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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb..👏

Thank you Sneha:) x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Sampriti.
Awesome update😳
Beautiful story , totally in love with it...
SwaSan scenes and Sanskar's character just made me speechless👏
Thanks for the PM
Will wait for the next update😊

Thank you so much Pubi:) Glad you liked it so much:). Keep reading and I'll update hopefully by the end of the week! X

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: geetkumar
The story has become an addiction for me. As soon as I read one chapter, I want to read the next and the next and the next. Desperately waiting for the next update.

Hey Geet! Thanks so much- that's so sweet of you:). Love it when someone says that your addicted to my attempt! Haha- I'll start work on the next chapter very soon and hopefully post by Friday! X

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Res😊
BTW Ehsas Nagar was uber cute😉As was the prize stallions name: Veer.😃Is there a love story for Veer too, perhaps Swara has a mare named Vani or something like that?😳

Will be waiting sis:) and glad you liked Ehsaas Nagar. Haha! I think I have enough to cover with the humans' love stories and rest of the intrigue so Veer's love story may have to be perhaps just imagined 😆. Vani 😆 😆

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Unreserved chapter 8 pg 4

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a_uma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

lovely, lovely update... want more and more of them..

Poor swara.. how horrible to learn about her sister's scheming and even more horrible to learn that your fiancee has fallen for such false tales.. .. don't know if sanskar will feel contrite about directly or indirectly bringing about the break in Laksh-Swara's marriage..😕

but our princess is made of sterner stuff.. look at the way she tried to attack her captor and tried to steal his horse.. 👏.. can't wait to see more of this from our fiery princess.. 😉

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Unreserved chapter 9 pg 16

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#128

really liked part 9. the story is really galloping forward like Veer now. some fantastic writing and great scenes. right from sanskar throwing his chasers temporary off track to setting a trap for them to the reveal of some bit of his plan, veer giving swara up and finally sanskar promising to sort things for swara finally. swara was in fiery mode today...and then also using her brains and sushena added a nice charm. wonder what is really happening with pawan. loved this one. looking forward to the next part already.

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Zephyr8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#129

I love this story. Chapter 9 was great. Loved the Sanskar Swara interactions. Thank you for the PM. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#130

Hey Shruthi,

Sorry couldnt comment on last few chapters..I wish to write long comments but I am always at loss of words for your writings👏

superb update .Its amazing how its sounds similar to SR but strikingly different in its take ...loving the way its going forward and excited for further chapters and how swara and sanskaar's relation is gonna progress ..

⭐️⭐️👏

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