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My dearest DK Family 🤗

It has been a while and this post may shock some, but hope it won't be all unpleasant. Much to my delighted surprise there has been some interest in publishing this little tale of mine and therefore it needs to be taken down to facilitate that process.

I know some of you will be disappointed but I also hope that you will support me with my venture just as you so wholeheartedly did with your readership here. I would hope many of you will share my happiness and pray that this does get published as it would be a dream come true for me 😳.

If you would like to follow the progress of DK please do visit and like the page I have just created for it, where I will be keeping things regularly updated and hopefully sharing more concrete news when able.

The link is:

https://www.facebook.com/DarkKnightNovel/?fref=ts

I will eagerly look for as many of you as possible there! Removing the story from here is a very difficult task for me and I have prevaricated over it for very long but I now no longer have a choice. I hope you will understand and support me.

Love always,

Shru

PS: I am travelling tomorrow for a few weeks so if I delay replying to anyone, that is why.



Dearest Friends and Readers,

This is Thread 3 of the Dark Knight story. I have had a rather shocking reminder of the dangers of copyright issues today, and so I have now officially registered a copyright on the entirety of the Dark Knight fiction. I almost pulled the whole story down due to the experience I had but have instead decided to continue and simply reinforce the copyright warning. I am trying to find a way to link the copyright badge here and it will be updated once I learn how.

In the meantime, here is Chapter 17. I know a lot of you were anxious for a quick update so I have done my best.

A link to the other Threads is:


WARNING: The below Chapter contains some rather disturbing content, which is absolutely necessary for the story and is not gratuitous in the slightest, but I insert this for those of truly delicate sensitivities. There is innuendo and strong language, some violence and other scenes of a disturbing nature so please be warned in advance. For most regular readers of DK, given where the last Chapter ended, it will not surprise you but I feel obliged to mention this.

This has been a truly difficult and disturbing Chapter for me as a writer and I sincerely hope I have done justice to it. Please do let me know what you think if you can. I am utterly exhausted so I will deal with minor editing asap, please bear with me.

Lots of love,
Shruti

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Dearest SwaSanians,

Below is Chapter 18, for which I have had such anticipation expressed, I am still slightly shocked! I hope it lives up to your expectations. There may be things in this Chapter that may be somewhat unexpected but I hope that that is a good thing, even if some of you may have wanted to see a particular scene happening in the way you could have predicted. There is still quite a lot of the story left so please do bear that in mind on each Chapter:).

The below Chapter in particular is dedicated especially to Shruti (Lannister)! And then to Priya, Sanya, Sakshi and Naina- they will know why when they read it! I can say no more 😉. Also- Viji, Sree and Leki- mmmah- to you too for anticipating Chapter 18 so much!

I have been up writing since 6.30 am after sleeping past midnight so please give me some time to finish off minor editing, but I didn't want to delay posting this!

Love to all,
Shruti

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Dearest friends and readers,

Below is the latest instalment of DK- Chapter 19. It has been a gruelling chapter to write so I hope I will not disappoint any of you kind and supportive people!

Viji- this is your going away present for your trip! I know you told me not to pull an all-nighter or another late night but I was so motivated to finish this seeing your excitement over it! So here goes!

Leki- tell me when you read- you know why! 😉

Guys- it is almost 2 am here and I am working tomorrow, just liked I worked all day before this was completed. Please excuse minor typos and errors- I will edit asap!

Please let me know what you all think- I am constantly motivated by the feedback and it really helps me to go on!

Lots of love,

Shruti x


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Dearest sweet friends and readers,

Below is the rather long Chapter 20, which I sincerely hope you will find satisfying. I have more to cover but that will follow in Chapter 21 as the below is mammoth sized anyway! As usual, I have written for a straight 7-8 hour shift and its now around 1:30 am so I will deal with minor edits soon and catch up on pending replies too. Sorry to those who have to wait a while for replies, I am trying my best but often miss my set timescales in the rush to get the next chapters to you.

I look forward to views as ever- they are food for my on-going motivation!

