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Chapter 20:

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Hey Shruti

Chapter 20 res

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Originally posted by: lucky.m

Hey shruthi🤗

Late ..Ya I know ..But I become selfish when it comes to my fav Fictions , I want to give them my undivided attention,where I could hang on to every word go back read again and again and DK is one of my absolute fav❤️

I loved this chapter, how it had begun with protective sanskaar totally taking over , loved it a bit more when you brought out the emotional turmoil both of them are going through and even more on how they tended each other .. and more and more and more

Very touching chapter 👏.👏👍🏼.⭐️, Mix of emotions , taking us through every feeling what swara and sasnkaar are feeling ,, that's sheer brilliance which you manage to do with every update ..totally loved this chapter ..see I say something again and again😆..loved it❤️

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

Res.unres pehle tho sorry itni late unres ke liye.mere normal delay se bhi zyada hai.mujhe khud ko bura lag raha hai.tho ab chapter 2 large tents .dar laga kahin aapne abhise hi pawan ko competitor nahin bana diya.par swara k liye tent .pawan ki samjhdari achi lagi.den who swara aapne aap ko kaise dirty manti hai
Yeh hi shayad hota hoga kisi bhi larki ke saath jho satayi hui hoti hai.and who bhagwad gita wali baat kitni respect deta hai na swara ko sanskaar.phir who jaise aapne bathtub banaya out of world tha.and pawan sanky ko bahut achi tarah samjhta hai.tho plz use disloyal mat banana nahin tho sanky pe bahut badi musibat ka pahad tutega.and apne sushena ko zinda rakha isliye thank u.veer ka zikar hi bahut ho jata hai mujhe khush karne k liye phir who saddle hi ku na ho.ab sanskaar ka marham lagana aur ice pack wala scene almost saathmein aaye hai.coincidence hai na.par mujhe yeh nahin pata sanky par kya beet rahi hogi.aur who jab tuta tab swara shayad aapne ko sambhalne ki sthiti mein aayi.mere saath bhi aisa hua hai though situ aur person diff they.jab aap kisi perfection ko tutte dekhte hai tab aap apni grief bhul k aapne aap ko aur saamne wale ko sambhalte hai.tab pata chalta hai.sirf hum nahin .saamne wala bhi problm mein hai. Ab sab kuch thik hai. Sorry bahut bakbak ki aur sahi bhi thi ya nahin pata nahin.aur ab swara sanky ko marham laga rahi hai.par sab se jyada bada marham undono ke liye ek dusre ka saath hai.rgt?.ab undono ka saath mein sona bhale thik na lage par jaruri tha.and is story mein mere fav characters order. Shruti,Sanky,Swaara,Veer,ap,janaki and pawan
Aap pehli ku ki aap itni khubsurat kahani likh rahi hai.and pawan last mein ku ki who loyal hai ya nahin pata nahin.chalo 20 k baad milte hai.

Res (sorry dude, would have resed earlier but had been asleep!:-P)

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Shruti, I just read that you're unwell! Baby, do take care and I'm finally unresing, but I have exams till 22nd so was extremely late. I hope you understand. Get well soon and I hope this boring post brings a smile on your face as you always say so. By the way, have you decided to break your record of the best previous chapter for the next one that you post. Honestly, whenever I feel, this was just the best, the next one complains, dude I'm equally fabulous too, don't ignore me!

Poor Swara, the girl had to go through so much. Such horrible nightmares. Oh My God! But Sanskaar was her saviour even in the dreams. I loved that part. When he came and defeated that Monster Devendra as well as her fears too. Not completely, but if it weren't for him and his comforting arms around her, her whole night would have become a sleepless nightmare. The solace that she got in his embrace was able to defeat all the raging monsters in her!! I just loved this part and then Sanskaar and his thoughts. He wants to send her back home *sigh* because he cares so much for her. After this horrible incident, of course he wouldn't want her to face any danger! This shows his unconditional and selfless love for her. The entire para was just amazing!

