SwaSan Drabble series: Vignettes from the Past

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Viji just read part 2 and edited my comment to include my thought on it

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Krishnabhisarik

@Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Viji dear🤗 light-hearted, humorous and romantic.. Just what the doc prescribed😉 since the serial is giving such heartaches.. Awww jealous sanskar is so cuuute😆 I anyways liked Federer, this drabble just makes me more grateful to him😛 Bechare sanskar ne kitni mehnat ki.. Gymming n all.. Usko already itne fursat se banaya bhagwaan ne, ab aur improvement?? Haaye tumne toh towel ko bhi shararti bana diya😉loved it.

And the second part... Unconsciously drawn towards each other in their sleep☺️ pyaar blooming in full form..😆😆 loved how Sanskar gives back to RagLak, the scratches n all.. Swara applying ointment without any awkwardnes, this shows their comfort level with each other. And she also remembers his shower gel's fragrance😳 Dil khush rooh baagh baagh ho gaya😛 😃 Pls continue this or writen some more swasan romance... Save us from the 'misunderstangings ki barsaat'...Pretttyyy pleeej😃😃

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Viji dear,

Could I have more treats tonight? It is wonderful. The first one, jealousy, I personally feel make the most hilarious out comes some times. You narration is cherry on the top there. Poor Sanskar, how many fantasies will you fight with huh? Then I must admit Swara is rather stronger than I ever imagined, anyone else would have fainted at the glorious sight at least, but this sly girl is going to secretly cherish what she saw...the perfect Mrs. Sanskar Maheshwari I tell you!

The second, that start made me laugh uncontrollably, sometimes when the most insane things are said in serious tone it is hilarious! As for Ragini true, that is universally acknowledged I guess. As for Sanskar, he is a gone case. But a brainy one at that. One line and the whole script Ragini prepared for her Maha-entry collapses!

I do hope you will write more of this genre dear, they are too good!

loads of love,

Saku

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Viji yaar how could u think of such awesome plots everytime...its truely awesome and just so cute
sanskar is jealous of fed...omg!!!!!he is actually making effort of doing this and in second part

Swara see girl...u got a gem...and sanskar aah u hurt ur back just for swara...omg!!!if guys like sanky do exist in the world...gd please let me meet one of them.

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Viji darling...what a lovely set of drabbles...I had actually forgotten those days when Swara and Sanskaar were still in tht fake marriage and they had a bit of awkwardness btwn them and Sanskaar hadn't even confessed his love...seems such ages ago!

The tennis one was simply superb and I personally liked it best coz of the later part of tht OS whr he works out and tones his body sply his 'calf' muscles just to impress Swara...I'm not a major tennis fan tho I do understand the game but no particular leaning towards any player .. Tho m preferring federer at present if thts what it takes to make Sanskaar get all jealous and competitive for Swara's attention ...hahaha tht final closing line...oops what a malfunction but only Swara got lucky

The one abt Ragini's haq jaap and her eventual consummation I couldn't care less but her disgusting gloating making Sanskaar reply in kind was amazing tho poor thing he actually hurt himself in the process...and he wasn't even aware then tht he loved Swara but he surely did coz nothing else would induce someone to act in such a manner...

Are u going to write more?? Will wait for them!

Love Tas

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coolgal270

@coolgal270

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Viji,

Oh god! These 2 posts r absolutely hilarious and brilliant... Thank u thank u for writing them...

Tennis! Ooh me loves tennis! And fed..i am totally at swara's side..loved the jealous sanky...it was too much fun..😆

The whole 1st drabble is awesome...i couldnt help laughing all the while reading it...sanky taking crash courses to develop his calf muscles? 🤣And then that towel debacle! I was thinking kahin gravity shouldnt play its role.and that only happened!

i wish we have such hearty moments in the show too at some point of time..i mean the jealousy part, of course!😆

Oh god! That HAQ...finally its done and dusted with! So loved the way Sanky gave it back to them...also swara's realization for her depth of feelings for laksh..v nicely done!

Swara was def angry on sanky, not just coz he got the scratches, but for how did he get those...again jealousy and me loved it!

Wonderful post viji! Loved it to core! Keep rocking like this!

Ps: loved how u described laksh neither going to office nor doing anything at home!🤣

Love,sumi

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ZAINAB

@Miss-swasan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

I absolutely love all of your writing they are always so detailed that makes the story very vivid to the readers

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Wow just loved remembering the old times and the way that these two would stay united...

Seriously viji all your stories are mind blowing...

Just loved sanskaar at the end when he made ragani taste the bitter taste of her own plans...superb...

Oh how I wish there was a part three...

Thanks for the lovely dreams...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

A very good morning to all my dearest SwaSanian pals...🤗 🤗

Thanks so very much, for enabling me to wake up to such amazing comments on this 2 part drabble series. I will start replying individually in just a bit. Have read all the warm feedback, and it really made my morning special. 🤗