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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

Ok i've pretty much summed it up 4 both u gurls lol, Yuvi u tuk d wrds ryt outa my mouth 😉, ....dat wz exactly d 1st ting dat popped in2 my head wen i read dat 1st line Sophie, n yep no munni and sheila lol....dat's nt tru 2 Naku's character ere 😆, n dnt wrry after dis nx update i wnt take 2 lng 2 gt bak wid wrtin d rest...... I cant wait for the next partt yaaaar
oh so ur 4rm s. london.....4rm d town of d jolly boys ( u no wt i mean...only fools n horses...although m nt sure ur 4rm peckham, but ur still close😆)
Lol yeahhh im from south but naa aint from peckham.. Im from croydon lol.. n hey.. not all the boys r fools :( .. some are nice.. ONE is nice lool
n as 4 readin d cmmnts...m sure none of us here mind it's n open forum lol, baat nahin karenge to guzaara kaise hoga😆, u wanna c wt we were talkin abt in d ccc..Ohhh I dnt wana know.. AHEM AHEM lol..🤣😉 a couple of nyts ago...i fink since mishal's leave har koi besharam hota ja raha hai😆😆 lool.. werent we besharam before that? everytime we started a topic.. it wud end with SR! lol
n fnx 4 ur cmmnt, at least u left one lol.....cz all these chats r makin my FFRP's go down loool😆 lol..im so sorry i reserved a spot but hailaa when i came back.. I was so confused lol.. so i just posted a new comment lol.. na ur FFRP😆 wnt go down... it's a grippin story.. Please update soon :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
m online n typin nx chpter ryt now, but nt sure if i will put it up by nyt...depnds on d amnt of tyms i gt interuptions😆
oh ur 4rm croydon, pretty far 4rm here....used to go der wen we were little....so cnt rly memba much😊, ....rrrriiiiight so nt all boys r fools lol....hu is jus dis 1 exception huh...it cnt b dutta nt 4rm d sound of it.....is sum1 feelin lyk dis😳😳☺️☺️?
o n btw i meant d shw 'only fools n horses'😳😃😆
m sure u dnt wanna *meant in a sarcastic way* lool, mor lyk u js dnt wanna admit it 😆😆😆
lool yeh u guys maybe besharam 4rm b4 but i werent'....main to seedi saadi ladki thi😃....until i decided to nt b a silent reader ne more lol😳😳
hey n u dnt need 2b sorry, it's us lot wid all r chattin hehe, ....but u no wot dey say cnt beat 'em..join 'em loool😉
...well i better gt bk 2 updatin, hopefully it'll b up by 2nyt, i hope no one's listening lol, otherwise m gonna hav 2 run n hide b4 i no it lool
tc hun...n will be bk sn wid chtpr18😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

ABSOLUTLY NO INTEREPTIONS FOR TINK,

WARNA DUTTA STYLE MAI GHUMA KE, EK LAGE GA ULTE GAAL PAI
PLEASE UPDATE AAJ RAAT KO😳😃😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
ahhh ryttt thats a show lmao...😆
Ohhhhh i do have an exception lol... I aint afraid to admit it lol.. and it aint Dutta or my baaji lol..😆
Yhh croydon... pretty boring to be honest lol.. except for the shopping centres.!! It pulls me towards it everyday lol..
Hailaa u were seedi saadi.. well im glad u aint a silent reader anymore and ur spoilin us with ur amazing FF now :)
And whoever comes to this forum turns from seedi saadi to besharam lol.. 😆
I will let u get bak to writing cause i cant wait for the next part..!! Lets hope u dnt get interupted lol..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sophia21

ahhh ryttt thats a show lmao...😆

Ohhhhh i do have an exception lol... I aint afraid to admit it lol.. and it aint Dutta or my baaji lol..😆
Yhh croydon... pretty boring to be honest lol.. except for the shopping centres.!! It pulls me towards it everyday lol..
Hailaa u were seedi saadi.. well im glad u aint a silent reader anymore and ur spoilin us with ur amazing FF now :)
And whoever comes to this forum turns from seedi saadi to besharam lol.. 😆
I will let u get bak to writing cause i cant wait for the next part..!! Lets hope u dnt get interupted lol..

