SwaSan SS - FITOOR - Snippet #3-PG 37 (25/3/17)

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Lucky dearest 🤗

Whoop whoop- a new one from you! Already addicted with Fanaa, I am so going to develop a Fitoor for this one too 😆 (sorry about the bad puns!).

Very interesting synopsis Lucky and that excerpt is so very beguiling, I want to harass for more asap but know you will deliver as soon as you can anyway 😳. I loved that little snippet of scene you had us glimpse into. This is a Sanskaar ofc different from the show in the sense that is barricades are for a different reason but of course Swara will wiggle her way in! I loved the excerpt- how Sanskaar is so taken by Swara and her eyes, he's clearly already throwing punches for her and I LOVE the Swara in this already- she clearly wants to kiss away his hurts and ahhh the possibilities are so beguiling! I shall be anxiously waiting for more!

Love always,

Shru

PS: I may get late commenting as drowning in commitments but will be here whenever I can 😳

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

yippeee..
new story.🥳.

what an intense start lucky.
katti beginning ra banagaram.

would love to see how this bewitching girl will break down the walls the man has surrounded his heart with.

cheers to new beginning.
good luck and god speed lucky🤗

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Hey Lucky!! The excerpt is fabulous!! I unres with chapter one😃

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Aheli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Aheli

Will wait for you to un res😊🤗

Already unresed yesterday at pg 2.😆😳

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showrav

@showrav24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Hello dost

wow another swasan from u egarly waiting dear.

synopsis & excerpt is beautiful. swara will fulfill his love life what he carving from childhood.

update soon dear.

bye

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Lucky dearest 🤗
Whoop whoop- a new one from you! Already addicted with Fanaa, I am so going to develop a Fitoor for this one too 😆 (sorry about the bad puns!).

Very interesting synopsis Lucky and that excerpt is so very beguiling, I want to harass for more asap but know you will deliver as soon as you can anyway 😳. I loved that little snippet of scene you had us glimpse into. This is a Sanskaar ofc different from the show in the sense that is barricades are for a different reason but of course Swara will wiggle her way in! I loved the excerpt- how Sanskaar is so taken by Swara and her eyes, he's clearly already throwing punches for her and I LOVE the Swara in this already- she clearly wants to kiss away his hurts and ahhh the possibilities are so beguiling! I shall be anxiously waiting for more!

Love always,
Shru

PS: I may get late commenting as drowning in commitments but will be here whenever I can 😳

Shru ..🤗🤗..I am so happy seeing you here sweet heart and I loved the pun😉

Loved that you loved excerpt and Synopsis...I wanted give Sanskaar a different BG here ..hence I killed AP..😆🤣..Jokes Apart..Sanskaar is definitely more than charmed by swara but sunny is no less charmer ..swara would be swept off her feet soon ..after all who can resist sanskaar maheswari😳❤️

I will be updating by mid of week and I hope it keeps you hooked further ..no probs yaar ..Inspite of pressing commitments you took time out to read and comment ..that means a lot to me 😛...would love to hear from you anytime .you know how much your comments means to me😊.🤗🤗

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Lucky

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Res here as well ..

Unres

Lucky another amazing start , me very interested . cant wait to read chapter 1.I am going to love this journey.

Sanskar lost his mom and DP is always busy. Nice setup for Sanskar , now i am so eager to see how Swara manages to break his walls..Really loved it lucky..And the brief excerpt from Chapter 1,way to tease someone ..Do update Chapter one soon..

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Nita

Hi nita🤗🤗

Thanks a lot yaar ..I am glad you loved the start and wants to read further and I am so excited seeing your excitement for this story ..this keeps me going

Thanks once again..😛 will try to update by mid of week

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Lucky

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Very interesting..
Update soon

Thanks a lot😛

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Lucky darling...
U made my night i would say...such an amazing prologue...impactfull n deep ...sigh...ahhh...i just felt those words..instant connect...when it comes to story of hidden pain..fear n agony..i just cant express you how much i enjoy these type of stories...knowing a particular person pain n somehow take him out of his misery..is what i like...loved it baby...will for chapter 1.

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Talia

Talia🤗🤗

Wow ..Thanks dearie ...its an absolute delight to know that you felt instant connect .that means a lot for a writer and of course to know that you loved it 😳..will update Asap

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Lucky

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.
yippeee..
new story.🥳.

what an intense start lucky.
katti beginning ra banagaram.

would love to see how this bewitching girl will break down the walls the man has surrounded his heart with.

cheers to new beginning.
good luck and god speed lucky🤗

Bangaram 🤗🤗

Thanku thanku..tune maari entriyaan..shubh aaramb ..😉..Beginning katti lage undi ..tarvata ela untundo 😆😲..Nimmi ..I usually tend go with flow and end up doing long updates/ additions to the scsenes ..but here I am trying to limit myself and see If I can keepp it short and sweet and stick to what I have thought ..Hence the attempt new for me ... Lets see how it fares ..😛

Thanks for dropping by ..Love u

Lucky

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