SwaSan SS - FITOOR - Snippet #3-PG 37 (25/3/17)

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Res for Chapter one..I know yet to unres on Fanaa.. will try to do it tomorrow

Unres

Lucky..Such a different style of writing and girl you nailed it👏..Somehow i was so taken with the story..I am not able to express in words on how much i loved this chapter.. The way you were able to express their feeling was so good.. Me loved it so very much ... And story is so interesting as well..Really curious about Swara reason for breaking up and Loved Sanskar determination to win her back..I know Swara was angry but she is not marrying anyone else right.. 😉..

Their first meet was so awesome.. And her not being to take her eyes off him...And him being taken with her voice..It was beautiful..What happened in the past two months. I am curious but will wait and find out i suppose..😆..

Words wont be able to do justice to how much i loved this chapter Lucky.. I must have reread the chapter 4 times already 😆 and i am short on time , if not would have read it more than that.. There was something so interesting in the chapter and me so loved it ..😳... Before this becomes an boring Essay..Let me stop right here... Cant wait for next chapter dear

With lots of love

Nita

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Res 😊😉

Am so breathlessly eager to read. 🤗

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Loved loved loved loved loved loved loved it.. Will be back with unres once I stop rereading this amazing chapter

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Res for part 1 Lucky.😳
Unresed @ 7.😃

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Res 😊😉

Am so breathlessly eager to read. 🤗

I am breathlessly eager to know your thoughts🤗🤗

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Loved loved loved loved loved loved loved it.. Will be back with unres once I stop rereading this amazing chapter

😳😳 Thanks a lot nita..I am you loved it so much😳

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Res for part 1 Lucky.😳

Aheli🤗🤗..take your time

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: lucky.m

I am breathlessly eager to know your thoughts🤗🤗

It was electrifying, spine tingling, mesmerizing, enthralling, bewitching, enchanting, beguiling. 😳⭐️

That SwaSan interaction was just so passionately intense, Lucky my dear. ☺️ Seismic, nuclear in its intensity. 👏👏👏 The irresistible, irrevocable pull they have towards each other was wonderful to read about. Kudos for a marvelously penned chappie.

I'll be back for more, and on the Fanaa thread as well. Please bear with the delay, dear. All the antihistamines are making me feel so groggy that I'm hitting the sack much earlier these days. This cough just isn't letting go of me easily. 😕

But reading this made me feel so much better. 😳

Loads of Love

Viji

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

It was electrifying, spine tingling, mesmerizing, enthralling, bewitching, enchanting, beguiling. 😳⭐️

That SwaSan interaction was just so passionately intense, Lucky my dear. ☺️ Seismic, nuclear in its intensity. 👏👏👏 The irresistible, irrevocable pull they have towards each other was wonderful to read about. Kudos for a marvelously penned chappie.

I'll be back for more, and on the Fanaa thread as well. Please bear with the delay, dear. All the antihistamines are making me feel so groggy that I'm hitting the sack much earlier these days. This cough just isn't letting go of me easily. 😕

But reading this made me feel so much better. 😳

Loads of Love

Viji

You just made my day 😳..get well soon ..and I.am super glad I could make u feel better darlin...

Love

Lucky

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Aheli🤗🤗..take your time

Hey Lucky dearest!!🤗
Awesome awesome awesome!!!!👏👏👏 So perfectly written!!👍🏼
Oh I just loved Swasan moments so much!!!😳 It was so hot hot!!😉 The song "Chura Liya" is one of my fav song too.😳 SwaSan cares for each other and loves each other.😃 They r each other's 'Fitoor'.😉 So why the breakup??😕 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

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