Eagle ..Goal.. Finish Line - Completed page 16 added a missing para!

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The Eagle...Goal... Finish Line... Still his birdie is cutiepie...

PART I


PEPPING

It was a day after the exams...

Arjun was very very upset, he was completely disheartened... tears ebbing..

AAyansh was feeling sad for him but...

If only mummy was there, you could have won AA said..

Hmm... but mumma is right... She has too much to take care of.

She prepares everything for us, does not allow even Mausi to do, she takes care of AdAn...

We should not trouble her, but Aa I want mumma beside me Ar said for when she is there I feel I can win the world!!!.. but...

Ar who was a good sprinter apparently was winning the heats but when Rohan his classmate runs with him, he invariably comes second... not that Rohan is a good runner but Ar paces slows... and he is just unable to understand it...

Why don't you tell mumma said Aa.. No, when principal sir asked her to join back to coach she refused stating she has to take care of the roses... I don't want to tell her this, she will feel bad but we know how much she is busy taking care of home, sometimes going to the plantation and also taking care of AdAn who are just one and half years old now and just now daddy has come back from London so she needs to help him with the plantation work too.

But... Aayansh you will not tell anything said Arjun...

Hmmm within himself was telling bhai I cannot see you fail... Who can help through to mumma to get back to coaching but for our Raghav babu... Smiled himself...

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After the roses were born, it was hands-full for Chakor, though there were people at the Mansion but certain things she wanted to do by herself.

Preparing food for the boys, meeting them at the lunch time and going to plantation to give lunch to Raaghav and Kaaka and back to take care of the little ones. It was tiring but she did not want to compromise on anything.

Even Mr. Rathod wanted her to coach for certain specific interschool competitions still she politely refused but would go to attend any specific events as a mark of respect.

She could not get back to her fitness regime too...

She would follow the races on the TV though...

Aa knew his mumma well as those eyes would shine bright looking at the races.

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It was Sunday morning normally the whole Mansion would wake up late as that was indeed the time off day...

Raaghav would be blissing himself cuddling his maidam and she would be in her peaceful sleep with his warmth around.. Even a slight jerk, he would pull her closer to him.. they would be in the warmth of each other till the roses wake up... But the roses too know that their mumma need that rest...

But that day it was unusual it was around 5 am. The room was bit cold... Raaghav woke up and realized the window was open and it was quite cold... He saw her sleeping so calmly with a smile, she was looking so cute... he kissed her very pleasantly not disturbing her to wake up and went to the window. While he was about to close he found the Mansion garden lights were on... He saw Arjun jogging around and Aa was half asleep but was with his bro... He was surprised. Closing the window and leaving his cuties sleeping slowly closed his room and walked down to the garden

He came smiling to his cubs, my Lions what are you doing early in a Sunday morning. Hugging them, kissing them, worried that the chillness may affect them.. touching their heads..

They both wished him and said sorry daddy but we did not make any noise to wake you up... Raaghav asked did you both have anything??? No daddy Ar wanted to practice so we just came to the garden...

He went inside and came back with biscuits and hot chocolate as mumma hen doesnot like her cubs to drink tea or coffee at this young age. They sat together in their garden coffee table.

Looking at Ar he asked young man what's it... you look dull? Any problem.. Nothing said Ar.. but Aa said daddy, problem tho hai!!! He told about Arjun's dilemma and how he wants mumma's guidance but did not want to trouble her...Arjun hugged Raaghav, daddy I feel so bad that I am winning the heats but with Rohan my pace is slowing down... I sprint well but not able to understand. He said the D day is next month but in between there are few more races which will be conducted .. Raaghav hugged them both and said don't worry I will take care...

Kissed them both... Took them to their room and went back...

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He went back to see the roses still sleeping they have indeed grown big and cute but his queen won the cuteness award in pouting and sleeping while she shook and was moving her hands over the bed missing her warmth.. He smiled and went into the quilt going close and hugging her... turning towards him smiling with eyes closed hugged him... he hugged slowly moving through her waist, his eyes thinking... she opened and kissed him good morning... have the girls woken? She asked .. he did not respond .. she looked at him and asked.. What Raaghav what are you thinking...

