DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF-T3-DELETED- AN-PG 1 - Page 25

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

My friend Shruti...

First of all sorry for my late reply.

But after reading this update I am speechless. The update was really heart touching one. All the swasan moments were beautifully written. Each sentence had it's importance. All the sequence in this update was awesome.

After that incident swara was shattered. It was a bad experience and forgot that incident was not possible for a woman. But swara's pain was clearly visible in sanskar's action. He was lost in her thoughts. He knew her. She was strong and intelligent. But this type of incident make her weak and the wounds in her heart was bleeding badly.

Sanskar is blessed with a friend like pawn. He understood his emotions. From his eyes he understood it. True friendship is a gift of God. Because in this world only few people is blessed with such a beautiful gift. True friends always read our eyes and they understand our situation.

The reunion of pawn will help sanskar into his plan.

Pawn was attacked by the robbers and he was badly injured, but he escaped from death...

And the last few sequence made me cry. 😭

The pain of swara and sanskar's helplessness...

Swara is pure soul, who always want the happiness of others. She was betrayed by her own sister, and this horrible incident, she was not ready to meet her eyes with sanskar. They avoid the eye contact.

Sanskar was crying and was asking forgiveness. And swara realized his feelings. The understanding between them is amazing

They can feel the pain of other.

And they try to heal the wounds of other. That sequence was beautifully written. 👏👏👏

But I wanted to punish Devendra for his doings. I knew after seeing swara's wounds sanskar will gave punishment to him for his doings. He deserves it.

And the title of this update was really nice.

Eagerly waiting for your next update.

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Sakkiyah 🤗

My slightly late reply as explained over PM- too many plates to spin at the moment, sorry 😃

Thank you so much for your kind words and for loving this chapter so much. It was one that I really wanted to set the stage with for the next couple but due to its content, it had its own challenges as do the next ones. I am really glad you felt connected to it.

Swara was shattered but she had Sanskaar there to help put the pieces back together, and in her way she did the same for him 😳. They both are so attuned to each other, their own pain pales in front of the others and in this way, both get strength to cope in the best way possible in the circumstances.

Pawan came in good time for Sanskaar on a number of fronts. Especially now, Sanskaar and even Swara could do with a good friend- besides each other of course. But as both are hurt and broken, someone else is needed and there is now Pawan plus the other men too, and they will not judge which is what SwaSan need at this point- understanding and support.

Hmmm- Pawan wasn't badly injured- I think you mean Sushena? Yes, he is at the moment- in between life and death so the danger hasn't passed but he did manage to do what he could for his beloved Prince- a true hero in his way.

Not that I am happy you cried, but as a writer- if someone feels so moved, it is the best feeling in the world so thanks for saying that 😳. Both of SwaSan have had so much pain and betrayal- including at the hands of those they thought their own so they already had that connect and now with this terrible incident- they are bound in an irrevocable way. They do feel the pain of the other and can also heal it- in fact they are the only ones who can do that for the other:).

At the moment, it isn't about Devendra- when the time comes, things will take their course but to be totally honest, I myself haven't worked out all those details yet 😊; I want to really focus on SwaSan for now and take their relationship to its next level 😳.

I am slightly delayed due to real life commitments on 20 but will be working on it in a few hours and then it depends how long it takes; it will be up before the end of the weekend 😃

Lots of love,

Shruti x

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

My friend Shruti,

Your reply always gave a happiness for me. After reading your reply I get the answers of my questions. After writing my reply I always wait for your reply. But previous time I don't get my reply. But this time the update was really heart touching and all the words were direct from my heart.

But I never wanted to hurt you. Because you are my one of the best friend in the forum for me.

I was confused for sending a pm to you. But atlast I sent it. I believe as a friend I have the right to ask you.

But I am saying sorry. Please forgive me...

Waiting for your reply and next update

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good..

Originally posted by: jess_27

Hii dear... Im Jessica...

I have read your story, last few chapters of the previous thread, and the two in this thread.. I really like your story... You are an amazing writer..

About chapter 19.. It was so heart touching, the way sanskar did not care about what the world would think, and just stayed close to swara.. These two are the only ones who can heal each other...

Waiting for chapter 20.. Moreover, now im going to shift to your 1st thread to read this story from the begining...

Update soon...

Love

Jessica