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Shruuu...this was such a fabulous chapter. Loved it to pieces !!!
the description of the dunes was breathtaking, and I guess observing ruins against the desert makes it stand out even more starkly !!
*Have you seen something more beautiful*...buhahahahha...he's looking at it :P, loved that play on words...
The effect they are having on each other is mesmerizing !! And Sanskaar is such a goner ! He has no control over his emotions, the ones that she evokes. The juxtaposition of her personality with the ruins and probably what he considers himself to be is so well brought out ! The fact that she's so affected by these long gone lovers and the tears it brings to her eyes further rankles him and makes him voice his deepest fears. Poor fellow, had suppressed all emotions post his capture and now her presence is causing the outburst.
When I first read his dialogue, I also (like your Swara) assumed he was speaking about his past, but when in the very next line you mention it's about his feelings for her, the intensity of it made it sweeter to read !! Loved the analysis of his outburs and, Swara is recognizing more of her internal emotions and actually being bothered by someone she thinks he's so in love with ! *taaaliyaaan for that*
yayyy yayyy yayyy...he's in loveee...sooo glad about this :D !! The fact that they pray for each other is something expected given the progress that you've shown over the last few chapters, but his epiphany is splendid !!! and there in lies the conflict...more agony, because he believes she deserves better. In dono ka kya hogaa...she thinks he loves someone else...he thinks she deserves someone better,...you both are perfect for each other...heart is feeling for them but at the same time want to knock them together as well.
the raw emotions in the next conversation is simply superbbb 👏
I understand that he lashes out at her...he's confused at her behaviour, with his own thoughts...and he wants that answer to put him out of his misery...to get her to forgive him..but her response is so unexpected he still goes into a mad frenzy !! (sooo glad she spoke about the haathi in the kamra, and told him that she knew he's her saviour from the ohter night. I was hoping you'd do that given she thought about it when he was missing)..
aiyyyo Swara...his outburst is not for HER...but for youuu...!! and thankyou for making it super clear (well atleast for himself) that she is wayyy more important than Kavita...yes he needs to right that wrong and fight those charges and avenge the life...but when it comes to love...S>>>>>>K...but that leads to another outburst...bechari Swara...she's been only at the receiving end today...😆
Don't say I hate you *uff yeh ziddi*...😭😭😭
both realise the other's words belie the actual emotions, but still react to it and vow to be more stubborn...aah young love i guess :)
totally did not expect Sanskaar to do the dagger wala stunt...man it hurts him so bad !
Can I just say Veer is such a perceptive horse !! knows his master's mood...possibly also guessing Swara's mood...and alerting them of incoming danger !!
ok through the entire next part, heart was in mouth...and i gasped two three times only to get weird looks from people on the train 😆
NOOO Sushena did not die...😭...Abhi toh aaya tha...abhi gaya...i now see your point on being attached to characters :(
question : did they find the map to Sanskaar's Haveli...or the map that Sanskaar stole (cos I thought that was still with Sanskaar)
The action was spot on...and Sanskaar in this full protector mode is just fabulous !!
I could feel this creepy undertone when I read about their intentions for Swara...and boy did Sanskaar show them or what..He's clearly demonstrated that nobody thinks about messing with Swara without facing his wrath (this fills me with gleee for the future and the state of madam nagini)
stilll eeewing at the bandits...eeek lechers...
Your description of the fight is so well done, I can actually visualize it clearly !! Him with the knives and the crossbow, eliminating them with clinical precision...well done really !!
His feeling of grief as he kills the last two and thinks her dead is heart wrenching...👏
Even with all his injuries, his mind is only on her and the fact that it affects him so badly speaks volumes of his love, which he earlier shrugged off with angry words. That Swara was so gut wrenching (too bad they did ntohing of this kind in the show when she's facing life imprisonment. sorry to digress but what in the world was today's episode...headdesk)
so Swaraaa...if ever there was a You had me at Hello moment, I think it is this...He had her at Swaraa... !! well atleast a serious verison of Hello...
The rage, the anguish, the grief, the mind numbing pain...all valid emotions for our prince in love... <3
Swara's emotions were amazing !! Her unbridled concern just brings out how much she cares and loves this man. I understand she hasn't voiced it as he did in this chapter, but this is even better. To know something so dear might slip away can be the biggest awakening of all !! She needs him...and he has to get right...LOVED the use of need...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Anddd obviously he ahs to respond, now when she needs him...there is no part of Sanskaar that won't try its best to give her what she wants. oh i'm hopelessly in love with these two... !
Veeer the hero...what an intelligent fellow...He's taking them home...and now I can't wait for the next part. This experience has bound them for life...nothing will separate them now...you can't go through so much together and brush it all away. Totally waiting for the next part where Swara will hopefully voice her feelings (Even if to herself) and chaandi will be if these two actually have a conversation on what they mean to each other *that might be too early you could say, but I like vague terms as well...but atleast tell each other somethingg...something that takes forward the words like trust used in this one to a slightly more elevated panel...adding to wishlist...hehehe*
P.S : Read the chapter once again, before posting this and I am so smitten by DK...I want the mentalness on screen to stop and want this to take over...this intensity...this purity...! sigh...
Have a great weekend Shru and give yourself a jhappi from me for this chapter...muaaah ❤️
Edited by bones123 - 9 years ago
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