My friend Shruti,
The update was awesome. I really enjoyed the reading while reading the update.
The beginning of update was about swasan.
Nightmares were haunting swara, but in dreams too sanskar saved her life from devil Devendra. That incident was haunting her. But the presence of sanskar was her courage to fight with the situation.
She was in safe hands of sanskar.
Sanskar always want the happiness of swara. For that he was ready to do anything for her.
He always think about her reputation and he always aware about that.
Pawn understood his friend very well. From sanskar's words he realized that sanskar is in love with swara. But he was not ready to accept the fact.
Sanskar arranged a messenger to Durgaprasad. He will handover the Nagabhata map.
And wanted to send swara to the palace. He was worried for her safety.
But this decision was painful for sanskar. To go away from swara was not acceptable for him. But for swara's sake he was ready to do it.
I was laughing while reading the conversation between sanskar and pawn. Sanskar asked some new clothes for swara and pawn was open mouthed. That sequence was really nice.
Swara was unhappy about the decision of sanskar to send her to the palace.
The conversation between swara and pawn was really nice.
Swara was angry to sanskar and she refused to eat. But pawn understood both of them. He said that sanskar not eat the food.
Hearing about sanskar's condition swara forgot her angry.
She applied ointment in his wounds and ate the food together. They remembered the time spent in the haveli.
When she saw veer she was happy. Then she noticed the other horse varun and she became friendly to it
The conversation between swara and pawn was interesting.
After hearing Sushena's condition she met him and her words were heart touching.
It was a painful sequence. But for a soldier his life is always filled with danger. In each second of their life they face death.
While reading that sequence I remembered the poem 'Greater love 'by Wilfred oven.
Heart, you were not hot,
Nor large, nor full like hearts made great with shot
And though your hand be pale
Paler are all which trail
Your cross through flame and hail :
Weep,you may weep, for you may touch them not
Sushena was a courageous man. He lived his life for his country. He was facing his death. But swara's words have a magical power. It can heal the wounds.
Then the beautiful moments between swasan, it was also nice. Sanskar want his old swara. They remembered the beautiful moments they spend in the haveli.
And the last scene were the soldiers wanted to salute swara for her brave. That moment was one of the most precious moment in this update.
In my view this update was completed like a story. Love, pain, happiness, and sorrow all the emotions were included in this update.
After swasan, I really loved the characters of pawn and Sushena. They are amazing.
Eagerly waiting for your next update.
Thanks for the pm
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago
Ganesh Kartikeya