BOLD: totaly agree wit u babe😉😳😆
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Chapter Eighteen
Love Don't Live Here Anymore
As Naku listened to Dutta speak of this girl, she could somehow relate with her, who would want there child to suffer from the hands of such a heartless criminal, and the fact that lady had managed to keep her child safe from his clutches for all those years sure told Naku that she was a strong character.
And as for her one night stand with Dutta, well she was well aware of the type of relationships Dutta kept with women, she wasn't one to argue or even feel disgusted at his behaviour with all these women, yes it pierced her heart everytime she'd found out a about a different girl in his life, but than that was what he'd become over these years and that wasn't about to change just because she'd entered his life, his past had nothing to do with her, and of course neither did his future she thought sadly, but his happiness did concern her whether he knew it or not, and she knew Supriya would eventually fill that empty gap in his life, but he just didn't know it yet.
Saab aap chinta mat karo, jab aap ki shaadi Supriya Tai se hojaye gi, tab woh aap ke har gham ko apne pyar se mitha degi.... she assured to Dutta. Dutta smirked at her comment without looking up at her, and said tu bohut bholi hai Naku, tu har cheez ko sirf pyar ke ruk se dekthi hai...lekin yeh nahin samajhti ke har cheez mein pyar nahin dikhta....., Supriya and me are merely having a contract marriage he told her, because this is the only thing that makes Ayi Sahib happy, other than that there is nothing for anyone to expect from this marriage, he finished. Marriage held no importance in Dutta's life, but it hadn't always been like this thought Dutta, there was a time when marriage was all Dutta had dreamt of, but his fate played a funny game.
Saab main aap se ek baat puche.... asked Naku, when Dutta simply nodded his head in a yes, and told her to go ahead, as if he'd said no she would've asked anyway... he thought....
Aap ko pyar ke naam se itni nafrat kyun hai Saab...she hesitated at first, but carried on regardless .....kya aap ne kabhi kisi.....se....py...pyar kiya hai kya, she finally managed to ask.
What do you think, asked Dutta throwing the question straight back at her, making her shift her gaze here and there, he knew she was scared to say the answer, but she knew what the answer to her question was, but before making any conclusions she just wanted to make sure she was right by asking him for confirmation.
Just before the conversation could go on, Dutta's cell had rang, it was none other than Roops, she wanted to speak with Naku, and asked her Bhau to hand over the phone, he sighed in agitation and handed over his mobile to a curious looking Naku...who was clearly thinking who would possibly call her on Dutta's phone.
Naku tum kitni der lago gi....mujhe tumhari zaroorat hai Naku, tumhe pata hai ke main....she started but than decided to tell her when she got home, and asked her about her eyes instead .....aur Naku, tum ne mujhe itna sab kuch bataya par phir bhi mujhe Baji se pata laga ke teri ankhein neele rang ki hai, that's not fair she went on, mujhe yeh neeli ankhein dekhni hai...er tum ek kaam karo, Bhau ko phone do....
Naku hadn't even managed to fit one word in the whole time Roops was speaking, and rather than arguing with Roops she just handed the phone over to Dutta, who was observing her every second of the conversation.
What do you think I am Roops, said a partially distrubed Dutta as he replied to her, yes her eyes are blue for gods sake..... you can see them when we get home.... he tried to answer which ever questions he could in between her never ending questions, what are you crazy....., ...no I can't do that, Roops you're driving me mad, ...okay fine, if that's what gets you off the line than fine.... he said hanging up before she managed to say anything else.
Kya kaha Roop ne said Naku, yeh poocho kya nahin kaha... he said, looking straight into her eyes and walking a little closer, ....tumhari ankhein ne to poore Patil Niwas ko paagal karke rakha diya hai, aur lagta hai ke abh iss Dutta ko bhi paagal karke hi chodengi, he said as he bought up his phone in front of her face and snapped a picture with the flash making Naku blink in shock at the same time.
What was that she'd asked, oh god Naku your eyes are closed, don't move this time he said trying to retake the picture. Naku had tried to protest, when Dutta had simply told her it's not my fault you made friends with Roops, and at the same time told her to hold still for one moment when he'd finally managed to get one picture in which her eyes were fully open and looked brighter blue because of the flash, but at the same time he'd managed to get her frown in too, making him smile while he sent the snapshot to Roops, so he could get her off his back, as he was about to delete the pictures, something inside of him stopped him, and he felt a sudden urge to keeping a little memory of the shy and fragile Naku, as she would soon be sure to leave, making Dutta feel abit gutted that he would lose such a good friend.
