SwaSan Drabble series: Vignettes from the Past

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

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Dear Viji,
I'm a little tied up due to exams so a short comment on this wonderful 2 part drabble during the short time I have.
I enjoyed reading it to the core. Swara has a crush on Varun Kapoor 🤣 hahaha. Damn awesome way to put in the whole couple fighting for tv at 9.30. I really enjoyed reading each word you had written. Part 1 had me ROFL. Poor guy was gyming to get calf muscles 🤣 and during the much awaited show off he did show off a lot more than calf muscles. I was literally in tears laughing during part 1. Thank you for this short break during tense exam studying.
Part 2 was beautiful in the emotional sense. I wish the CVs had put in some more sweet moments between SwaSan when they were fake married. The emotion content in this part made me go all crazy. They love each other without realizing it. Damn beautiful and loved reading it.
Please keep writing. :)

-V

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Kamala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

This vignette made my morning more beautiful . Thanks for the PM Viji.

I am sure every Swasan fans will agree that the fake marriage period was the golden period in Swasan's life . The relationship was fake yet the trust and understanding level was so strong .

You know sanskaar's character deeply than the makers ,he loves the Tit for Tat game and that makes his character more entertaining.

The mention of scratch in back and teasing swara for scratching him was enough to shut the mouth of Ragini and Laksh .I can totally imagine the embarrassed expression of Swara, jealous expression of HAQ couples .And sanskaar enjoyed the unexpected outcome of Scratching his back when Swara applied ointment 😆

Awaiting for more drabble VIJI .

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ishanita
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Hey Ishanita 🤗

Was smiling to see your res, within literally minutes of me posting this drabble series. Thanks, really touched that you follow my work with such interest. 🤗

Do let me know what you thought, when time permits.

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Apudeep
😆res😊

Thanks Aparna. 🤗 🤗

Looking forward to your feedback, when time permits.

Love,

Viji

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KhwaboKeParinde

@KhwaboKeParinde

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

SwaSan & tennis!

gonna read it soon

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Loved both of them Viji!

Dude, Even I love Tennis. I'm an all time Djokovic supporter and my bestie is an all time Federer supporter again because of his 'looks'. We have continuous fights on this one thing..
Anyways, the SwaSan convo on this was so cute and Sanskaar being jealous of Varun and Roger was too obvious😉
OMG!! The guy is going to the gym to show off his spectacular body and muscles huh? Cool. Newton's law🤣 Omg!! Poor Sanskaar😆
Loved it

Why do I have a feeling that those scratches weren't by Sanskaar but by Swara at night? I think I might be right! Ragini won't change. She'll show off about her HAQ to everyone! Swara was soo bothered about Sanskaar and his injuries😳 How cute<3 Love my SwaSan

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Sneha Ray

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Superb..
In first part..
Swara's fav actor Varun Kapoor..great choice..
Sanskaar's jealously nd try to get better physique than fed..thats cute..
Sanskaar's towel fell from his waist following newton's law..that was unexpected.. 😆 😳
Second part..
Swasan finally sharing bed..good
Ragini got her haq..her behaviour towards swara is totally untolerable..
Feeling sad for swara.. 😔
Sanskaar protecting swara nd swara's care for him are adorable..

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit
Viji 🤗 I am so glad that I logged into the forum today. I would have missed this otherwise!! This has got to be my favorite one ever!! The humor and all the innuendos had me in splits.

Sanskaar and Fed ☺️ Why would you mention these greek gods??? Especially when I need to be studying 🥺 🥺 My poor heart can take only so much of hotness!! But Sanky is an amazing husband. He went to gym, read books abt gyming just to give swara something to ogle at... fursat see 😳 And the unveiling of Sankaar's family jewels was epic 🤣

So Ragz finally got her haq 🥳 I want Swara to take care of chotte Sanskaar asap ☺️ She needs to get back in the game!!

The ointment moment ❤️ He hurts himself for her and she heals his wounds even when she is hurt 😳 It hurts one to see the hurt!!!

Hey Raksha sweetheart...🤗 🤗

Been missing you so much, so happy to see your comment on this thread.

Oh so you are a Fed Fan huh? I admire him a lot, such a consummately graceful player. I do like Rafa and Novak too. They are the "Big 3" for me, I literally loathe Murray. 😃

Coming to this Drabble series, I am overjoyed that I could make you laugh with the humor and innuendo.

