Eagle ..Goal.. Finish Line - Completed page 16 added a missing para! - Page 11

It was a suspence thriler with hurdles everywhere & different characters overcoming it Mohit, Govind, Arjun, Rohan & our hero Raghav😎

Chakor kept the promise to Raghav & won the marathon😊

Finally the evils got punishment👏

Loved the family moment😊

Waiting for next

Whoa, whistle whistle, fantafab...its just everything...

I will not go into any details this time... let everybody read and soak in that feeling😳😳 is all I can say...

Loved the marathon, ragkor, boys, packaging scene, thread and black cloth., lion in josh, 501, basically everything...

Precap is just sooo😳😳

Thats so fast... thank you so so much Sonali

feeling overwhelmed that you really enjoyed it...

Next update is ready!!!! tell me when you want me to post!!!😉

Nikkkiii deary deary am so excited seeing this.

loved that you loved all ...

Yess Lion in Josh, all and 501

precap 😆😆😆 all ready tell me when you want???

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Fantafab Sumi di..frm start to end it was a complete package..filled with👏👏 drama,suspense,thrill n entertainment EVERYBODY WAS AT THEIR VERY BEST...Lion Raghav n Eagle Chakor, Aa,Ar to Lalit,Rohan,Mohit everyone rocked

Raghav giving tht black thread to Chakor,d way he nabbed n punished his maidam's culprits n his advice to her not to look back while running n d way he celebrated his birdie's win😊😊😕

N for our marathon champion Chakor👏👏once again she proved age is just a number.. will,determination n courage r d things tht matters d most

Ragkor moments were as always beautiful n delightful

N d boys were simply outstanding..Aa,Ar,Rohan,Lalit were just too good..

A super intriguing n super thrilling updatewaiting waiting for d next one

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But ur stories gives me some relaxation ...enlighten our mood by ur stories...

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Ur updating too fast ...thank u so much 🤗

All I can say is this story is beautiful and emotions are respected...

One thing dont make ragkor old soon😃 want to see more of their cute family & ragkor moments 😊

Awwwhhh next part ufff 😛😉 can't wait 😆 pls update soon...

Thank u so much ❤️

Thanks Kavi

Happy I could lighten your mood.

Well about the show better not to talk as I have completely resigned long back and am happy with my FicFam... enjoying and infact living with them.

Ragkor old no no never Budda is just by name but always handsometa😉..

Next part tell me when you want Tonight????

Yes yes I want I'm ready to read

Final Part 10 (A)

Pompous - Celebration and ceremony

It was indeed a big day for the RR family...

Chakor was being felicitated, Arjun won his races got the overall championship, Aayansh appreciated for his smartness and it was the roses second birthday and the Lions too as eversince the roses were born they would celebrate together.

The family went for a big shopping . The staff at the mansion were given money to buy best outfits for them.

They bought similar outfits for the whole family for the birthday and it was time to buy for the felicitation function.

It was all boys selection and RagKor could not say anything.

They chose a black Tuxedo for daddy matching with them and a red heavily brocaded lehenga for chakor and for the roses. It was too heavily worked but the boys were adamant that she will look beautiful in that though Chakor wanted something light, but the boys' verdict was final.

While the boys were selecting, Raaghav was going through other sections and one caught his eyes...he asked the sales girl to show him . It was a mesmerizing plain hand woven yellow muslin saree, the ultimate luxury very light and thin matched with a spaghetti thin strap black brocaded blouse. It had a matching satin inskirt too... He just closed his eyes touching the saree... Aayash came running to him. Daddy we have finished selecting, when he saw the yellow saree... this is too plain he said... yes indeed she is too plain and that's why I fell for her he said within himself. He saw a sheer white shirt too.

He went with the boys paid for it. All the big brown shopping bags were stacked in the dickey along with a zipped covered packet. What's this Aa asked, its my tracks and towels he said. They drove back

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They were getting ready for the felicitation ceremony which was organized in the Sports Council, Shimla.

Chakor was in the heavily brocaded red lehenga... She was struggling to button her low back blouse when Raaghav walked in half dressed in his Black Tux. I am just unable to wear it on. I would have been happy with a simple T, these boys...when he looked up at Chakor, he could not complete his sentence. His gaze on her back was eating her with shy. Red ... he came behind slowly soothing her back, keeping his chin on her neck you look so beautiful, snaking through her waist. She was shuddering...

Raaghav, his hot breath was making her blush...its getting late, can you please button my...lowering her eyes... hmmm purposely he buttoned it slowly looking at the mirror, she was biting her lips... he placed soft kisses, turning her towards him.. Should we go he asked pulling her closer.. They will be waiting she said. Me too he said... its quite long...chup ...the boys will come...