He was just brushing his hands over her and her waist... your arms are way too soft he said .. hmmm I know she said, and even my waist is too big na... no curves na I know... I am not any more looking so good...I do not find time to start my fitness too... sorry... he kissed her closing her mouth. Not a word about my maidam or about her figure... pushing her strands which was coming his way. You are the most beautiful and sexiest person who make me go crazy and mad... Why do you think you cant start your fitness... get back to your passion.. lets share the work to take care of the girls... we have good staffs and mausi to take care... you are exerting yourself...

No Raaghav but ... he cupped her face... I know how much you enjoy your running...and how much you are being sought after for coaching... even principal wants you, Mr. Rathod wants you... and I see how you glow seeing the races on the TV.. My Queen I don't want the eagle to be caged as a little birdie, please ...get back to your ground... I want back my strong maidam.. who train those young ones to win...Get back for your cubs want you too!! The boys want me...she was surprised... why didn't they say... He said they don't want to trouble their mumma as they love their roses...

It will be bit difficult as I have taken a break... She said waking up... he pulled her down closer looking at her wickedly... the roses have not yet woken so its daddy and his birdie's time kissing her harder...crushing her... Budda always looking for the moment!!! Kissing him back but not long for the roses woke up... smiling at them both woke up... she woke up to a new beginning after an interim break...

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Chakor had taken the girls for their regular check up with the boys... Raaghav went out as he had some work along with Kaaka. It was in the evening and there was a big van which came to the Mansion. The items were unloaded... a part of the ground was made into a play area for the roses...neatly laid down grass carpet with a big yawning erected. A small swing, merry go round, see- saw, small tricycle was placed there.

One of the rooms in the mansion in the ground floor was remodeled into a personal gym... with a treadmill, cardio machines and other necessary machineries.

Ground tracks behind the mansion were marked and the soil was layered...

Chakor and the kids came back and were in awe. Raaghav are you a magician she asked. He said my maidam has that wand he winked... All set for my birdie to become the eagle...The girls were jumping looking at their play area excited. There were two ladies who are the wives of the workmen who willingly told Raaghav that they will baby sit the girls along with Girija and the other staffs.

Aa hugged Raaghav and said daddy I know you will take care. Anything for my lions he said.

Ar ran to mumma when she said that she is getting back to school for coaching. She kissed Ar and said, I am always for my sons first... why didn't you tell me that you need my help... So you love daddy more...pouting with false anger. Both came running to her hugging her tight crying, kissing her...Mummy no sorry, we know you are too busy with Aditi and Ananya and you help daddy and take care of us too.. she hugged them and kissed them back.

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She got a health clearance from the gynae and went inside the family gym. Her track suit with sneakers were there along with for him too... He said instead of going to my gym I can do my workouts here with my Maidam he winked. Chup she said...

Arjun was excited for now he was sure he will win not only the heats but the finals too.

The next day Chakor went to the school and gave her consent to join back but on flexi hours and the Principal was way too happy but for one person!!!!

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Competition is healthy but not hatred and enmity in the field of sports!!

Can that be nurtured? That too at a young age??

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77nikita thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Fantafab sumi ...thank you for giving us the chakor which we were dying to see...
As usual raghav babu ne dil jeet liya😳😳

Kiddos are just cutie pies😳😳

The brotherly bond, the maturity of arjun, aayansh's way of letting raghav know, the quilt wala raghav😉 the magician raghav, the vigilant raghav, the caring raghav, God I am just madly in love with this fictional family...

And not to forget the intrigue in the story... excited...by the way sumi what minute points you thinkof yaar...hats off... like the medical clearance👏

Your writing is such a solace... love you dear... hope the next part comes soon😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi dear🤗

Didnt expected this Surprise.
wow...
this line from Raghav "My Queen I don't want the eagle to be caged as a little birdie"

Yes we always wanted our little birdie to be the Eagle she is. And whenever I read or see her pursuing her passion it really makes me happy.

