SwaSan Spectrum - OS Series - Page 4

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Nyna

I woke up on a Sunday morning unprepared for something like this. First a special mention from one of the most loved and talented writer of the forum!!!! what more can I ask?. Thankyou dear ,the eternal romantic you are ,I wanted to know how you would potray their love after marriage. And you have lavishly treated me with what I wanted. There is a saying in my language. I asked for a flower ,you gave me a garden. Thank you ,once again.

I am simply glad that you liked it, I had a vague idea for this, which I could not fit into the story arc and there was no way it could be suited to FM, so I simply filed it in my head. When I read your comment on Amaranthine, I could not resist writing it out and ...well glad you liked it.

Now swara doing a hip move in that dress, what a scene!!!! No wonder sanskar could not hold beyond first three lines. One may think ,is it this hard to learn a few steps? But here it is not helly or the normal swara that is learning dance, but the mathematical genius who never knew there is world beyond maths who is learning something challenging.Kudos for your creativity. Hope there will a series of One Shots to follow.We crazy fans are never satisfied.

You got it perfectly, for Swara in this AU, dancing was absolutely something unheard of - she is someone who does not like being photographed even, for her letting go of her inhibitions to learn to dance for Sanskaar - he understood it very well, how much effort and courage it must have taken her.

I hope to write a series too- wish me luck😊

Love you, Veena...

You may be feeling apprehensive about writing love making scenes.But let me assure you..it was beautiful nothing vulgar in it. And as shru once said it's only a first time shyness( zenith)later will enjoy writing it. Hope it will the same with you.

And this is precisely the stamp of approval I needed - Thanks a ton

Originally posted by: lucky.m

So lets have a group hug ... on bahon main Chale aao

Originally posted by: sneharay

Awesome.. 😊

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Aao na..., gaale lagao na...

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Wooohooo Nynu dearest!! 🤗
Superb OS. 👏 I loved that Swara's bold move has been finally paid off. 😉 Loved this OS sooo muchhh!!! ❤️
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: lucky.m

😳 Nynu 🤗.🤗..This is just awesome Bangaram..I loved it loved it loved it .👏⭐️

Lucky😳😳😳

When I first saw the siggy I was like ..JDJ ka pic was used for Swara.. but I get it why now. Swara's all efforts to show her dance moves .. Sunny couldn't resist for long and then the romance subtle and my dil goes hmmm ...😳☺️

Swara's efforts - poor thing she really had to slog it out - after all dance moves are not mathematical equations. Sanskaar - dimaag phir gayi hogi - here he comes home fully prepared for a confrontation and is met by his wife - as he later said - who was quite bewitching in her appearance. And his dil went - dhak dhak...😉

Sanskaar watching Sunny Leone😆 though he didnt intend to .I am sure he might be thinking of his Swara ..some geometric and arithmetic progressions you know.😉 and Raat akeli hain bujgaye diye ..Such a nice selection.😳

Oh he had no eyes for Sunny Leone - he had other figures (the tender numbers) in his head and a blank look in his eyes. But then Swara... well she made up for her mistake in a fantastic way, did she not? "Raat akeli hai" my eternal favourite and IMO the number one seduction song - soft sensuous and absolutely suggestive😉

Lovely One Bangaram👏⭐️ .. sure to get some lovely dreams of Swasan..all thanks ..no thanks to you.Waiting for other colors to paint the canvas.

I hope so too... after all there are so many colours...hope you had great dreams😉

Love

Lucky

PS ;What do u think of Bahon main chale aao from Anamika where Swara tries to manofy an angry Sunny.It would be so😳 na

Originally posted by: showrav24

Hello nyna dear
its a beautiful & hot sensuous update I loved it dear.
lol swara behave like a typical wife & poor sanskar without noticed sunny Leone jhelling wife angryness.
first time her behena suggest something worthy for swasan & there fans hehe haha.
swara devi ur husband already latto on u see it hard work went vain that also itna latto that not give u chance to complete 3 step poor girl.
loved their moments dear & their deal also.
thanks u.
waiting for ur next part of this series update soon
Take care
Bye.

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Nynu...🤗

Still battling with paucity of time, but wanted to quickly drop in and say---how much I love the song selection. 'Raat Akeli hai'...haaye haaye. 😳 ☺️ One of Asha's gems; another great one being 'Aao Na, Gale Lagao Na...' . Both of them steamingly sensual, without being ribald or bawdy. No wonder Sunny couldn't keep his hands off Swara for more than 3 moves. 😉

So Sunny is a Asha fan in your fics. 😆 Just as SwaSan are Lata/ Rafi/ Manna Dey fans in mine. 😉 BTW your faves are Rafi and Asha na? Or is it Manna Dey and Asha?

Another lovely number which springs to mind is 'Baahon mein chali aao'--again Asha I guess? But the mood there is different, more naughty and sprite like, not steamy seductress. 😉

If Sunny was a more modern song/ Madhuri Dixit fan, Swara could have done a 'Dhak Dhak karne laga' as well. 😆 Though that would have ahem! moved from the suggestive category to a rather more open declaration of intent! 😆 No 'suggestion' or 'reading between the lines' left no? 😆 Though I have always been a Madhuri fangirl, and will be one for life!

Lots of Love,

----Viji