SwaSan SS - FITOOR - Snippet #3-PG 37 (25/3/17) - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Aish_21

Lucky baby🤗... Finally won the battle with Chrome on my idiot phone .. cache and cookies and😕.. anyway ff load hua 😃and may I just say...


Fantastico👏👏👏... The maestro returns👍🏼... I knew you'd smash this into outer space, and boy did you👏 .. Angles and *Kon*s tho jaise... Me Kya batau ab😳😳😳... Screen jal gaya sk😆😆.. mere gaal bhi 😳

Res res... Me in stratosphere somewhere... Neche ake detail me batati hu 😆😆


PS: me in the zone of course... But this was so worth the risk😆


sweetoo🤗

🤣 I love ghoomofying you in outer space you know that ..😉..Jalane ke liye hi tho likha hain sk ..mission accomplished😉😛🤗 ab tak tho utar gayi stratosphere se ya me aau tujhe niche laane ke liye..😆 and I love u ..I don't need to say more😳❤️
Edited by lucky.m - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98


Hey Lucky dearest!!🤗
Awesome awesome awesome!!!!👏👏👏 So perfectly written!!👍🏼
Oh I just loved Swasan moments so much!!!😳 It was so hot hot!!😉 The song "Chura Liya" is one of my fav song too.😳 SwaSan cares for each other and loves each other.😃 They r each other's 'Fitoor'.😉 So why the breakup??😕 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

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Aheli sweet heart ..🤗

Thanks Dearie..you caught it absolutely right ..swasan are each others "Fitoor" ..Why the break up?? ..You will get an answer in coming chapters . and swasan moments ..😳Glad you loved them and give me a hi 5 on churaliya 😉

Yet to start work on next part ..need to type it out but will try to make it sooner

Love
Lucky
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: lucky.m

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Aheli sweet heart ..🤗

Thanks Dearie..you caught it absolutely right ..swasan are each others "Fitoor" ..Why the break up?? ..You will get an answer in coming chapters . and swasan moments ..😳Glad you loved them and give me a hi 5 on churaliya 😉

Yet to start work on next part ..need to type it out but will try to make it sooner

Love
Lucky


Welcome siso.😛 Eagerly waiting!😆 *Hi five Lucky darling for the song Churaliya!!*😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lucky baby..
Beautiful update...right from swara awakening in strangers bedroom...finding out whom it belong to...sansku teasing...swara embaresment...concern regarding him..to that soulfull hot kiss..i just loved it...

Backstory of how they met was awesomely etched...n that song chura liya hai tumne jo dill ko...fits perfectly..indeed sunny boy is a charmer...his looks can just kill anyone...still eager to know why they seperated??? Unveil soon...waiting...

Love
Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: lucky.m

sweetoo🤗

🤣 I love ghoomofying you in outer space you know that ..😉..Jalane ke liye hi tho likha hain sk ..mission accomplished😉😛🤗 ab tak tho utar gayi stratosphere se ya me aau tujhe niche laane ke liye..😆 and I love u ..I don't need to say more😳❤️



oh i did honey😆... weekend ka end and prospect of office does tend to bring me down from stratosphere😛 ... but my phne and chrome and IF ka you know na 😕... phone tho sabse zyada ... service centre jana hi padega... getting out of hand ... and enough tech woes, lets get down to it 😉😉

Have to start with the past ... Chura liya ... haye that song ... me tho personally fida on that it ... and ye Fitoor me aa gaya😛... and the eye lock ... Swara ki nazre ja atki wo bhi kaha 😳... it must be fate ... kismet ... and Sanskaar ka killer smile😳😳 ...


And then she wakes up. Intrusive morning sun, the strange bed, the confusion and instant distress over one night of overindulgence, can totally see that 👍🏼... and of course the profound sense of relief at seeing his beloved face😳 instead of a random stranger.

And what followed ... I still cant find words ... me all 😳😳... Sansku and husky voice and naughty eyes ... God save us all☺️., Swara tho gone case hai anyway 😆😆😆...

And then... wham. Emotional whirlwind. His anger, concern😳, her distress, bitterweet memories💔, passion☺️, madness... sizzle, spark and smolder😃... and the rocket launcher kiss😳😳😳... *sigh* me halfway to stratosphere again 😆...

Supremely etched darling👏👏👏 ... was missing your hotties😉... kya din the wo Dakshna wale😛 ... you had to come bring us down from outer space me and Rupu 😆...

sooo waiting for next instalment ... Spaceship tho launch ho gaya wo last wale kissie se😳.., aage kya hoga



PS: ilu too baby
❤️... dont have to say it 🤗🤗🤗


PPS: adha ghanta laga ye post karne ko .. multiple tries... aur phir double bonanza .. tera post do bar quote hua😆 ... idiot IF and mad Chrome ...
Edited by Aish_21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Lucky baby..

Beautiful update...right from swara awakening in strangers bedroom...finding out whom it belong to...sansku teasing...swara embaresment...concern regarding him..to that soulfull hot kiss..i just loved it...

Backstory of how they met was awesomely etched...n that song chura liya hai tumne jo dill ko...fits perfectly..indeed sunny boy is a charmer...his looks can just kill anyone...still eager to know why they seperated??? Unveil soon...waiting...

Love
Talia


Talia🤗


First of all extremely sorry for delay in revert for your lovely comment..so glad to know that you loved it 😳😃😛 and the back story as well..and yes sunny boy is killer of course a charming one😉

You will get to know in further updates the reason for separation😛

Love
Lucky

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Posted: 8 years ago
#67

😛 Thank you😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Thank you sneha😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb 4S... so passionate & intense!!
Its been so many days since u hv updated it... pls update it soon!
gosh they are burning the chapters 😳.. cant wait to read further 🤪
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
Hey Lucky Darling,🤗🤗
When will u update ch-2??😳 I'm eagerly waiting for it.😉
With love,
Aheli.

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