Sanskaar's family jewels huh? 😆 🤣 And you had me in splits by saying Swara should now focus on chotte Sanskaar. 😳 🤣

Sanskaar is so intensely protective of Swara, I can totally see him inflicting scratches on himself to make RagYa think "ahem ahem" and stop their taunting of Swara. 😉

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Viji,
Simply loved it -🤗

Just what I needed - I had to see today's episode and I cannot make out if I will have a heartache or a headache🤢

Now I am not a fan of tennis - but I guess we have to thank Fed for inspiring our Sanskaar to build a six pack😉 and that unforgettable moment of the towel following Newton's law🤣🤣Poor Swara - 😉

Swara waking to find both she and Sanskaar had their arms wrapped around each other -

So finally Ragini got her Haq - (I really hate this word - this tops the list of words to be banned🤬). Poor Lakshya - he was never really quite a match for Ragini.😆

And finally our brazen Sankaar (I so love this brazenness of him) appears with scratches down his back - our sweet girl just did not get the message he was sending across to Ragini (well the cobra -oops the cat did get her tongue...😃😃😃).

God how I miss those days Thank you so much for bring back those memories.

Love,
Nyna

Nyna sweetheart 🤗 🤗

So glad I could cheer you up, after the train wreck of yesterday's episode! I had both a headache and a heartache, at the forced MU which the serial is zabardasti shoving down our (and SwaSan's!) throats! 😕

Thanks so very much, for all the lovely words about both the drabbles. I am a major tennis fan, so couldn't resist the references. Yes, Sansku can't tolerate Swara ogling at the Fed. He expects her full attention, you see, even though he himself hasn't realized that yet. 😉 😃

And he is so protective of her, I have no doubts he would inflict scratches all over his back, just to make sure RagYa stop taunting her. 😉 The Cobra certainly got Ragini's tongue huh? 🤣

Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
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Unreserved (like promised😉)

Its that time in the show again when it is best to depart from the show storyline😆 So this drabble comes as a welcome break! Oh & dedicated to me. Thank u Thank u😳

Love All

That fake marriage period of theirs is my fav period😳 Nothing will match that awesomeoness...no gerua, no dates, nothing! Wrangling over the remote...for Varun Kapoor (psst have you checked out the awesome dubsmash videos & the other videos on IG of Varun?? *weekend made*)

His lashes are luxuriant nai?! And Mr Maheshwari is mighty distracted by his wife's sunny smiles😆 Oh God I could so easily imagine him jumping on the couch in his over enthusiasm to see RF lose than ND win 🤣 And then he went to the gym???😲 🤣

Viji this is insane!!! Get ripped in 15 days & 30 day insanity workout 🤣 Ah my stomach

Oh my my! Sanskaar in a towel And what Swara actually ogling👏 Wah Wah👏 I did keep thinking about the towel the whole time when he started showing off his calf muscles & then it did actually happen 🤣

Scars of Love:

Lakshya hardly ever went to work, and did precious little at home 🤣 x 10. Izzat se insult karne ka maza hi kuch aur hota hai.

Urrgghh! Mil gaya despo ko uska HAQ🤢 How I hate that word now. And joining it soon will be Pehle Pyaar🤢🥱

Sanskaar 🤣 Oh where did that man go?! And Swara isnt angry because he lied. she is angry because she wants to know how he got those scratches😆 😆

He hurt himself so badly for her😲😭 Paagal ladka Chalo at least she applied the ointment for him

Shruti my dear...🤗 🤗

So happy to know you loved this one yaar. You were telling me how much you would want to read a light hearted piece focused on SwaSan, and glad this met your expectations.

The serial plotline is a complete train wreck now, na? 🥺 Here I was, after that dreamily beautiful 1st date, floating away in 7th heaven, expecting SwaSan treats galore. But we get a totally forced and senseless MU, shoved down our throats! 😕 😒

Chalo, I am so happy I could make you go all 🤣 with this 2 part drabble series. I have 2 more to come, will try to post those by tomorrow or else max Monday.

Sanskaar the dude wants Swara to give him her full attention. He just hasn't realized it yet. 😆 😉 The towel did its duty towards SwaSan, lets give it a place of honor in our AT, I say!! 😳

Hahaha, you liked those lines about Lakshya in part 2? I was grinning when I wrote them, I so enjoyed giving Lakshya Ji a nice little set down. 😉

Oh, I completely agree with you, Haq and Pehla Pyar are 4 letter words these days! 😆

Sanskaar is so very protective of Swara, he would scratch himself all over his back to prevent her from getting taunts. 😉 Very effective in shutting RagYa up, nahi? 😳

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