Saab apne saare photo nikaal diye na, she asked Dutta not liking the idea of being captured in his phone, when he said haan bas nikaal ne hi waala tha lekin woh phone ki battery zara down hai, aur bas ghar jaate hi nikaal dunga he said, knowing she'd buy it, he didn't like to lie to honest people but than he didn't know why he felt that he had to.
Why do you lack so much confidence in yourself Naku, you know your a fantastic girl, and you don't need to hide yourself always, the world's really not that much of a bad place, he said, and to make her more comfortable he made a remark of Salman Khan, he said ...and who knows Naku....ho sakta hai ke tumhara Salman bhi tujhi ko dhoond tha hoga....lekin tum usse mil hi nahin rahi ho....kyunki tum hamesha yahan wahan chupti rehti ho... abh tum batao kya tumhara Salman kya hamesha kunwara hi betha rahega kya..... he added sarcastically. When he wondered that why did she like Salman Khan, and asked her on a little serious note of what her reason was......
Saab woh main, let's talk of soemthing else she tried to escape, when Dutta said no I don't think we need to I'm quite liking this subject actually looking at her getting all embarassed and shy.
So she decided to tell him afterall, aap hasso gaye to nahin na Saab she first asked, while he made himself comfortable on one of the benches lying on his side with one leg raised on its sole, and leaning on his forearm on the same side to keep him afloat on that one side, and answered of course not, and also confessed that actually I have noticed that your decisions are always taken differently to all other girls I know, so I've been wondering why you like Salman Khan, out of all the actors in the world, and I definately know it's not just down to his muscles and good looks, he said, ......as muscles, body, and good looks are not so hard to come accross he added smartly shrugging his shoulders casually referring to himself, not knowing that Naku had indeed realised that he was referring to himself, and she certainly couldn't deny it.
Well Saab when I used to study with my sister, a little far away from our basti, I had a friend named Gauri, she was from the richer area from that region, and I met her through another one of my very close friend's, and she would always have all these magazines lying around in her house which obviously had interviews of actors' all the time, she went on familiarising him to the source of her information, and how she knows what she know of Salman, to avoid any questions relating to that.
So basically we used to often watch movies of his in cinema's, it was one of the few things that could cheer me up when I was down, she said, and because my friend didn't like him simply because of the fact I loved watching his films, my friend would always find some sort of flaw in him, and I would always stick up for Salman and eventually didn't realise that I'd thought of him to be so perfect in every sense that when someone had once asked me who I wanted to marry, I answered that anyone who shared a strong resemblance with Salman Khan, and since than I guess I have fallen for him pretty hard she blushed, while Dutta smiled at her flashing a few teeth, he couldn't believe he was sitting here listening to a girl's story of her first crush.....well first time for everything he thought, while he listened to her carry on.
Saab... she started again, you know of the situation with Aishwarya Rai, she asked, when he said that he'd heard a few rumours, but doesn't know much of the whole situation, he answered not understanding what she had to do with Naku's crush, but this was where Naku had shined amongst other girls with the unusual and unique reasons she had behind her every story or theory that she was telling.
...Well I know that most people think that as a lady she was right, but Saab if you see things the way I see them than I don't think she was right at all....she started.
Well of course Naku, nobody's going to see things the way you see them because that's only your talent he thought silently.
.......You see she said how she was tortured by him and everything, we don't really know how much truth there is in that, but I can certainly say that when such things happen Saab, they reflect on your life very badly, people shut themselves off from the world, they lose their confidence, because when you love someone you risk losing everything to that one person Saab, and when in life that person or love betrays you, you are forced to rebuild everything in your life again, as what you have given or rather lost will not come back, and therefore making you start something from scratch which is difficult...she said ...kyunki unchai par charna assaan hai, lekin jab upar se koi neeche dekhta hai to dil mein ghabrahat hone lagti hai Saab....neeche girne ka darr laga rehta hai, aur upar se jo log aapko waha dekh kar khush nahin hai...woh to hamesha aapko girane ki koshish mein lage rehte hai....she finished. What are you trying to say Naku, asked Dutta finally, liking the logic she was giving but getting more impatient to what she'd intended to.
