DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF- T2- DELETED- AN- PG 1 - Page 17

Originally posted by: mystery75

res for 9

unres

another lovely chapter😛

loved swara's "never give-up" behaviour...she's really brave or some stupid too😆

that knife stunt and that trying to run away on his own horse😆

aww he callled her "mermaid princess🤗 and they have made peace with eachother now their story finally kicked off really like that horse scene and the conversion after. swara has always tried to be the best princess all her life while she is a gem at hear an honest, innocent, brave, fun, loving, caring yet fierce person. just love swara's characterization also b/c sanskar is toh will remain the best nah😳

oky so sanskar was expecting pawan and sushena came and that too with a bad news...i think there will be something about pawan🤔 good or bad... and who saw them elope and who is the traiter really... u really are building the suspense portion quite too well😈

love all small small things or scenes which u describe or write...means im just drowing int this FF i have already read it 4 times now🤪

plzz want more swasan scenes 😳

and cont soon too

Originally posted by: bones123

Heyaa Shrutii...your updates are like a sight for the wearied brain and the eyes *especially since i want to gouge them out after watching the show* !!

What a beauty of a chapter !! So happy you chose to make this SwaSan centric 🤗

Back on the road...I can feel Swara's weariness and also sense Sanskaar's urgency to get to his destination. That entire paragraph did well to establish the effect of nature on a long journey but also briings about the strength both the characters show to not succumb to it. Swara displaying her grit and earning his respect, making him further resent his own behaviour but being cognizant enough to recognize it wouldn't do to dwell too much on those feelings. The fact that he's concerned for her safety and hence putting them through this frenetic pace is total heart melt moment !!

The description of the mansion and how they found it, it almost reminded me of safe houses from Harry Potter...hehe only he who knows the secret can discern it :) It seemed like a mirage that they stumbled upon. Have to give points to Swara for unrelentlessly trying to leave...and Sanskaar's response is pure gold :) Blunt dismissal of her unvoiced fears - loved his fiestyness !! Her subconcious has done a better job at assessing his character !!

Swara getting a chance to see him in his element, a glimpse of what the prince might have been before all the treachery was amazing ! Each of these moments will make her realise what the old man said (just like you said they would :))

He senses her and puts on the mask of the ruthless prince again...waiting for the relationship to grow to the point where Sanskaar sees no need to wear a mask in front of her. Where she's privy to his unbridled laughter and joy :)

Lol@ her attack. I'm seriously chuckling on how she doesn't give up !! And I have to agree with his reaction, but he has to know stupid or not, she won't stop trying !!

Was totally expecting PKJ to appear...and good naturedly rib his friend about the princess. Sushena (interesting name) the loyal. I'm totally loving this entire side of Sanskaar's life. His friends, his team, his army. That kind of respect, loyalty and camaraderie is hard to come by. Their interaction with Swara brought that out perfectly. The ability to check their emotions and give S enough respect that she deserves as a princess, it comes only to the best !

PKJ captured...nahiii...You brought out Sanskaar's pain very well...that which comes only for best friends and brothers. I think its not a wonder Lakshya hated PKJ...maybe he stole all of Sanskaar's affections.

Coming to Lakshya and the others. Yaar 3rd person mein bhi disapponiting :) How quick to judge and disown. DDD and Sanskaar I guess pegged him correctly. Tsk. Heartbreak galore for Swara !! not that it mattered what L thought, but the rest...poor thing.

Question : Why did Sushena think Sanskaar's reaction to Swara's plight was surprising (and also his decision to take her along to save her life) ? Is it the level to which it impacted him ? Because surely anyone as noble as Sanskaar would feel for someone's genuine pain and would want to protect someone from an unjust fate. Maybe he's reading between the lines...

Question 2 : Does Swara hear Sanskaar's exchange with Sushena regarding his plans ?

Swara and Veer...hahaaa (btw have to tell you this...my godsons are Veer and Vayu...you've got an element of both here ❤️). The horse also recognizes his future mistress, though he's probably testing her grit...Sushena quick to recognize the behaviour. That makes two he doesn't understand :P

And finally the icing on the cake...the conversation ❤️.

Nothing does it like a conversation. I guess she recognizes the vibrations in his voice, that tell her all will be fine. He'll make it alright !!

