DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF-T3-DELETED- AN-PG 1 - Page 22

Originally posted by: Red.orchid

Hi shruti

Chapter 14 to 18 all are awesome.

Loved swasan care for each other & they are ready to sacrifice anything for each other.

Chapter 19

res

Originally posted by: jasw

Awesome! So much anguish, raw pain, heartache ... each feeling unworthy of the other ...getting tormented and yet the light of love, care and adoration healing each other... was just beautiful!

Read Ch 17,18,19. Both bravehearts in their own capacity. It's brilliant.

Originally posted by: sneharay

Amazing.. 😊

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

My dear shruthi

I missed to unres my last one and now I have had the most wonderful treat this morning. I'm really going to read chapter 19 again and again. The nuances shruthi 🤗I'm hooked to how wonderful your Swasan are. They are in every bit amazing. Beyond anything I have ever read. They are so profound and pure. So tainted by the world yet unblemished. That's what happens to gold when you heat it. It comes out painfully clean and Welds the broken edges together.

As I said , I loved the nuances. How they tenderly attended to each other healing their bodies as they spoke through their eyes. Each catching the other as they trip. Sending reassurances and basking in eachothers trust and love.

Loved it. And as always will be waiting to wake to the next one.

Love

N

Originally posted by: Shuchi2013

OMG!!! This was AWESOMENESS👏.Loved Loved SwaSan Chemistry.!!!On fire.Then the show decides to give us a scene somewhat similar(in different circumstances)...How beautiful you described Swara's PTSD,her apprehensions,her fear,her pain and everything she felt.And Sanskar was able to gauge her and bring her out of it.Looking forward to the next one..

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Dearest Nita 🤗

Ah yes, it was going to be Friday but I decided that sleep could wait again and managed to pull another almost-all-nighter and here was the result! You had Res'd so quick, even before my PM- you made me very happy. Thank you so much for that and for the lovely comments too Nita! I was happy to have it earlier but it must have been hard on you though🤗 .I had to Res the moment i saw the no 19 on the title😆

Well, Sushena is alive but barely so . But yes, he managed to pass on the important messages, bless him. Re Durga Prasad- ah well, not as amazing as Sanskaar as a leader but he is an experienced and able King so I thought it only realistic that he had a few of his own tricks to play in the skirmishes being fought 😃. I was bit sad when i heard about his supposed demise. He is still not out of danger . i know . hope he make it though. Yep DP is an King after all, he wont sit quiet

Awww- thanks for your praise on the breakdown scene and then the SwaSan comforting each other. I am so touched you liked it that much 😳. I just wanted to show how traumatised any woman but especially one who has been rather shelter and is really so innocent would have felt at that horrific assault especially barely understanding evil intentions of people like Devendra. And of course then there is Sanskaar- he would, like he said- lay his life down for her 😭 And he does really worship her- nothing would make her any less in his eyes, but of course she wouldn't know that. I wanted to show the rather natural cross connection there- with each thinking the other would be disgusted but of course even there, they were just about each other and not themselves. Exactly as you say- they both need to heal each other, only that will work for them and I wanted that to happen for them in a meaningful way. I am so so glad you enjoyed it so much Nita- I hope you will like what comes next! I say it once again too, that scene was so awesome. It made me feel there pain. You really did amazing job in writing this chapter👏. And i did enjoy reading it so much 😃. Eagerly waiting for what comes next .

Lots of love always, Shru xoxo

PS: I have to comment on your update too- please bear with me; I'll do it soon! X... Take your time Shruti, No rush. It can wait 😃.