Saab what I'm trying to say is that when someone is up there at such heights than they are an easy target to use for people that wish to get to that same position, and when that person reaches there, they do not hesistate to push that person down to keep their place intact. But you know the best part of the story Saab, is that when the person being pushed down gets up again and makes his way back to the top and stays there right beside the betrayer, because he is better than that and he is able to face whatever the world decides to throw at him, and overcome that.
Bilkul waise hi Saab, Salman Khan ne bhi phir se apni zindagi ki shuruat ki, aur aaj dekho saab he has acheived such success with help from his own family that his movie Dabangg is the second highest grossing movie in Indian Cinema today, she told Dutta, who was already aware of this fact, through Kishore.
Today he is still one of the best film actors Bollywood has to give, but some years ago when Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam had come out, his career had been threatened because of a woman, who used him to get there....well that's what I think anyway, and even the tapes that were leaked into media were later proved fake and were fabricated very cleverly. But Saab this is the real reason I admire Salman Khan, because as well as his good looks she said laughing it off a little, he has achieved such great things and given great performances to his audiences whilst going through so much in his own life he didn't give up, and that's what make me love him so much more, she added forgetting for one minute that she was sitting in front of Dutta. .....And did you know Saab that he also does charity work and never made it known to the world, but only recently made it aware through media, she said sounding more excited this time, and do you know his reason for this she went on, ....he say's that he's realised that he's just 'Being Human', and there is nothing to be ashamed of by admitting that to the world, she finished, feeling proud of his deeds.
Wow....said Dutta raising his eyebrows, even your reason for having a crush on him has left me surprised, I wonder what kind of man you get married to he said, thinking he must definately had better be as good as Salman or else whoever the lucky guy would be, won't be as lucky, smirked Dutta to himself, having his own private joke. ....And don't forget to invite me to your wedding either Naku, 'cause I would sure love to meet whoever it's going to be replacing Salman Khan in your life, he added.
Saab ab maine to aap ko bata diya apne bare mein, ab aap nahin mereko batao ge ke aap ki zindagi mein woh ladki kaun thi jo itni khushnaseeb thi ke usse aap ka pyar mila...she questioned, when a rather calm Dutta stood up and began walking around randomly and began ......nahin Naku, usse mera pyar mila nahin, ussne mere pyar ko thukraya, balke thukaraya bhi nahin.....ussne mere pyar ko apni awkaad dikhaye....he went on swinging his cellphone in circles between his palm, while still walking around and started to tell his story with ease to Naku, who was already surprised at the fact that a girl would refuse such a guy.
Main ek seeda saada aadmi tha Naku, mujhe bhi wohi chahiye tha jo baaki sab ladko ko chahiye tha...ek ahca ghar, achi naukri, Baji jaise dost, aur Seema jaise ladki.... he said not realising that this name had automatically pierced the first arrow in Naku's heart, as she knew that this was where his love will always remain, with a girl by the name of Seema.
As Dutta drowned in the memories picturising in his head he didn't seem to mind all of a sudden if Naku knew what others had died to know, out of all people in the world she was the first person he actually felt comfortable in telling his past to, and finally felt a little relief that he was able to get this off his chest after so many years of keeping it bottled up inside of him, as he didn't stop to look at Naku while he went on remebering all events from his past that occured in the whichever order he could remember.......
Choti si duniya thi humari, Naku. Ek chote se ghar mein hum rehte the, aur paisa humare paas na bhi hote humare ghar mein khushiyan zaroor thi, everything was just perfect. I had a decent job as a car mechanic, who's name was Govind, Baji had introduced me to him at a young age, and I started my job there for as long as I can remember, it wasn't the best of places to be working at the time, but it put food on the table for my sisters and mother.
When one day I had met the most beautiful girl in my whole life...Seema. She was what every man had desired, but she chose me out of so many people, and you know why, because I had managed to save up all my earnings for two months and bought her a name chain made from gold, and offered it to her as a token of my love.
We began growing fond of each other more and more by the day, she had started making alot of trips to the garage, whenever I'd be working, and you know...he paused and smirked for a second and than carried on, I used to hate it when she came there, as much as I loved her....I couldn't stand it when all the other guys would drool over her, but she told me that it never bothered her. But it used to kill me from inside, I felt like ripping those guys eyes out when they so much as even looked in her direction, I wanted her all for myself. But she never listened to me she would still come there everyday at lunchtime, just to make sure I'd eat on time. And later in the evenings we would always meet at a talaab, without fail.
