SwaSan SS - FITOOR - Snippet #3-PG 37 (25/3/17)

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Lucky🤗☺️

kuncham jaali daya dakshinam lekunda antha hot - That was spine tingling and one that left me breathless - how beautifully you have written the irresistible pull they have for each other

and I am:

Will get back with a detailed comment.

love,

Nyna

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Lucky🤗☺️

kuncham jaali daya dakshinam lekunda antha hot - That was spine tingling and one that left me breathless - how beautifully you have written the irresistible pull they have for each other

and I am:

Will get back with a detailed comment.

love,

Nyna

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🤗 nynu ...did I say I love that emo ...and you too ..ilanti vishalaylo jaali daya asalu ledu naaku ...🤣🤣😈..looks like my asanskaati venture is on right track ..lol ..hope u are much better now .. Health wise ,btw raasi nappudu naa paristjithi ..ela undi untundi ..oka sari imagine chesuko😆...

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Aheli

😳thanks a lot dearie ..glad u loved it ..will reply in detail tomorrow ..your comment made me all 😳

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Lucky

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: lucky.m

You just made my day 😳..get well soon ..and I.am super glad I could make u feel better darlin...

Love
Lucky

In my head, I can picture Sunny singing this:

Ye fitoor mera laaya mujhko hai tere kareeb
Ye fitoor mera rehmat teri
Ye fitoor mera maine badla re mera naseeb
Ye fitoor mera chahat teri
O parvardigara, parvardigara

😳☺️

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: lucky.m

🤗 nynu ...did I say I love that emo ...and you too ..ilanti vishalaylo jaali daya asalu ledu naaku ...🤣🤣😈..looks like my asanskaati venture is on right track ..lol ..hope u are much better now .. Health wise ,btw raasi nappudu naa paristjithi ..ela undi untundi ..oka sari imagine chesuko😆...

Love
Lucky

Raasi nappudu purthiga chavatalu kari vuntaya - all that heat and fear - naaku enta bhayammo raayadaniki, maamulu scenes 10 times alochinstanu, good bad ugly😳😳😳, confidence chaala low, gaani try chestunanu🤢

I am feeling much much better - but office work backlog does not leave me much time to stalk IF. But then you update leaves my dreamy and hot, I am going to read it again and sleep like this:

Maybe you can make a trilogy - Fida??? That is what I am over your stories.

love,

Nyna

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Lucky baby🤗... Finally won the battle with Chrome on my idiot phone .. cache and cookies and😕.. anyway ff load hua 😃and may I just say...

Fantastico👏👏👏... The maestro returns👍🏼... I knew you'd smash this into outer space, and boy did you👏 .. Angles and *Kon*s tho jaise... Me Kya batau ab😳😳😳... Screen jal gaya sk😆😆.. mere gaal bhi 😳

Res res... Me in stratosphere somewhere... Neche ake detail me batati hu 😆😆

PS: me in the zone of course... But this was so worth the risk😆

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: lucky.m

😳😳 Thanks a lot nita..I am you loved it so much😳

I did ..I loved it so very much

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Res for Chapter one..I know yet to unres on Fanaa.. will try to do it tomorrow

Unres

Lucky..Such a different style of writing and girl you nailed it👏..Somehow i was so taken with the story..I am not able to express in words on how much i loved this chapter.. The way you were able to express their feeling was so good.. Me loved it so very much ... And story is so interesting as well..Really curious about Swara reason for breaking up and Loved Sanskar determination to win her back..I know Swara was angry but she is not marrying anyone else right.. 😉..

Their first meet was so awesome.. And her not being to take her eyes off him...And him being taken with her voice..It was beautiful..What happened in the past two months. I am curious but will wait and find out i suppose..😆..

Words wont be able to do justice to how much i loved this chapter Lucky.. I must have reread the chapter 4 times already 😆 and i am short on time , if not would have read it more than that.. There was something so interesting in the chapter and me so loved it ..😳... Before this becomes an boring Essay..Let me stop right here... Cant wait for next chapter dear

With lots of love

Nita

Hi Nita 🤗🤗

I cant tell you how happy your words made ..This is something new for me ..this style and genre I am trying to attempt and I cam so delighted that you loved it a lot ..Trust me that means a lot to me...and I would love to read an essay from you 😆

Nope swara will not be marrying anyone else ..She was hurt and angry on sanskaar and herself hence the out burst.You will get ti know the reason for the break up and what happened in last 2 months in the coming chapters😉

First meet .😳😳.Thanks again ..I wanted it to be special .meet over music😉

Will have to start working on next one soon😛

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

You just made my day 😳..get well soon ..and I.am super glad I could make u feel better darlin...

Love

Lucky

In my head, I can picture Sunny singing this:

Ye fitoor mera laaya mujhko hai tere kareeb
Ye fitoor mera rehmat teri
Ye fitoor mera maine badla re mera naseeb
Ye fitoor mera chahat teri
O parvardigara, parvardigara

😳☺️

Viji🤗

This song is special bcos the title for Fitoor was picked from this one ..I have struggled for a while what to name this 4S ..though some titles crossed my mind ..I didn't feel they would justify The min I heard this song I knew this gotta be one 😉.😉

Well If we cant make him sing ..we can make them dance on this number😉😳

Hope you are on your way to recovery ..get well soon ..😛

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Raasi nappudu purthiga chavatalu kari vuntaya - all that heat and fear - naaku enta bhayammo raayadaniki, maamulu scenes 10 times alochinstanu, good bad ugly😳😳😳, confidence chaala low, gaani try chestunanu🤢
I am feeling much much better - but office work backlog does not leave me much time to stalk IF. But then you update leaves my dreamy and hot, I am going to read it again and sleep like this:

Maybe you can make a trilogy - Fida??? That is what I am over your stories.

love,
Nyna

@ bold ; Awww thats the best thing someone ever told me for my stories🤗 🤗❤️...Now I am really nervous how the remaining chapters would fare ...Fida ..😆 Let me see If I can try one😉

Bayama ..nuuvu ala ante mari memu emi avvali madam ..you are one of the best story tellers in forum ..bond paper meeda raasi istha kavalante😛...

😳😳 Dreamy ..😆 My pleasure if I could give you some smiles..Be fit as fiddle soon bangaram

Love

Lucky