Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august) - Page 14

Hai lucky..

I wouldn't mind lengthy chapters in fact I would love it ...I see it as a treat from u ... "Aaashirwad " was a good one ...I rolled off the bed laughing like a maniac ...BTW thanks for the pm ...will wait for the next chapter

Originally posted by: lucky.m

papam mari😆😆.. love lo padali i ante aa matram undali ga😉

Prema kosamai valavo pade ne papam pasivaadu😆🤣

will waiit😛 for you to un res

***sigh****

hiii lucky ...this is again a wonderful and captivating update.
This story is moving in a perfectly gripping manner and I especially adore the way he is fascinated by her...an act which he is doing almost on an involuntary basis but cannot accord a reasonable logic to it😳.But that is what love does, it dissolves all rational , boundaries , logics , sensibility and casts a novice , intoxicating charm which most of the times is irrevocable.
The business man perspective you have inserted in his character is again very appealing and the fact that he registers things around from business stance , and not just from a lover's outlook , is a rare and admirable quality , something which ascribes it a realistic touch.
Swara is so ethereal and vivacious ... her empathy and concern for the orphanage has an unfading beauty with amplifies the sublime trait of this SS.
Hilarious moments like ashirwad 😆 also got perfectly mingled with the style of the story and indeed his reaction and musings was guaranteed laughter inducing .
Excellent work👏
Will anxiously wait for the next update.

PS thank you for the PM

Originally posted by: Vini224

A very cute update.

Never knew reading about characters involved in shopping would be so much fun.

That aashirwaad kiska was a riot.😆

And Sanskar is already thinking of their next shopping trip😳

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: sneharay

Awesome Update..
Through out reading this update I am smiling 😊

Originally posted by: raaz19

Hi lucky. ..Thanks for the om. ..must sat with each update the story gets more entertaining...loved the bond between swara and the kids...shopping trip too cute...

Update soon...

Raz

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Lucky 🤗

Viji🤗🤗

I just loved the chapter. Sunny being so captivated by Swara...and trying to figure out why. 😆😉

Poor Sunny boy😆 Too confused.. too lost in naina lagavat with chamak choriyan😆

His accompanying her for her grocery shopping and picking up stuff for the kids was so nice. The whole outing had this warm feel to it. They are both such good human beings na...that's one more thing which stands out in this fic. Their concern for the orphanage kids, their no holds barred affection for them...not everyone is so empathetic. Lovely portrayal by you, and I just fell a little more in love with both of their characters. 🤗

😛🤗 sunny boy hain hi itna cute😳 our darlin. This trait of their unconditional love for kids is going to major factor which would help their bond to grow stronger😊

Sunny boy has really been bowled over by Swara's energy and unaffected charm and enthusiasm. Not to mention her sunny smiles. 😉 He is already planning their next grocery shopping outing huh? Am sure inviting her for a lunch/ dinner "meeting" isn't far. 😆😳

😆😆..yeah totally bowled over, . swara hasi tho Sanskaar phasa😆😉 and dinner meeting .. soon😉

BTW, that little nugget, about Sanskaar thinking he could observe consumer behavior from the way Swara made her purchase decisions, was fun. 😆 😆. Thought like a true businessman! Like I said before, I really like the details you've given about his career in marketing, and the way he handles his work life.

Being MBA students rubs off too much I guess sometimes😆 CSR, Consumer Behaviour 😆..It always feels good when these small things get noted by readers like you😛 Thank you..oops here's a HUG🤗

In this case, I feel even though Sunny boy may think he wants to observe Swara to gauge buying decisions of a consumer, he actually wants to gaze at her simply because he is enchanted by her. 😉

Consumer behavior is good bahana for sunny boy..isnt it ?😆😆

So Sanskaar has decided to contribute to the orphanage in his personal capacity and not from his family firm. You know, I wonder if the name "Maheshwari" would ring bells for Swara...does it have something to do with her bitter experience in the past? She doesn't yet know Sanskaar's surname as of now, isn't it? The last time, Sanskaar was interrupted before he could tell her his full name. And now this aspect of Maheshwari and Sons not figuring in the discussions for support to the orphanage. Am curious. 😊 Very tantalizing.

Sanskaar is a maheswari.. swara will not be knowing this soon and when she gets to know it may have some consequences not serious ones😉 .

Sanskaar not registering Ashirwad as the Atta brand, amid all his focus on Swara, was so funny as well as romantic in a way. This dude is sure falling fast. 😉

He is on his way of singing ..mujhe neend na mujhe chain na aaye.. na jaane mera dil khogaya😆 soon..and that asshirwaad part ..🤣 I had so much fun writing the same

Love

Viji

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hey Lucky!!🤗
This chapter was just awesome!!!👏
Loved Sanskar's affection towards his sister Uttara.😃
And the bonding between Swara and Sanskar was so sweet.😳
Awww! Swara helping Sanskar to shop for Uttara.😳
And Sanskar accompaning Swara for her grocery.😉
And him staring at Swara.😆😳
He is completely bowled by her charm and innocence!!!😉
And Sanskar didn't register that Swara was asking him for Ashirwad atta, not anyone's 'Ashirwad'.😆
Loved it.😃 Plzz update the next part soon.😳
And thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: sarathy321

Hai lucky..

I read all the parts of ur ff in one go..

Its written nicely. .

U r wonderful writer...

Each meeting of swasan is getting more and more interesting. ..and u have beautifully described those scenes...

For the suspense in the prologue I will be waiting but for now enjoying their meetings. ...

I have sent u a buddy request and hope u sent pms