo316

Beautiful story Sumi. The race parts were thrilling, loved how Raghav convinced Rathod and how everyone helped Chakor in her win.

The happy family scnes and shopping trip were soothing, it was cute that the boys chose Ragkor clothes.

Possessive Ragkor was fun, I could imagine Meejay in this scene.

Part 10B was a surprise treat, love the continuity in the progress of Ragkor across all your stories. They have opened up to each other, not just them, you too have become adept at right hot yet clean scenes.

Thanks so much Mai 🤗🤗🤗

Your words mean a lot.

@red bold 🙏🙏🙏 this means a lot to me. Thanks Mai for your patient reading.