We had soon fallen in love quickly, but when ever I could take her out with the little bit of money I had saved it was never enough, because every time she had seen something she liked I could never afford it, I had once or twice borrowed money from Baji, but how long could I have carried on.
Eventually I had decided to tell Ayi Sahib of Seema, and that I wished to marry her and settle down, of course Ayi Sahib was more than happy, but she'd told me what I already knew. I needed to buy a small land of my own, so I could have a house that I could call my own, when I told Seema of this she didn't seem to be interested, and I thought her lack of interest to be mistaken for her shyness at the name of marriage. But before my Ayi had went to ask of her hand in marriage, I needed to make sure I could afford to buy everything Seema had dreamed of, and I knew I couldn't buy such things on a mechanic's wage.
This is when I spoke to Baji for helping me out.
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Baji was somehow never short of cash, everytime I needed it he would always have it, he treated my family as his own, but he lived on his own, for a long time he'd got away with telling us that his Dad was a drunkard, and his Mother was dead. But we soon found out that Baji fended for himself, which is why he was so street smart and alert. He used to work for big loan sharks who used to pay him a good sum of cash for his job as he never failed to complete any task he was given, he was offered bigger jobs with bigger boys, but Baji had never considered going down that road.
I'd asked Baji to get me a job in the same place as him, but he told me it was too dangerous for me, laughed Dutta thinking back to the fact that Baji was younger than him and was trying to protect his older brother. So instead he told me that I could have as much money I wanted from him, but never to ask again about working with him. When one day a panicked Baji had come to my house in the night, and told me to hide his weapons that he had hidden in his own house under the floor, but someone had called the dogs on them and there place was raided, and his name was also given the to cops. So I had them hidden inside my mattress for quite some time, as a favour to Baji.
Eventually I had become so determined to buy all the luxuries money could buy for Seema, that I had convinced Baji to let me help him out at least, and that way he could feel like he's still earning that extra bit of cash. We used to deliver small sachets of drugs and weapons that other big people would order in that line of work, and the earnings were high, so I'd started to save that money in the garage in the boot of a car that hadn't been touched by anybody, in fact it was abandoned and had rust on it, so that was sure to not catch anyone's attention, and I had told Govind once long ago to not scrap that car as I wanted to repair it for myself as I saved up for the parts.
I knew I had to find a safer place for the money eventually, because it wasn't safe in the the garage either, as Govind was a very crooked man to, and Dutta was sure his intentions weren't exactly decent, he was only a happy man when something had held his own interest in it, or had some sort of personal gain for himself.
One day when Dutta was taking out cash from the boot of his rusted and abandoned car, he thought he saw someone watching him, but never thought much of it.
That night I had purchased the most expensive gold ring I could buy at that time, and had decided to propose to her offically at the talaab the next day.
But that night Govind had called me and Baji to his garage, and told us that he knew the kind of cash he was earning, and that he also knew that I was hiding it in his garage too, and he threatened us that he will go to the cops.... unless we gave him half of the money in the boot to keep his mouth shut, just for that one time. Baji had lost control and was about to beat Govind up, when I stopped him, and told Baji to go outside and that he should let me speak with him alone, and I assured Baji that I would make him an offer he couldn't refuse.
When I came outside to meet a fuming Baji, I'd told him that I had given him all the money in the car, very casually, and Baji had begun kicking randomly at things lying around the street in fustration, when Dutta explained to him to listen to him and not to worry, and than told Baji of his own plan and said there were two motorbikes lying in his garage which had just come in for a serivce, belonging to one of the biggest gangster's son's, who always comes here and collects money from Govind for some reason....Baaji was confused now, when Dutta made it clear to him that don't you see so what if he has all the money we earned...the bikes are much more expensive and we'll get much more profit by stealing them and selling them on, they are worth much more than the money that's now in Govind's possession, and just think what Govind's face will be like when he sees those bikes aren't there anymore. Baji had loved this idea, so eventually later that night they stole the bikes from his garage and thought it would be fun to go for a thrill ride instead, while they were at it. They had hid the bikes by morning, and Govind hadn't noticed they were gone missing, as he hadn't come in 'till later that evening.
