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Hi this is my first FF, if I make any mistakes please feel free to correct me, or put forward any suggestions, I hope you enjoy it. This will be a single attempt only, as I don't think I'll be able to write another ff ever again, this will be my best shot, so you can consider this my first and last ff😊.
Well this is my recreation of LTL, and how I think it could have been in the past one year, so I guess I'm telling that this is gonna be a long ff, as I have a whole year to sum up in my version, and I do hope that I can hold your interest for as long as the journey of this ff lasts...😳😳
I have made alterations to some characters, but only 'cause I think they go better with their current personalities. There will be entry of a few new characters but I can assure you that you will grow to like them. I promise you all that it will all come together and end up like the show eventually, and make sense at the same time, but in my style.
Hope you guys are ready to read my version of how LTL would have been if seen through my eyes.😉
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Deewani an Epic Tale
CONTENTS
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Chapter One
The Act
As the car came speeding round the bend, Ganpat was giving himself a prep talk in his mind mentally embracing whatever luck would bring him after this ridiculous but effective move, many people he'd known had done these kind of things with success, so what would be wrong if he'd do it. As the white Mercedez approached Ganpat was shaking, and prayed to to whichever God it was that had chosen to look out for him to let him survive, he quickly gulped his quarter bottle of cheap alcohol to give him strength, and jumped in front of the car as it manoeuvred round the bend at high speed.
Aaarghhh ! Ganpat shouted at the top of his lungs as jumped in front of the car.
Bhau, gaadi rok bhau, gaadi rok, screeched Baji, as Dutta quickly saw what Baji was intending to, Dutta dropped his cell, and responded to his reflexes immediately, but hit a man on the road very briefly, who Dutta thought was already screaming when the car hadn't even hit him.
As the tyres screeched at a high pitch, and finally came to a halt, Dutta instructed Baji to go take a look at the man and see if he had any injuries, and also told him you know what to do if he does, okay. Ho Bhau, mein sambhal lega, tu yehi ruk, and with that he left the car, and headed back to the crowd.
Yeh ameer log kya samaj te hai hume, ke hum gareeb hai to humari jaan ki koi keemat nahin hai, hai bhagwan tune apne is Ganpat ko bachaliya bhagwan, main tere dhar pe ek agarbati lagoan ga bhagwan, as Ganpat staged his drama in the middle of the street, secretly thanking God for keeping him alive, and better yet in one piece, as he peeped over to see a man approaching him, he quickly continued with his drama.
Eh, Kaka tu theek to hai na, tujhe koi chaut vauth to nahin ayi na, as Baji bent down to Ganpat, who was exaggerating with his wailing. Mere chhote chhote bachche hai, main kya karounga, kaha jounga...Kaha jaounga matlab, tu to bilkul theek hai Kaka, ek halki ji si karoch ayi hai tereko, kyu bekaar main itna tamasha bana raha hai, upar se subhe subhe tune itni pee rakhi hai, kya tum dekh ke nahin chal sakte te, mera ilaaj kaun karega itna paisa kaha se launga Ganpat carried on...
Baji at that point understood what this man's intention was 'Saala, paisa kamaana aata nahin, aur jhat se bhari gaadi dekhe gus jaate, saala sharabi kahin ka' as he mumbled under his breath Baji finally took out a thousand rupees and handed it to the drunkard lying before him 'ye le, aur nikhal yaha se'
As Ganpat saw the two five hundred rupee notes he let out a dopy 'eh...iska kya karega main, mere do chhote chhote bachche hai, unki shaadi kaise karega main...'
Abhe eh Kaka ek karoch ayi hai tereko apayich nahin hua hai tu samjha, chal put yaha se, as Baji got up to leave, he could hear Ganpat carrying on about how rich people think we are scum, he injured me and threw a poxy thousand rupess at me and left, look at them, the rich man hasn't even left his car 'cause these people don't consider our worth anything.
Finally Dutta had got down from his car, and removed his sunglasses, and resting his one hand on top of the car with the door left open and one side of his black shirt was tucked into his stone washed blue jeans, as the other side was hangin out with his top two buttons open, and questioned Baji, what was taking so long, is the man injured or not.
Arre Bhau ye saala pee kar gaadi ke neeche gus gaya taake hum isse paise de, 'to de do na usse paise' bhau maine usse huzaar rapaiya diya na lekin woh saala aur tamasha kar raha hai, isich liya apun chalaa aya waha se, mere ko nahin lagta ke yeh accident hua yeh jaan bhuj ke gaadi ke neeche gussa tha 'hmm thieek hai usse yahan bhuloa'.
Saab mein gareeb aadmi hai mere chhote bachche hain...as he repeated his ines in front of Dutta 'theek hai kitna chaiye tumhe', Letting out his joy straight away Ganpat quickly asks mere ko paanch laakh chaiye.
Theek hain gaadi main beth, chal Baji. As they head off Ganpat is confused as to what is going on, whilst sitting in silence, Ganpat's eyes lay on a shiny object catching the sunlight, as his vision clears he sees that shiny object is none other than a gun lying in Baji's jeans. As Ganpant starts letting out a sweat, Dutta sees through the rearview mirror, Saab hum kahan jaa rahen hain, he manages to squeeze in, tumhe paise chaye na, wahin jaa rahe hain replies Dutta in a very calm but stern voice.
