Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august) - Page 15

Originally posted by: Rachana12

I wouldn't mind lengthy chapters in fact I would love it ...I see it as a treat from u ... "Aaashirwad " was a good one ...I rolled off the bed laughing like a maniac ...BTW thanks for the pm ...will wait for the next chapter

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Dear Lucky,

Nynu🤗🤗

That was such a lovely chapter (long??? - seriously - got over pretty quickly for me).

Sanskaar - I like this suave businessman with a real heart of gold - no wonder he bonded so quickly with the kids (they are so adorable) and I think I can fall in love with the baby angel (she must be very lovable, she liked Sanskaar at first sight😉)

lol ..your theory for angel .. Sanskaar is magical that even kids cant resist his charm😳 inka mana case aithe totally lost😆

So Uttara is his baby sister, cousin but sister all the same. Cosmic connection yet again, he saw the gift shop first or felt her presence first - debatable but the diehard romantic in me, puts it down to the cosmic connection He cannot stop thinking of her and she keeps appearing, and he is lost in her eyes once again. And Swara is quite good with the detective skills, for a change. She deduced that he is a quick thinker and wanted something special for a special girl in his life (was there a twinge of jealousy, not yet, I guess) And all those little details (for which the credit should go to you - I love them- the gifts and the reasons behind them👏👏👏)

Cosmic Connection.and swasan - Irresistible combo😳

Swara and detective skills 😆esp in SR, they give me headache ..but yaha par 😆 true for a change let them be tolerable to audience

Naa Jealousy angle not yet ..and about gifts and their back stories, There's always a reason why we pick a specific gift for our loved ones ..its our basic instinct we tend to match gifts with their tastes, likes etc ..have applied the same logic here ..

Sanskaar is gone - grocery shopping just for her company - and then her shopping list, another of your beautiful gems, those names of the kids and the little tidbits about them.

And that tiny scene, where Sanskaar wants to simply reach out and tuck that errant lock behind her ear - he is truly lost himself.

Bechara , Ishq ka maara - hamara sanskaar pyaara😆

Finally the best part of the Chapter - "Aashirwad le lo". "Kiska?" Priceless🤣🤣🤣 (I personally do not buy this brand but from now on I have a soft corner for it - mera aarshirwad hai, aashirwad ko😉)

Lol Better ITC pay me 😆.. I got them aashirwaad of a new conusmer😉

And Sanskaar cannot even bring himself to be angry or even upset at her uncontrollable mirth. Rather he thinks to himself -Next time.

Oh Yes - so am I. I am waiting, when is it?

Next Time ...very soon😊😉

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Lucky 🤗🤗

Unres page 16.. Sanskaar must now be singing:

Na hrudayamlo nidurinche cheli,

kalalone kavvinche sakhi,

mayuri vai vayyari vai nede,

natanama aadi, nanu dochinaave

Nee kanulona, daagenule vennala sona...

***sigh****

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: sanjana_cool

hiii lucky ...this is again a wonderful and captivating update.
This story is moving in a perfectly gripping manner and I especially adore the way he is fascinated by her...an act which he is doing almost on an involuntary basis but cannot accord a reasonable logic to it😳.But that is what love does, it dissolves all rational , boundaries , logics , sensibility and casts a novice , intoxicating charm which most of the times is irrevocable.
The business man perspective you have inserted in his character is again very appealing and the fact that he registers things around from business stance , and not just from a lover's outlook , is a rare and admirable quality , something which ascribes it a realistic touch.
Swara is so ethereal and vivacious ... her empathy and concern for the orphanage has an unfading beauty with amplifies the sublime trait of this SS.
Hilarious moments like ashirwad 😆 also got perfectly mingled with the style of the story and indeed his reaction and musings was guaranteed laughter inducing .
Excellent work👏
Will anxiously wait for the next update.

PS thank you for the PM

Originally posted by: lucky.m

😆 ANR place lo sanskaar ..🤣 but that song is lovely one yaar ..😊

U know I am thinking of this song as well

Happy lo ..egire mabbula lona pagale vennala vaana😳..I love that song though movie is ok ok

Making leads fall in love hayee such a 😳 and if they are swasan ..inkemi kavaali😊

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Love

Lucky

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Viji🤗

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Lucky

Originally posted by: lucky.m

@ viji🤗🤗

I need hi 5 on that 😛😛..like they say in zoom kya ache din the.. those songs, the feels.😳

Saajan being my fav ..I just love all songs of saajan, bahut pyaar karte hain , dekha hain pehli baar, tumse milne ki tamanna hain , mera dil bhi kitna paagal hain and my fav of all tu shayar hain main teri shayari ..alka yagnik's voice and madhuris performance ..😳 hayee I can watch that song any number of times

Raja - I can only think of akhiyan milao kahbhi akhiyan churao , madhuri dancing and that vintage car 😊

and dil ..I was just thinking ..about hum pyaaar karnewaale duniya se naa darnewaale with dp being anupam kher🤣