That was the last day of my old life.... said Dutta, when I went to the talaab that evening to meet Seema, she hadn't turned up, at first I thought maybe she had got caught up in something, and she was running late, but than I couldn't help myself, I told Baji to find out where she was, he even went to her house but she weren't there either, I started getting worried like hell, and didn't know what to do, I couldn't think straight I started to think of the worst possible scenario's in my mind and went home and found one of the guns that Baji had given me to hide, and for no apparent reason I'd decided to take that with me, and went to the garage to get a car so I could start looking for wherever she'd be.
But what did I know, to my surprise I'd found the one thing I was looking for right there at the garage, at first I hadn't noticed too much, but than when I heard that laugh, that was it I knew I found her, but she wasn't alone she was with.........Govind.
But like an idiot I carried on staring at first not coming to terms with reality, refusing to believe that she was the one I had loved more than my own life, I had risked my family's life in her love, I went absolutely blind that I refused to even see what was wrong or right, since I had fallen in love with her.
My mind told me to believe what I could see, but my heart wouldn't, so I went over and without thinking I had slapped Govind off the car bonnet where they were both sitting comfortably on, which is the first time Seema slapped me.... she had in actual fact brought me back to reality.
She had defended Govind and told me that I wasn't good enough for her, because I didn't earn enough and I was poor. She than referred to the money scattered all around her, that Govind had showered upon her youth, which was the same cash I'd agreed to give him a day before. I still ridiculously tried to prove my love to her and showed her the ring I had got made for her but she just wasn't interested, she said that I wasn't worth her love, in fact she told me that I wasn't worth anyone's love.
I was absolutely heartbroken, my world that I built around her had shattered right above me, and all of a sudden I'd become lifeless, I felt cold, I felt anger..... I felt hatred fill through me, as I had made my way to the exit..... before I knew it my hands had made their way to the gun kept in my trousers, and I shot Govind's kneecap, when he started screaming in pain and fear I felt a sense of relaxation taking course through my whole body, Seema's mocking laughs had suddenly turned into whimpering and helpless cries with fear, which fed my anger just like a person that's addicted to drugs, every time she screamed in pain I felt at ease. In my rage I hadn't even realised all the blood that painted the floor red, but when I saw Govind trying to run for it, I couldn't help myself, I'd grabbed him from his collar behind his shirt and dragged him on the floor to the car they were sitting on, and opened the car door on the driver's side and put his hands between the hinges and slammed the car door shut again and again until his hand had become lame and his fingers broken, but that wasn't enough I wanted them to suffer for the way they made me feel like I'd died a thousand deaths in the one moment, so I did the same with his other hand to, and when he could even cry in pain any more from all the torture, I saw Seema trying to run for it, I'd grabbed her from her hair and slammed her against the wall and began strangling her, I wanted to feel her bones crush under my very hands, and when she was gasping for air, I realised that death was too easy a path for someone like her......, and eventually I'd let go of her, when I saw Govind trying to grab my gun at that same time which was lying on the floor still trying to shoot me with his crippled hands through one of the side mirrors of one the cars in the garage, and that was it.... I have no idea what came over me, I went furious as the images of him touching Seema and making fun of my love flashing before me, and before I knew it I had grabbed the transmission fluid lying nearby and forced Govind to drink it, and than decided to set him a light while he was still alive, so he could feel how I was burning when I saw them together.........and than I watched him scream to death while he burnt before me and he was unable to move even while he was burning because his limbs had given way beforehand, due to the face that I had beaten him up so brutally. When Seema watched Govind burn, I could see the agony she was going through for that one moment, I hate to admit that I don't regret killing him, I could still see that human torch on fire reflecting in my eyes every time I think back to that day.
By the time I could do anything to Seema, Baji had arrived, he was shocked at what he saw, and he knew that I would've got arrested but Baji, being the best person in the world to me, forced me to let go of Seema and told me she wasn't worth it, and made me sit in the car and dropped me off to the talaab and told me to wait there for him, until he returned.
When Baji returned he told me to jump in the lake and wash off all the blood that covered me, and he also bought me an extra pair of clothes too, which I'd changed into soon after. He lit a small fire and burnt all my clothes right there, and he told me not to speak of whatever had happened for some time to anyone.
Later, I had found out that a car mechanic by the name of Govind, was burnt in some accident where the engine had blown up in his face, causing him to die at the same time, while the whole garage had been burnt down in the tragic fire, and the case was closed on the grounds of the whole thing being an accident, which meant the bikes had also been burnt down in the fire in the eyes of that gangster's son.