As panick hits Ganpat he breaks down and dumps his whole drama and eventually spills the beans...mujhe maaf kardo saab maine jo bhi kiya majboori mein kiya, meri beti hain naa uski shaadi karne ke liye mujhe paise ki sakht zaroorat thi, isi liya maine socha ke koi bhari gaadi ke neeche main gus jounga to mujhe kisi ameer aadmi ki jeb se paanch laakh miljaye ga, lekin mujhse galati hogi, mujhe maaf kardo...aap mujhe yehi par uthar dijiye...main chala jayega...main...as he carries on talking and at the same time running out of words to say Ganpat starts crying, saab mujhe maaf kardo...saab main aisa kabhie nahin karega...saab.
After some time of listening to Ganpat waffling on, they come to a mansion 'Patil Niwas', as Ganpat is forced to follow Baji and Dutta into his office, Dutta sits on his chair, and puts his feet up on the table with his legs crossed, and so he speaks, tere se jo hua woh teri galati ti, jo nuksaan meri gaadi ka hua woh bhi teri galati thi, abh tu yahan se tab tak nahin jaa sakta jab tak meri gaadi ka karcha tu nahin bharta, yahan ke kaam tu karega, aur agar kuch bhi karne ki kishish ki...just where Baji interupts says to tujhe goli se ura dounga...just than Dutta stares at Baji, stopping him right there, and making Ganpat sweat even more and gulping with great difficulty and was about to speak when Dutta immediately puts up his hand and stops him, and orders Baji to show Ganpat his jobs around the house and to keep watch over him.
Aage se tujhe pata hona chahiye ke Dutta Bhau se dokha karna gunaah hai, with the most chilling voice that sent shivers down Ganpat's spine, unable to ask if he was allowed to tell his family of his whereabouts, or at least speak to them.
Ganpat didn't see the man everyone addressed as Dutta Bhau till the next day, he was explained by Baji what his job was, and it had become clear to him that he was not allowed to make contact with anyone without Bhau's knowledge, and that basically he was held captive in this house which had little chance of escape, as there were bodygaurds holding guns at every point of the house, Ganpat hadn't slept all night worrying how his wife and children would be with that monster lurking over their head, and here he was helpless because of a sutpid mistake he had made in order to find a quick solution.
All night Babi and Nakusha were worried that why Ganpat was missing, he had said he'd found a solution to all their problems and will back by afternoon, but it was morning now and still they'd had no news, Sethji was up and out looking for his Dad since morning and had come back without any news.
Kuch pata chala Sethji, nahin Tai, kisi ko bhi nahin pata ke Baba kahan gaye the, mujhe bohut bhook lagi hai Tai, isich liye mein ghar aagaya, aur socha kuch kha kar phir se dhoondne nikal jouanga, mujhe pura yakeen hai ke zuroor kahin pee kar para hoga, jab hosh aayga to khud ghar aajayga, jaldi se khana de Tai mere ko bohut bhook lag rahi hai. Haan abhi deti hain, Nakusha replied as she put out her brother's food.
Hain Bhagwaan kahan se main leke aygi paanch laakh, woh Ganpat zuroor patli gali se nikhal gaya hoga socha ke pehle hi bhaag jaata hoon, baad mein bhi to bhaagna hi parega, tu paida hote hi mar jaati to acha hota, as Babi said these words and realised how much she'd hurt her own daughter, she'd started crying and said mujhe maaf karde Naku, meri waje se tujhe kya kya nahin tyag na para, kitne gun aur sanskar hain meri beti main aur main aise kaise us jaanwar ko tujhe sop du, tu fikar mat kar meri bachi mein kahin na kahin se zaroor paise ka intezaam karungi, aur jaake us ke mu par phek de gi, lekin dekh Naku jab tak yeh mamla theek nahin hota na tu apne chehre par kaala rang lagaa kar rakhna theek hain.
Naku smiles at herself and says to her Ayi, ke tu jo kahe gi main wohi karegi, tu fikar math kar, jo Roopa Tai ne kiya woh teri Naku kabhie nahin karegi Ayi, main kabh ka sab bhool gayi, jo waade maine tujhse kiya hain woh Naku hamesha yaad rakegi. Watching all this Sethji interrupts and says lekin Ayi mereko yeh samaj nahin aata ke tune Tai ka to gora rang chipa to diya lekin Tai ki kala aur naach kyu bandh karwa diya, Tai kitna acha gaati hain, aur Tai jaisa to koi naach bhi nahin sakta...'eh chup kar, jab dekho bolta hi rehta hai, jab tereko kuch pata nahin na to bakwas mat kiya kar, chal khana kha aur jaake apne Baba ko dund, chal ja'...haan jaate hain jaata hain, and leaves.
Ayi tu Sethji ko daath thi hain, uksi galati kya hain, usse tori na pata hai...'main jaanti hoon Naku lekin jis kala ki woh tarif karta hain na, isi kalaa ki waje se meri bachchi mujhe chod ke chali gaye, uski awaaz aur wohi gun, aur jab tu to Roopa se bhi sundar, aur kahin guna zaada acha nachti aur gaati bhi hain, agar kisi ki buri nazar in cheezo par bhi pari to main kya karegi Naku'...Math roh Ayi mujhe sab yaad hai, main apni kalaa ko kabhi nahin apnaygi, tu chinta math kar.
Thank you for reading.
That's all for now, everyone's comments are very valuable, and will encourage me to keep writing, I will definately try to update regularly, as a reader I know it's very fustrating not knowing what's gonna happen next.😊
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