Ok, so basically both SwaSan are awake but are pretending that they both are asleep because they don't know how they'll face each other if they wake up at the same time!! Great. Sanskaar and his desires, but of course, if he loves her so much, somewhere there will be desires for her, how much he tries to suppress it. As Sanskaar himself has said once- Bhavnayein hain Swara, inhe dabaya jaa sakta h, dil se nikala nahi jaa sakta' Even Swara has to fight her raging emotions which she herself isn't able to comprehend. She doesn't realise the love she feels for Sanskaar and this assault is another factor that adds to the deprivation of this knowledge to her. But then, she sleeps in the place where Sanskaar was sleeping and thinks of him only! Oh gal, you are so in love, don't you realise? *sighs again*

Sanskaar was sending Pawan to buy clothes to women's houses?😆😆 Lol. Poor guy! He's so fed up. Aow Gawd, I couldn't help laughing like anything. Swara enters and Sanskaar forgets everything. Only Swara Swara and Swara. *heart eyes emoticon* Her anger when he says he is sending her home was a treat. She wants to stay with him but can't realise this herself! I so pity my both babies. That outburst had me smiling.

Pawan is amazing, ain't he? He knew the mention of his back and Sanskaar not eating anything would have Swara going all crazy to take care of him. Smart man! Swara tends his injuries and so does Sanskaar and they both eat together, nice! I like it<3 Veer again. I love him. He so hates Swara's divided attention! Aww..Veer. I like both Varun and Veer. But Veer is really special to me!

I liked the easy conversation and friendship b/w Swara and Pawan! Really nice. The whole scene was well- written. Pawan telling the whole story to her with Swara laughing was a nice part! Swara meeting Sushena was an amazing scene. Hats off buddy! It was so beautifully written, *giving you a standing ovation* that I couldn't help reading and rereading it!

OMG!! Sushena is so injured, this death is so painful, full of injuries and bruises. Imagining such a sight was a pain I tell ya. I couldn't do so without shutting my eyes thinking of the ache that person is going through. And Swara immediately ran to him to give him the comfort. This girl is such a beautiful soul, she can't see anyone in pain and other's injuries give her ache. Wow! She was blabbering to him the same way she had when she was tending an almost unconscious Sanskaar in the Haveli. I believe she was blabbering because she herself wanted to control her tears and this was the best way. Swara is such a dignified lady and I just loved this portrayal of her Shruti. I loved it, when she apologised to all the men there but specially Sushena and then called him a true hero.

Sanskaar called her Nymph. Reminded me of the beautiful scene at the Haveli. I guess that was chapter 13. I'd found that scene so beautiful. Swara is so selfless, even after all she had to go through she still is thinking about Sanskaar. Deep deep love! Sanskaar is no less. He wants the old chattering, fun loving Swara back. More of his Mermaid Princess. How could Bagri whip this innocent Knight for years in that horrible jail. Oh God. These two are so complete. Shruti, let them stay with each other only without Mentaleshwaris interfering please, when they confess their love for each other. When Sanskaar says that he'll throw stones at her window and batter the door down, I couldn't help thinking of the reference that he'll break that ice around her heart and make his way in forever and after. Of course he didn't meant that, but I couldn't help thinking

What can be better for a brave and valiant soldier than dying with honour and dignity. The gift that Swara gave him would have been truly priceless, at his last breath. And that man needed that. Loved this paragraph more than could be described in words dude!

The last paragraphs! Shruti, I applaud you for writing such a scene seriously! The immense satisfaction and pride that Sanskaar and even Swara would have felt was enough to cure quite a few injuries, not physical. But yeah! The soldiers saluted her for her bravery and really after suffering taunts all her life, surely this would have given her so much pleasure. Loved the last paragraph. Your last paragraphs are always fabulous you know! Love you for that.
Sorry for the boring and really very late unres-
Take care and get well soon and do not expect on time unres from me as I have my exams😉
Love ya
Sakshi