When the news had died down, me and Baji thought it would be wise to get rid of the bikes we had hidden, but when I was about to check the engines and found out that the motorbikes were both filled with drugs. So this is what Govind was safeguarding for the boy discovered Dutta, when they decided to make a deal with the same people to buy back their drugs from Dutta and Baji. The boy had the drugs stolen from his father and had them hidden in Govind's garage, but when Dutta and Baji went to strike the deal with the boy, they had simply bluffed to him that their men were waiting outside his father's office to give him the news, when the boy had agreed imediately knowing his father would definately have him for it, but he couldn't pay that much, so instead the three of them had struck a deal with the boy's father and sold the drugs to him by saying that they had managed to save the drugs with the motorbikes and that they were stolen and sold to Govind. But later had found out who they belonged to and so eventually bought them to their rightful place. Their loyalty had got them both jobs with the druglord at that time, and before they knew they were Billa's most trusted men, Dutta's and Baji's names were taken with some of the most reputed don's in that line of work and their names were taken with great respect in Ratnagiri, which was Billa's turf.
They had become ruthless and cruel killers, but Dutta had one rule he refused kill innocent people, which is what Billa had despised, but at the same time he couldn't afford to lose Dutta or Baji.
Eventually Dutta had grown a lot of power in Ratnagiri, through Billa, and had began posing a threat to Billa himself, when one time Billa had told Baji to take out Dutta while they were on some business and once Dutta was dead Baji could take his position.
But Baji could betray himself, but never Dutta, so instead he told Dutta of the plan that Billa had proposed to Baji, and Dutta knew that if Baji didn't take Dutta out, than someone else was sure to fill his place and than both Dutta and Baji would both be dead.
So Baji and Dutta had planned a heist and hired people to rob Billa's place and made it look like a simple robbery, and in the whole shootout, they ended up killing Billa and all his trusted men, and eventually took over his multi million dollar drug based business, and had become the new don of Ratnagiri, with Baji as his right hand man.
They had eventually called a meeting with the neighbouring people involved in the mafia, and who were already aware of the take-over and that Billa's reign was over, and already accepted Dutta in his place, as he was already greatly feared from, but at the same time he had changed many of the ways Billa had ran Ratnagiri.
He had given the businesses of drugs to another don, by exchanging his links for entry into diamond smuggling, and had eventually struck deals with many don's on these terms, which is why Dutta had become so feared and respected, as he never let anyone betray him, and nor did he betray anyone.
........Aur tab se iss Ratnagiri ka raja main hoon, seede saade Dutta se main Dutta Bhau bangaya....he finshed bringing out his arms into a titanic type pose, except it weren't as romantic, and shouted DUTTTAAAA BHAAAAAUUUUUUUU !!!!!
His voice had echoed in the boxing club causing it to repeat a thousand times over, and making Naku jump at the loudness of his voice.
As Dutta sighed, releasing his tension from his past, he said to Naku, now do you understand that a man that can kill like this, can't possibly love anyone, he said looking at his hands with his palms facing him. You keep telling me that love will awaken me, love will make my life better, but don't you see no girl can love me knowing what she knows of me, and even if she did, I can't love her back, because I don't have any love to give to anyone he finished, and put his hand over his heart flat on his chest and said looking straight at Naku now......'that love don't live here anymore'...Naku, he added in defeat, hoping she would give up the idea trying to convince him that any girl could love him.
Okay megaaa loong update, but seeing as I'm gonna be back after a week, which is probably gonna go fast anyway, you guys shudn't hav anything to worry about.😉
Mish read d update first, don't look here😆.
And Azmishy, lyk I sed to Sophie, u can't beat 'em, join 'em lol, ur always welcum to chat wen we chattin afta d update lol.
N Yuvi dis is where 'not afraid' wz spose 2be, where 'bewafa' is played. 😆
And girls pls dnt gt offended by all d spamming, n don't let it stop u 4rm leaving comments lol, we're all here for a while, n ders no harm for a lil chit chat😆😆.
