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Nynaeve

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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Footnotes for Cinereal Streaks

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

And it is done, I have updated the second OS in this series.

In accordance with my new found resolution, I shall not be sending any pms. But I would welcome likes and dislikes, comments and feedback.

love,

Nyna

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Res seen but not read but sure it will be magical like all your work

Razis

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

An emotional roller coaster ride with brilliance poured into writing like always ...A bit of suspense on what could have happened leading to those events and end was gundelu pindesaavu ga😭😭 and start was bliss ..😳

Perfect balance struck 👏⭐️

Glad we are gonna get more ...😛 will wait for colours to be revealed ...And here in this series silver is no less than gold 😉

Love

Lucky

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blindassassin

@blindassassin

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Nynu

Yesterday proved to be a day full of surprises. First Saku and then you decided to post something in the forum.

And it was perfect...The love, pain, hurt,hope...Everything so relatable and not overdone.

I loved how you never went back to the original incidents of the past but instead summarised the events in the present itself. Impulsive swara and patient Sanskar ...Still a picture perfect couple...

But love as strong as this can make every pain vanish.

And I loved the silk shirt with silver lining...

Hoping to see you more often in the forum

Veena.

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kojagorimalik

@kojagorimalik

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Beautifully written swara and sanskar agony pain longing frustration and agony has been well described superb

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: raaz19
Res seen but not read but sure it will be magical like all your work
Razis

Dear Razia,

That is so sweet of you, hope you do find it nice.

Best,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: lucky.m
An emotional roller coaster ride with brilliance poured into writing like always ...A bit of suspense on what could have happened leading to those events and end was gundelu pindesaavu ga😭😭 and start was bliss ..😳
Perfect balance struck 👏⭐️

Glad we are gonna get more ...😛 will wait for colours to be revealed ...And here in this series silver is no less than gold 😉

Love
Lucky

Lucky🤗

It was indeed an emotional roller coaster ride, was it not? I myself felt it when I wrote it out, which I why I gave that sort of a disclaimer in the intro. And that bit of suspense, intentional, I wanted to have the readers guess what the tragedy was, even though the options were limited.

Ending - when I wrote that para where Swara tells Sanskaar how her miscarriage was a loss for everyone, I cried, (I personally did like it, as a writer and when you say it was heart wrenching, well, I think I wrote it well.)

The start scenes, Veena and Sharon were right, it gets easier to write with time.😉

Oh, I will keep writing, especially after your note on RR, I do not want to stop writing.😳😳

love you loads,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: blindassassin
Nynu
Yesterday proved to be a day full of surprises. First Saku and then you decided to post something in the forum.
And it was perfect...The love, pain, hurt,hope...Everything so relatable and not overdone.
I loved how you never went back to the original incidents of the past but instead summarised the events in the present itself. Impulsive swara and patient Sanskar ...Still a picture perfect couple...
But love as strong as this can make every pain vanish.
And I loved the silk shirt with silver lining...

Hoping to see you more often in the forum
Veena.

Dear Veena,

I am so glad to see you too, and that you found the OS perfect, as mentioned above, I was not too sure if it was alright to switch the moods so starkly.

So it was not preachy, either (part of me worried on this too).

I did not want to use the 'flashback mode' it was only supposed to be their emotional turmoil and their realisation that despite everything that happened, as long as they were together sharing each sorrow as equally as they shared their joys, they could overcome every pain.

The shirt with silver lines (thought it could be an overdose of silver lines😉 but guess the gamble paid off)

I will always be a part of this forum, it is just that I am not able to find much time to update FM ( too many threads to be kept in line and a lot of personal & professional commitments) and that leaves me a little shamefaced. But I will keep coming back here.

love,

Nyna

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