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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Shuchi2013
Awesomeness again!!!!I just love the pace at which this story is progressing.Foundation of the SwaSan story has been laid.And I am eagerly waiting to see how it pans out!!!

Thank you dear Shuchi and for your lovely PM too- so happy your on this trip with the DK and me:) I will keep trying to not disappoint with future chapters 😃. Lots of love,

Shru xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
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Unresing

Coming to chapter 9

This was a totally SwaSan chapter. Yayy!! Only and only SwaSan. Poor Swara. How tired she must have been. Mere bechare SwaSan!! Ok, before I start my rant on how bechare my SwaSan are, I'll come back to the topic. That Haveli was so magnificent. Just by reading it I could imagine it and even I felt my jaw drop! (no exaggeration here).

Dude, Sanskaar openly says that he's not gonna harass her dignity in any way and I'm like Yo Sanskaar!! You rock baby<3 That key was amazing. Sanskaar each action is full of planning. Me impressed!

Sanskaar was so carefree with his horse. How droolsome na? Me gonna go mad seriously!! His smile must have fluttered her heart I'm sure. Zyaada ho rha hai? OK, coming back again. Is Swara mad. She was about to escape with the help of a knife!*scoff* She's mad. Poor Sanskaar, how much would it have hurt him! L

Will Swara stop trying to escape. That horse episode was amazing!! I loved it

Finally the emotional ending! Atleast he made her realsie who her real enemy was! That she was safe with him. Shru, by the next update SwaSan must fall for each other. This is not a suggestion but a threat! Lol.. just kidding. But loved the update and please do update soon!

Sakshi 🤗

Yes only SwaSan here! I had to cover off the MM reaction but did it through the messenger as I really didn't want to deal with them in this 😆. Awww- you liked the Haveli setting that much? 😳

Haha- I am glad you like this Sanskaar- I so love men like that- who don't beat around the bush and are slightly scandalous. Sanskaar is impressive na? Our hero- siggghhh.

Na na, kya zyaada?! This is us- we are all zyaada about Sanskaar 😆. And yes Swara's heart was thudding although she'd of course deny it! Swara had to try- she is a Rajput princess after all! So happy you liked the horse episode:). Yes, I wanted them to end on a truce- originally hadn't planned that but it felt right as I need her to give it a chance to try and just see him for who he is and I can't if she's constantly tearing around. And Sanskaar too deserves a break I thought:). Aha- next chapter you will like but as for falling in love- that's one thing but to actually understand and acknowledge- in this tale that cannot be so easy 😉.

Lots love and be back here for 10 ok?! Mmmwah,

S xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful
Hi dearie! Caught up with the whole story n I must say that Im totally in luv with ur story ! I mean I feel like Im listening an ancient Indian folklore- a desi fairytale! ❤️ Just fab! And I am a history n architecture buff, so the way u r weaving in subtle intricacies of both these subjects in ur story telling makes this all the more dear to me... And to top it all this is an AU! :D I generally luv AUs n esp these days since its been atleast 3-4 mnths since I quit the show... :)

Now coming to the chapters as such, Loving my gud old fiery wildcat Swara here! N the cool composed Sanky her perfect foil! ❤️ Loved the subtle variations u hv introduced in his interactions with different ppl n then that spl undercurrent with Swara. 😉 N luks like evn his horsey dalng senses that. 😆

Great gng dearie n yeah thnx a ton for the PMs! 🤗

-luv Niks

Nik's my friend!! 🤗

You don't know how excited I am to see you here! Have been missing you hon- where have you been lost? Ah, so not watching the show?! Can't say much as the current rubbish is truly bad and in fact except for the amazing mini phase we got of SwaSan, since the Maalkin track its been 🤢.

Ah yes, I remember you like history! And architecture too? Arrr, your comments - thank you so much 😳😳. I was so worried about writing this, am so relieved and happy when I read things like this!

Glad you are enjoying this, fiery Princesses and loyal horsies and all! Horsie deffo senses Master's growing attraction 😉.