She helped him with the Tux.. and he was looking absolutely handsome and Masculine. You look so good she said. Hmmm

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Mumma daddy, came running the princes who were matching with their daddy's Tux. They both quickly moved away... The roses were like little angles in their red lehenga matching their mummy with cute ponies and matching clips and accessories. The whole family was looking picture perfect.

Mummy you look like an angel from the sky jumped AA kissing her eyes... Raaghav babu was J ...Raaghav babu ha ha you cannot do anything he said running...

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Chakor and Arjun were in the limelight...

She was like an Apsaras from the heaven. Ravishing in the red lehenga. None could move her eyes off her and Raaghav was in his black Tuxedo, smart and there were many girls who were literally drooling over him. The mansion staff were there taking care of the roses and the boys.

She was the most important person so the media and other dignitaries were around her. The Event management guy came forward receiving her and offering his hand to lead her to the stage. Raaghav was not so happy about it, he does not mind the limelight but none to lay hands on his maidam. What is the need for the guy to take her up . Grhhh!!! He gave a glaring look at that guy, Neechey aao lalla, grhh. Chakor realized and was smiling at the jalanbabu...

Mr Rathod, applauded her grit and her fighting spirit to stand for the uprightness and appreciate her hard work and her motivation. He also briefed the crowd as to how few corporates in the name of sponsorship had played with young children and her life too. Inspite of threat she rose high. He talked about the arrest of Hira Laal. She got her award and the price money. She was asked to speak few words!

Firstly, I thank all who have come here to felicitate me. I thank Mr. Rathod and the Marathoning body for giving me an opportunity to get back to tracks. I thank my sons, and their friends Lalit and Rohan and my family and my extended plantation members in taking care of my little girls looking at Kaaka, Govind and the two baby sitters.

Finally, she was in tears, emotional looking at Raaghav... Behind every man's success there is a woman ... but ... for me ...Pointing her hands to him!!! Without HIM I WOULD NOT HAVE BEEN HERE. THANK YOU RAAGHAV FOR MAKING ME FLY HIGH. He was all smiles and tears looking at her. Giving her a flying kiss...

She came down to give the price money to Rati who was in the wheel chair. She felt emotional, hugged her...the whole crowd was giving her a standing ovation. She went up and thanked all the dignitaries.

The guy again came forward to bring her down, when Raaghav doubled up and held her hands, smiling at the guy.. Raaghav was all eyes on her. She quickly held his hands while Raaghav wrapped his hand around her waist...

Uff the guy may eat you he said going to her ears... I feel like just popping his and others eyes out.. she smiled hmm. Jalkud... Hmm yes I am...holding her tight...

Did you look there...Look at the girls drooling over you she said. Oh is it! let me look he said smirking. I did not notice... Wow cool chicks bey...he waved at them...she punched with her elbow.. I will kill you if you look at anyone she said.. Hmmm looks like my birdie is too possessive about me telling her in her ears. Chup.. But, secretly squeezed her waist, None can come near my Maidam... You are looking so beautiful...and...****...brushing her ears... She turned red.

I feel so chocking in this Tux, lets go home please... Arey Rowdy babu just few minutes...

It was a fabulous day with loads of celebrations, visitors, photo sessions and they took lovely pic of the family.. They lifted the roses while the boys stood beside them hugging them. All smiles... They were awesome.

Girija warded away the evil eyes with kaala teeka and special aarti...

The boys were very tired, kissed RagKor and their roses and were off to their rooms happy.

Sneak peak into P_______ (BOLD AND MATURE)

He was in sheer white shirt with just one button locked and a simple white low tied pyjama...wind blowing, stuck to his torso revealing his toned packs...holding the railings looking up to the full moon.. smiling

She cupped his face... why did you not give this to me!! she kissed him...

Pushing her to the walls pressing her more he brushed his hands all over her and she closed her eyes. She slid her hands down his bare torso.. to his waist to the pyjamas... holding the knot.

Open your eyes, go ahead ...he husked...she bit her lips...

Oh Ok let's stop and go... moving back he said

Ufff, what happened????

😆😆😉 did anything happen??? tantantaaannn onway!!!!

Boys...cutie cutie pies...love AA when he kisses her eyes

Ragkor... fire fire and fire

Rose's...sweet bundles to be eaten off

Felicitation...very well written and thanking raghav... the best part

Precap... the lesser I say the better...ufff

In short can't wait for part B and you know it😳