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Writers in our forum always tell that they love to read the views and comments of the readers but what will we readers do when they make us speechless and spellbound with such an amazing story that we fail to find words for praise I really don't have any words which can describe how good this part was
Sushena is alive 😛I am happy to know that he is alive, I felt so bad for both swara and sanskar😭😭😭 but they will heal each other I want to see that devendra dead 😡😡😡 I know I am telling this from last two parts and now I am turning into taperecorder but I don't think I can stop telling this until devendra dies finally i cant stop telling this even if I sounds like a broken recordWe are not completely sure yet if pawan is positive or not but he is getting more and more impressive day by day the way he understand sanskars unsaid words too he is turning out to be a perfect brother of sanskar which our laksh ji can never become I want to read more of sanskar and pawan and how he will bond with swara she is still traumatised of what happened and sanskar is too guilt ridden and broken now but when they will be alright I want to read about the trio their scenes can be really enjoyable when swasan will get alright and situation will be betterSwara don't have courage to tend his back I think it was because she can't bear sanskars pain she is trying her everything to get over of her own pain she is not letting herself get broken it is his pain which will break her she inwardly knew that and that's why she hadn't tell anything about the injuries of his back his back already had those scars and it is definitiely in worse condition now after the worse experience of the day swara cannot bear to see these the way she cried when she saw these marks for the first time she is not in a condition to take that pain when she thought she don't have courage she wasn't thinking about her horrific experience she was thinking of his pain, am I right by the way I loved sanskars duniya bhar me jaye attitudeThis part was heart wrenching but still it had created all too different magicWaiting for the next part
Hey there Sanya 🤗
😆😆 Well I do love to read the comments and speechless or not, you all leave me some fab ones! I am so grateful and thank you for liking this Chapter so much!
Sushena is alive but barely- he is a true brave soul. I think everyone (including me 😆) wants Devendra dead but unfortunately I have to stay true to the realism of the story and only kill him if and when it suits 😊.
Glad you see how compelling Pawan is- whether positive or not, is a separate issue. I like to think in this FF- I have gone for memorable- some may be good memorable or bad memorable but I think it better to make an impact than just be positive as such no? For now, you all just enjoy Pawan as in his way he is helping SwaSan recover 😃. There will be more SwaSan and Pawan scenes coming up- don't worry 😉. Very well spotted about the back 👏👏. I hadn't forgotten and it will be dealt with soon but you are right, Sanskaar stopped her as she was already breaking and if you notice, she did think she needs to see to his bacl, but even his other injuries were too much combined with her own state and he then just took her in his arms and they ended up comforting each other to sleep. So you were very right ⭐️. And yes, I deliberately made Sanskaar put the world aside as well for her- which he would do. I hope you will find the next chapter continues their journey in the best way possible 😳
Lots of love, Shru xoxo
Arjun
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