Loveee this truce they've agreed to. Iske baad it'll only be progress :) Swara discovering mroe of her handsome prince, the prince discovering more of himself. Additionally what they have to contend with, half siblings, impulsive cousins, the cavalry !! Can't wait for this weekend when I'll get to read all of that. Woot !!

👏👏

comment zyaada lamba hogaya na ? Will try succintness next time :)

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

I am sorry pehle mein swara ke taraf sochne mein itna busy thi ki kuch aur likh hi nahin payi.tho ehsaas nagar tak ka rashta sanky ka yeh samjhna ki swara thaki hone k bavajud ekdum makam baithi hai.aur us vajah se respect karna who sanky kitna observe karta hai who dikhata hai.aur swara ka itna thala home k bavjud uspe na girna uska rajput khoon volta hai.dach bolu main hoti tho main uspar hi gir jati hayee kya scene hoga who. And who haveli simple hai par khubsurat hai kehte hai na simplicity mein ek adbhoot sakhti hoti hai.phir who flower pot baba maine aisa bahut pada hai dekha hai.par yaha kuch alag jaadu tha.ab sushena who aacha insaan hai loyal to sanky aur acha laga swara ne use traitor kaha tho bi usne use samjhdari se jawab diya.aur haan ragini ka tho kuch bolna hi nahin hai.par mujhe yeh baat samajh nahin aayi k laksh ne swara ko disown karne k liye ku kaha.and old man at moud usne ku ch bi bola ku samajh nahin aa raha.aur ab pawan kahin tum jaize ragini ne swara ko jhatka diya waise sanky ko pawan k hato jhatka dene ki nahin soch rahi na. Jaise abhi sanky swara ko sahara de raha hai tab shayad swara usko de. Aur who knife attack aur sanky ka puchna k tum sachi pagal ho .mujhe hasi aayi.and den swara ka sanky ko dekhna jab who pawan ke baare mein sunke reaction de raha tha.swara ne sach socha traitor shayad itne ache insaan na ho.and den swara ka exit plan veer ne kharab kar diya .aur sanskaar k alternate ways of dismounting ne tho jaale par namaak chidak diya aur phir who conversation shayad iske baad swara ka dimaag saant ho jaye aur who maan se mehsoos kare shayad isiliye ehsaas nagar.thanx for pm.

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hi Shru,

The official latecomer returns😳

That was absolutely marvelous change of dynamics dear, as you might remember I told you over the previous chapter that it is high time for Swara to get some change of perceptive and some answers, then you delivered it beyond my expectations.

I just love this runaway prince...when ever I read about him my heart flatters! The credit goes to you of cause!

As for Swara, I really admire her courage and solid resolve, so many escape attempts in vain! God bless her, she is still not giving up is she?

So Pawan is in trouble, hmm interesting. But I do hope Sanskar would not try to save him putting his mission on stake, but...if that happens, it would change Swara's opinion about him hugely. Let's see...

I'm not still sure as to what Sanskar plans to do... He is looking for the part of the map that was stolen from him I guess? Or is it something even bigger? Perhaps I need a re-reading to get my facts straight.

That part about the haweli in the middle of nowhere was captivating. I can imagine how hard it would be to spot something like that in the endless desert. But they won't stay there for a long time would they?

I have told you this before, but I just can't help not saying it again. You have a way with words when you describe something. It just appears in front of your eyes, pops up in the mid air. I feel like I witnessed everything. Wonderful work, do continue soon.

loads of love,

Sakura

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Hey Shruti 🤗

I read PART 8 and 9 just now and I just loved them both..😃😃

The plot is shaping up in a fantastic way, my dear..And I am totally in love with it..❤️😳

I loved the old man they met at Maud. He identified Sanskaar, and even asked Swara to trust him..So sweet..😳

Poor Swara..She was so tired after the long journey..But Sanskaar was so caring..😊😊

I loved that particular moment when she tried to kill him😆 Sanskaar was quick for her😉

Even Sushena was quick to notice Sanskaar's strange concern for Swara..😃

I am eagerly waiting for Swasan love story to blossom..😳

Love,
Naina 🤗

Originally posted by: bilvyina

Shruti...u r awesome dr...lv al ur chapter...waiting 4 next update makes me crazy..i knw u are busy bt update soon dude...i want to see growing intimacy btw prince and princess