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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#691

Originally posted by: aamias
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Hey Asmita! I'll reply to your comments as soon as some time frees up but thank you so much in the meantime and for the lovely words on thread 4 too:)

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dilwali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#692

Hi Shru first of all so sorry for late comment got very busy so could not I hope u ll nt b angry with me
now coming to update it was as usual ur brilliant way of expressing pain n love of swasan which impressed me again as always. I really got worried after reading that Shekhar is fixing Swara's marriage with someone n I am eagerly waiting for next updates n my fingers are crossed that it will not happen ( By the way I know u wont make that happen u r also a mad swasan fan like all of us still worried thoda sa you never know what writers can do...hehehe ). I am also surprised how Ragini is behaving. She is still behaving as if she has done nothing but again I know you must have thought something for her. I really got impressed the way DP honoured Swara. Eager to read coming updates
Loads of love n take care of urself

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#693

Originally posted by: aamias
oh how much I started liking this story i cant say in words u r a brilliant writer i fully fell in love with ur story .i was eagerly wating for the update and i am not a writer to say what i felt iafter reading ur story.
just onething Sanskar feels that swara is not in love with him? Love is peculiar ting to understand and is without definitions that one could understand. Now , I believe we will see Sanskar in action
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veer and his master cannt see swara attention elsewhere🤣
para angle is going to be revealed.

nobody could escape the attention of maheswari siblings😆
sujata such a double standard selfish woman she is short sighted lady thats all😡
i liked how u intermingled the past with the present the fountain today and that day and Sanskar is perfect opportunist always doing what he wants . Romancing and telling the other to stop what was that? he is a grown mature man .

Dearest Asmita 🤗

I am so glad you got on the DK train and are loving the story! Thank you so much for your kind appreciation, it means a lot.

You are very right- it is easy to have perspective and judgment when your emotions are not so tangled up but here they both are so involved it's easy to be confused. Hopefully you saw Sanskaar in action and liked it!

Like master like horse in case of SanVeer! 😉

Hope you will enjoy PaRa or what of them I can show!

Totally true- Pawan should ask Swara- you cannot escape the Maheshwari's from Ram's family 😉

Sujata is indeed rather foolish and basically very short sighted.

I like the join the links where I can so glad you liked it:). As for Sanskaar asking her to make him stop, more effect as he is so masculine and so I felt that was even more striking that he had to ask her to make him stop as his control goes haywire around her 😳

I'll reply to your comment on T4 too! Thank you again!

Love,

Shruti x