Erm I know I was spose 2 update yesterdy lol, but went Selfridges at 7 last night lol, nt gt bk l8, so sorry girls whoever was w8n.😳
I'm not sure how u guys r gonna lyk Dutta's character now, will be waiting eagerly to see if still lyk him lool😲😊, and anyone dat had any prob wid d Aish and Salman story, please don't look into it too much, as it is just an opinion and point of view of a certain character that's all...it's not meant to cause any controversy, so please guys just take that part wid a pinch of salt, please, it's not meant to upset anyone, it's an open forum where such thing shudn't matter....I do hope none of u girls gt offeded tho😊😊.
And I also knwo some of you's r not lykin d Roopa track, but dis is all important for d story to go on.....so sorry about that girls, it was d majority that decided she should die, so not much I could say there😃. Most of u r saying y Roopa in d whole world, well if it was any other girl, it wudn't mean anything......😕
After this story will go onto Roops dancing, and a bit of Baji's love story, and abit of tasha's love story with Baji being a kebab mein haddi..here n there lool.
So I will so be lukin 4rd 2 wt u hav 2 sy abt dis 1, m abit nervous wid dis 1 lool....so will w8.....😳😳😳
don't 4gt d like button😉
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Edited by tinkerbe11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

very nice update hun!

nice 2 c u inc dutta's past n make it slightly dif from hw it was in the show!
i dnt think ne1 wil hate or dislike dutta's character... afterall this is the dutta we love
aww dutta took naku's pic n didnt delete it😳😳 dw dutta, u wnt lose her, nt as a friend n nr as a companion...😳😳😳
awww dutta seems jealous types, he didnt like wen guys looked at seema, m sure he'll go crazy wen gaurav enters n is close 2 naku cos it seems gaurav n naku r very very close n knw a lot abt each other... cnt w8 for these 2 m8s 2 reunite, nt onli cos of dutta's jealousy track bt simply becos i feel naku's gna need gaurav's shoulder 2 cry on wen she finds out abt roopa..
as regards 2 aish-salman's story, wel i personally didnt find nething wrong it in...it was the truth, any1 can c tht becos her claim 2 success was al cos of salman bt sadly dnt they say wen the success gts 2 ur head u 4gt those ppl tht helped u achieve it, n aish (no offence 2 her fans) is surely one of those ppl... i love salman, n i cnt tel u hw happy i am 2 c tht u mentioned him as naku's fav... gd u mentioned abt the videos being revealed as fake....
also ur story telling of salman n the reasons u put fwd as 2 y she likes salman cn b found in dutta.. he too has been betrayed in love, does charity n is hard from the outside bt has a heart of gold... so 2 me there is a lot of resemblance between salman-dutta other than looks n body built... bt seems dutta hasnt realised it..lol
tusi ek hafte ki liye jaa rahe ho? update nahi karoge? tusi na jao...😭😆
Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oops sory but read dat bit 1st....wil read upd8 asap........................
.........................absolutly aswome update as always honey....
loved her perspectiv bou salman...if was defo very diff!! SK ROCKZ!! i 2 ddn be liv dat news...cuz of Aishz actionz..other actors did similar thng..by blaming sallu 4 threatening them..shame of em
ooohh i was pleasantly surprised about SK's 'human being' charity institute n other such institutions mA bless him


Ds past is soo sad n cruel..n no tink i dont h8 D was he did wit govind..or did u mean wats gona cum next...?? is dat an indication towardz FR...
not gona write a long coment sinc lukd lyk u ddn apreciate my long essay las time lol dnt blme ya tho😛😆
was planin of jus writin 1 sentence but cudnt help my self bak baking
thnx 4 pm.cont soon.x





Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res..will read as soon as I can!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi tinker, thanks for the pm update is fantastic👏

i m sick yaar, sorry for not being to write the comments earlier,
sher's past is out in the open for nakku, atleast some of it, caz she still does not knwo that he knows her sister roopa, and neither doeshe know that she is roopa's sis,
yaar tinker lagta hai salman tum ko bhi bara acha lagta hai😆 itni lambi kahani leekhi hai uus pai😉
dutta has know about some of nakku's past also, so these 2 r coming out in the open about each other, but there is still lots to know,, waise did u not mention that gaurav would be appearing soon? koi baat nahi agle episode mai dekhte haikiya hota hai..
hey how u r these day,, hope ur health is doing well,
so i guess the next update next week rite😳.. hope to see u around
Edited by yoyo2 - 14 years ago

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