Lots of love,

Shruti x

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Dearest DK family,

Below is Chapter 21. I meant to get this done in the week but am really unwell so it has taken me longer than I would have liked. I also need to check for minor edits etc and it's past 1 am here so please excuse those errors until I have had a chance to correct; I didn't want to make those who have been messaging me wait any longer!

Viji- the last one was a send off present to you for your work trip! This one has to be dedicated to you for a very different reason. When you read you will immediately know why 😉. I really hope what I have done meets with your approval!

I hope you will all find this up to scratch. As ever, with much trepidation I will wait for the scores on the door by way of feedback! I'll work on the next part asap but please allow me some leeway due to being down with this terrible flu and sore throat, which has now manifested as laryngitis! Things will head in somewhat of a changed direction in the next set of Chapters so be warned!

Love always,

Shruti x


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Dearest friends and readers,

Below is Chapter 22! It is split into two parts. Part 1 was long enough almost to be a chapter but I wanted to give you guys another long instalment. It is some recompense for not having updated as much as I usually like to at the weekends. I am still battling a terrible bout of flu and infection so please forgive late responses and also its past midnight here and I have been unable to sleep for days due to being ill so please give me time to make minor edits.

I hope you will let me have your always anticipated feedback like always and hope no-one has cause for complaint with the below!

Love,

Shruti x

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Hello my dearest friends and reader,

I am posting Chapter 23 below, to follow on from the rather shocking turn of events detailed at Chapter 22. I hope you will all like what this Chapter brings, or at least see it as an interesting progression. I will begin working on 24 soon enough. I still have a large number of replies to catch up on from 23 but as said before, I am relying on you all to be patient there, as my focus is on delivering more chapters quickly.

I will await feedback as usual with much apprehension and anticipation. To those who have sent me such warm wishes, thank you. I am a little better but still struggling with the infection; I hope to be fighting fit soon. I am minor editing below so please ignore any simple errors for a while.

Lots of love,

Shruti x


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Hello my dearest DK family,

Obsessed me is back with Chapter 24! This isn't as long as some others but I believe it is an important one and I hope what is contains is interesting and revealing both to you all! I very much look forward to views as ever! Please be patient at this stage in the story- things have to be drawn together and I am doing so, it won't all happen at once but will gradually unfold so hope you enjoy reading! It might take me until the weekend now for the next instalment- I have some hospital appointments as well as work to deal with too so please be patient and also bear with me for replies- I do try my best but time constraints can sometimes cause a few days delay- I read and appreciate each comment with much gusto!

Love,

Shruti

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Dearest DK Family
Here is this weekend's instalment- Chapter 25! I am sorry as I meant to post earlier but the medication I am on is making me rather sluggish, hence the delay! I hope you will all enjoy this- it is a long Chapter again. I will try not to take too long with 26 but I make no promises! Minor editing on below is ongoing; this has taken me most of the day:).

As ever, please be generous like always with your likes and comments! I will respond as soon as time allows but I so enjoy reading each take - it is so appreciated.

Love,
Shruti x

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Shruti🤗
Oh My! Oh My!

I was just speechless after reading this chapter.

It was terrifying to read about what's going to happen to Swasan.
Oh that lecherous Devendra,what a disgusting creep.

Poor Swara she is such a pure soul who has no idea that men could be evil as him.
She thought she could fool him to free Sanskar. But the guy is a Devil's spawn who easily saw through her ruse.But Swara, being the brave person that she is, went ahead in her plan to free Sanskar even after she understood Devendra's foul proposal.
Oh how she suffered at his hands.I was left teary eyed.
How horrifying it must have been to suffer so much.
Hopefully she doesn't become too traumatized after this.
But then Sanskar is there and I'm sure he will help her to come out of it.

And Sanskar,what rage and blinding fury he was in to see Swara suffer.
Just waiting to see Sanskar rip that Devil into pieces.

The way you described his rage and Swara's sufferings,it was as if it was a live thing and not just words.
I don't know how to put in words about this but it felt as if I was watching everything happening live.

I can't tell you enough as to how much I love your story.
It's just amazing.





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