Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
My Dearest Nynu 🤗 🤗
I haven't been by the forum for an age, and I am so, so very sorry that its taking me such a long time to comment on this beautiful, very sensitive and wonderfully emotional take on a couple's trauma after a miscarriage, and how that shared pain can sometimes cause friction between them as well as bring them together.
Here, with your customary masterful touch; you have portrayed both----the frustration, despair and anguish making Swara lash out initially at a Sanskaar who was desperate to console her, and then the 2 months of tense reserve and the agony of emotional withdrawal that followed. The way you described their rapprochement and reconciliation was superb---note perfect with its nuance and tone. That bit where Sanskaar hesitantly asks if he could hold her----that deserved a standing ovation, for your empathy and understanding of both their psyches, their shared pain which they experienced (and showed) in their own individual ways.
I have also PMed you some personal thoughts about this very emotional fic. You are a wonderful writer and person, Nynu. The emotions you pour into SwaSan in your fics---they reflect the depth and sincerity of your heart.
God Bless, and may the muse always shine bright on your writing.
Loads of Love,
----Viji