And yes your Raghav babu, unadulterated pure soul always make sure he sweeps her away with his love and win us too.

Aww the boys, they are too good, matured and loving. Ar dont want to disturb Mom, Aa worried for Ar ,so made way thru Raghav to help him. then after chakor knowing that and showing false anger, having a moment with them...all good

she joining bck, the setup made ready by raghav, he weaving magic and his queen hv the band..lovely to see.


And you knew I loved their morning scene, her hands searching for warmth, he hugging her.

And Raghav babu wants to workout along with his maidam in gym..okok..lol

And the final lines about on competition and hatred, intrigued to read the next part.




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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing start.
Love this happy family. The last paragraph is intriguing, eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting update👏
Everything was perfect👏
Loved the happy family
The last line was intriguing
Waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sritama for your comments on insta

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Fab one..lovely to see Chakor returning back to her passion n Raghav pursuing her n encouraging her for tht ❤️n d boys as usual so sweet n adorableloved d way Raghav convinced Chakorn both dem working out in d same gym wearing track suitswas imagining VJ n Meera waiting for d next part..looking forward to see how d rivalry story unfolds..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 77nikita

Fantafab sumi ...thank you for giving us the chakor which we were dying to see...

As usual raghav babu ne dil jeet liya😳😳

Kiddos are just cutie pies😳😳

The brotherly bond, the maturity of arjun, aayansh's way of letting raghav know, the quilt wala raghav😉 the magician raghav, the vigilant raghav, the caring raghav, God I am just madly in love with this fictional family...

And not to forget the intrigue in the story... excited...by the way sumi what minute points you thinkof yaar...hats off... like the medical clearance👏

Your writing is such a solace... love you dear... hope the next part comes soon😉


Thanks Nikkiii🤗

yes yes how can our birdie be quiet...

Raghav Babu😳 yes yes shades of him... kya karoon yaar is Budda par bahutey pyaar hogaya...

Hey thanks deary yes before getting into fitness she has to be fit na!!!

intrigue... hold my suspense works fine...


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Sumi dear🤗

Didnt expected this Surprise.
wow...
this line from Raghav "My Queen I don't want the eagle to be caged as a little birdie"

Yes we always wanted our little birdie to be the Eagle she is. And whenever I read or see her pursuing her passion it really makes me happy.

And yes your Raghav babu, unadulterated pure soul always make sure he sweeps her away with his love and win us too.

Aww the boys, they are too good, matured and loving. Ar dont want to disturb Mom, Aa worried for Ar ,so made way thru Raghav to help him. then after chakor knowing that and showing false anger, having a moment with them...all good

she joining bck, the setup made ready by raghav, he weaving magic and his queen hv the band..lovely to see.


And you knew I loved their morning scene, her hands searching for warmth, he hugging her.

And Raghav babu wants to workout along with his maidam in gym..okok..lol

And the final lines about on competition and hatred, intrigued to read the next part.





Umaaa didnt expect!! Well me too!!! Just that my Boss and the Leadership teams were in full day meetings so grabbed my time to love my adories...

And Bang on you picked that sentence I loved writing the most👍🏼

Boys yeah i am loving them especially my bachoo Aa and the matured Ar...

Morning scene yeah me too loved it and Raghav Babu mokka mey chouka maarengaa hhe he cannot leave his Maidam na na ...

yes I am of the strong belief that Sports should breed sportsmanship and not hatred...

hope I carry the intrigue... feeling bit scared though😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing start.

Love this happy family. The last paragraph is intriguing, eagerly waiting for next.


Mai 🤗

a bring smile on my lips when I see your comment..

Yes me too love this family

yep will try to update by Sunday sure!


Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Everything was perfect👏
Loved the happy family
The last line was intriguing
Waiting for next


Hey Sonali misssed you so much
🤗
How are you


So nice to see your comment..

Thanks deary

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