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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Razia,

Never apologise for delayed replies, I know you read my tales and that is quite enough though I do love it when you comment.😳take care and stay blessed,

love,
Nyna

Thank you so much for the comemets it makes so much sense and love the detailing...hope the magic strikes soon...

Razia 😛

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Nynu darling...
What an outstanding update... like u said...no relationship is all sunshine...there are ups n downs in life..this was a down period for swasan...but it felt great knowing..they emerge from this difficult period in life...sanky didnot gave up on his relationship..but when that time limit of space increased i got scared for them..their relationship...but then swara decided to come back and not gave up...both talked their heart out...their convo was soul touching...i felt both their pain of lossing their unborn child...overall itwas great...relished n cherished swasan in every scene...thank u for this...
Love u
Muahhh
Talia

Dear Talia,

How can any relationship be all sunshine and roses, they have to learn to weather all storms, and for a married couple, losing a baby is the worst. But then Swara and Sanskaar, though they drifted apart, did realise that grieving together was the way they could survive this storm.

Glad to know you relished and cherished the SwaSan scenes, I was apprehensive, the way I shifted from one scale to the extreme, but now I think I got the balance right.

Sanskaar is not the kind who gives up and for a change it is Swara who realises how wrong she was, so once she said sorry, Sanskaar could really not stay angry with her (though he was actually more hurt than angry).

love you too,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: raaz19

Thank you so much for the comemets it makes so much sense and love the detailing...hope the magic strikes soon...

Razia 😛

🤗🤗 🤗 🤗

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

🤗🤗 🤗 🤗

😆😆 thank you for making me 😛😛

And hugs are returned too 😳

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Sushma Yadav

@Limerence

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Its awesome dear but being a woman a feeling a life inside is heaven to herself, she attached to that live in a unique way and being a sensitive and too much attached and again sanskar love everything as you have explained all swara's pov swara's reaction is justified as we can't imagine a mother loss.

Its just she herself is so confused and in pain, she was not in her right state which is common.

But aa swara's loss, sanskar also lost a precious gem both are in pain. Both need each other but its a situation.

I really loved it

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Res for Cinereal Streaks..

I am already in love with the title <3<3

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Sushma98999
Its awesome dear but being a woman a feeling a life inside is heaven to herself, she attached to that live in a unique way and being a sensitive and too much attached and again sanskar love everything as you have explained all swara's pov swara's reaction is justified as we can't imagine a mother loss.
Its just she herself is so confused and in pain, she was not in her right state which is common.
But aa swara's loss, sanskar also lost a precious gem both are in pain. Both need each other but its a situation.

I really loved it

Dear Sushma,

I am not witness to that feeling,but I can understand that it must be blissful to feel life growing inside you and the agony of losing a baby. That is what I tried to portray, Swara was right to grieve but wrong to push everyone away, especially Sanskaar. It was the situation that put Swara in that place, however she had to realise that even Sanskaar was hurting, yet he never stopped caring for her.

But then she did realise in the nick of time, to battle both her grief and that of Sanskaar's, for both lost their baby.

Thank you, for loving the story.

Best,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Sparkler8
Res for Cinereal Streaks..
I am already in love with the title <3<3

Sharon,🤗, will wait.

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Sparkler8
Res for Cinereal Streaks.
I am already in love with the title <3<3

Hi Nyna,

After a long time, an OS is a good place for me to start reading and replying all my Res comments.

Starting with the banner, it creates a gloomy picture of turbulent times which I am so looking forward to in the story. The quote is very poetic.

"Secret sympathy", "Silver link", "silken tie"

This set of the triad is going into my collection.

The starting scene follows the gloom of the banner. However, the shirt turned the mood around. The variety of emotions floating around was enthralling.

I can't stop but keep going back to that triad of how the secret of the gloominess, silver and silk are all depicted in the story.

Coming to your footnotes, my impression of "Cine-" prefix was that something cloaked or disguised as glam. Probably because I had always associated it with "Cinema". Today I understood the connection between "Cine-" and the colour grey.

Frankly, I had missed the words in the banner. So reading the FnR2, I went back to read them. Again, very apt to the atmosphere of the tale.

Now back to the colour book (FnR3). I always thought of silver as masculine and something very difficult to break while gold is a ductile metal which can flow into various forms at lower temperatures. I now want to go and search out the internet for the colour Silver and its meanings in different disciples.

While I can thank you for the info and amazing story, I feel like welcoming you back. You are back in your zone, Nyna! Keep up the spirits and keep writing.

Cheers

Sharon

Edited by Sparkler8 - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Hi Nyna,

After a long time, an OS is a good place for me to start reading and replying all my Res comments.

Starting with the banner, it creates a gloomy picture of turbulent times which I am so looking forward to in the story. The quote is very poetic.

"Secret sympathy", "Silver link", "silken tie"
This set of the triad is going into my collection.

The starting scene follows the gloom of the banner. However, the shirt turned the mood around. The variety of emotions floating around was enthralling.

I can't stop but keep going back to that triad of how the secret of the gloominess, silver and silk are all depicted in the story.

Coming to your footnotes, my impression of "Cine-" prefix was that something cloaked or disguised as glam. Probably because I had always associated it with "Cinema". Today I understood the connection between "Cine-" and the colour grey.

Frankly, I had missed the words in the banner. So reading the FnR2, I went back to read them. Again, very apt to the atmosphere of the tale.

Now back to the colour book (FnR3). I always thought of silver as masculine and something very difficult to break while gold is a ductile metal which can flow into various forms at lower temperatures. I now want to go and search out the internet for the colour Silver and its meanings in different disciples.

While I can thank you for the info and amazing story, I feel like welcoming you back. You are back in your zone, Nyna! Keep up the spirits and keep writing.

Cheers
Sharon

Dear Sharon,

I simply love reading your comments, they are absolutely analytical and I feel amazed that I have written something to warrant such a comment.

And I have told before also, I guess, but then whenever I feel a little lazy about posting the FnRs, I remember that you actually read all of them so I go ahead and post all those notes.😊

And thanks for the welcome - that tantrum helped I guess😉 I have an SS and OS bouncing in my head. Well, you will know when I post them😊

Best,

Nyna