Do keep reading if you can! Lots of love Shru xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: KawalArora
a long update it was u must hv worked hard on it hats off to u
now coming to dis update i totally loved it n i wanted an entire chapter on their bond n love n i know i ll get more in future n i m luking forward to dat wid excitement n i loved how u portray i was literally imagining all expressions as u wrote. u r such a mind blowinng writer
thanks dear

Hey Kawal xoxo

Thanks a lot! Long indeed and yes, I sat flat out for hours but once I start I have to keep going and can't complain at that as I love doing this so much 😃. You will deffo get a lot more of the romance coming up so stick around 😉; glad you are liking it and mmmwah for your comments 😳😳.

Love,

Shru x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: a_uma
lovely, lovely update... want more and more of them..

Poor swara.. how horrible to learn about her sister's scheming and even more horrible to learn that your fiancee has fallen for such false tales.. .. don't know if sanskar will feel contrite about directly or indirectly bringing about the break in Laksh-Swara's marriage..😕

but our princess is made of sterner stuff.. look at the way she tried to attack her captor and tried to steal his horse.. 👏.. can't wait to see more of this from our fiery princess.. 😉

Hey Uma 🤗

Thank you so much! Yes, Swara is really hurting about Ragini and unfortunately more hurt will await her in the future too . As for Sanskaar- he is already guilty about his role so far in plotting against her and you may soon see him verbalise about helping breaking her engagement too! Glad you like the fiery side of Swara 😃. I will deliver more feistiness and other things too very soon! 😉

Love,

Shru x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: foresight
really liked part 9. the story is really galloping forward like Veer now. some fantastic writing and great scenes. right from sanskar throwing his chasers temporary off track to setting a trap for them to the reveal of some bit of his plan, veer giving swara up and finally sanskar promising to sort things for swara finally. swara was in fiery mode today...and then also using her brains and sushena added a nice charm. wonder what is really happening with pawan. loved this one. looking forward to the next part already.

Hey Sapna xoxo

Glad you enjoyed Chapter 9:). Haha, galloping like Veer! So pleased to read your kind comments 😳. I wanted a lot covered and was worrying about whether I would do it well so reading such comments makes me feel so much better! You sense something else happening with Pawan? Hmm, you will find out in a few chapters time 😉. I have the plan for 10 resolved now, it remains to be written! I seem to be constantly in a race with time! 😃

Love always, Shru xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: Zephyr8
I love this story. Chapter 9 was great. Loved the Sanskar Swara interactions. Thank you for the PM. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hello! You changed your user name right? Please remind me of your name if you don't mind? If you have told me before, I do apologise, my brain is extra slow as it's really late after a mammoth day 😃. Thanks so much for loving this! I'll keep PM'ing you on updates 😳.

Love,

Shru x

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Hey Shruthi,
Sorry couldnt comment on last few chapters..I wish to write long comments but I am always at loss of words for your writings👏

superb update .Its amazing how its sounds similar to SR but strikingly different in its take ...loving the way its going forward and excited for further chapters and how swara and sanskaar's relation is gonna progress ..

⭐️⭐️👏

Hey Lucky! How are you?

Oh please don't worry and honestly don't ever feel the comments have to be a certain length, all feedback, especially when so sincere is so appreciated 😃. So pleased you are loving this, I hope it continues as I progress! The next chapter will be rather SwaSan oriented too 😳

Love,

Shru x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Love it.
Njy swasan's convos.

Thank you Sonu, glad you liked it 😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: pearl.16
Lovely !! Chapter 9 was really interesting !! I mean a whole SwaSan centric chapter... Hmmm.. I m impressed !! Finally, they r drawing towards each other even if it is just a bit... But it is really good !!
Continue doing your lovely work n keep me updated !!
Update soon !!

Hello there! Thanks so much for your comment! Pleased that you like it 😃. And yes, there is a gradual breaking down of barriers, which I will continue further! Thanks for your support and encouragement and will keep PM'ing you!

Best wishes,

S x

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