SwaSan Drabble series: Vignettes from the Past

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: lucky.m
viji🤗
loved the drabbles..

First part😆 , this jealous side of sanskaar was so much fun, and the last part🤣
sanky trying to show off his muscles and the towel act..cracked me up ..😆 aww my cutie jus because swara said she liked feddy ka muscles he had put in so much effort .he's such a darlin😳.btw I am in swara's team this time because fed is my fav..always😉

and second part ..ragya ka plan ulta padgaya ..sanky just had to say few lines ..man of few words lekin kaam ka ..😆.. this guy is mad ,he can go to any lengths for swara ..but kya kare like swara we all love this paagal😳.. and this part reminded me of mahram patti scene of swasan😊

Thanks for posting this now ..I am going to sleep with smile on my face ..

Gud night ..happy swasan dreams😛

Hey Dear...🤗 🤗

Am so glad I could bring a smile to your face with these drabbles. Hope you had pleasant SwaSan dreams, I certainly did. 😆 😉

Fed is a marvelous player na? So very artistic. I can actually imagine Sanskaar being all jealous when Swara admires the Fed. He wants Swara's attention only for him, you see! 😳 😆

And yeah, he can and will go to any lengths to protect Swara. He won't mind scratching himself all over his back, to make RagYa stop taunting Swara. 😉 True, he is a paagal...but at least he had the TLC with Swara applying ointment on his cuts. ☺️

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: simsen23
Viji... 🤗
love you dear for posting these two Drabbles on swasan 😊
I was upset with the current track..only watching this for swasan.
But these two hilarious,cute and partly emotional piece made my day...
Now i can sleep happily with a smile 🤗
🤣 sanskar's towel show lol...how funny is that..
I can totally imagine swara's 3 perfect Os...
And then the second one..
Oh man he loves her so much 😳
thank u once again for posting these two ..
Love you
simi 😊

Hey Simi my dear...🤗 🤗

Thanks so much, sweetheart. Am really happy I could bring a smile to your face and make you happy with these 2 drabbles. I have 2 more, which I shall do my best to post by tomorrow.

Sanskaar's towel show must have been awesome, nahi? 😉 😃 Swara certainly must have been impressed! 😆

He is so very protective of her, he would not mind inflicting scratches on his entire back, to make RagYa stop taunting his Swara. 😉 Now he and Swara only need some time to realize that they mean to each other...😳

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: manasie23
Viji🤗
The first part was simply hilarious and very light hearted OS which I loved... Jealous Sanskaar🤣
And the last para🤣🤣

Second part was superb RagYa ka plan ulta pad gaya and SwaSan just grew closer to each other the guilt Sanskaar was feeling was amazing

Thank yaa for the pm Viji😳

Hey Manu sweetheart 🤗 🤗

Thanks so much yaar. I am really overjoyed that you loved this Drabble series so much.

Jealous Sanskaar is fun to read about na? 😉 And gravity made sure Swara got a pretty tantalizing sight. 😆 😳

Sanskaar is definitely so very protective of Swara, he would go to any lengths to ensure RagYa don't taunt her. He is already falling deeply in love with her, though he hasn't accepted it to himself yet. And Swara too, is feeling very moved by his actions, comforted by his presence in her life.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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TRPS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Viji! 🤗
hilarious it was in n second time too! 🤣 🤣
my God! Sunny boy why didn't you made your plan of showing off fursat se?!!!! My God! I guess! Swara got herself a sight to remember! 🤣 I can hear a teasing Swara singing "rab ne banaayaa hogaa phursat se tujhe mere yaar " 🤣 by the way, not into watching tennis, but me too support Federer whenever I watch!!
and second was so cute!! :)
along with Sanskaar's heartfelt dialogues*so good they were* I love this line... "By doing this , Sanskaar? When was
the last time you even cut your nails?" so caring!!
the tension in
his lithe, muscular frame belied the
pleasant, noncommittal smile on his
face.(err! Viji! this was due to anger or pain or something else!! couldn't get it! :P) and "Iron this shirt for me, will you
Swara?" he said calmly, smiling at
her, casually slinging the shirt across
her shoulders!! *whoot* this was so perfect!!!
seriously ! enjoyed so much reading these drabbles! hope to read more soon! :))

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: foresight
both parts were really cute. first one with jealous sanskar and then the most understanding sanskar who doesnt mind hurting himself to protect her from hurt. beautifully written and beautifully worded.👏

Hey Sapna sweetheart...🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton yaar. So happy that you liked both parts of this Drabble: the jealous and possessive Sanskaar; as well as the protective and ultra caring Sanskaar. 😉 😃

Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Awesome post
Really loved the whole story. Swasan have mutual understanding.
Swara is really lucky, because sanskar is her life partner. For protecting swara from problems and insult , he was ready to hurt himself. He only wanted to see her happy.

Thanks so very much, Sakkiyah dear. 🤗 🤗 I'm so very happy you loved this Drabble series.

Yeah, Sanskaar has started feeling very protective about Swara. He can go any lengths to save her from taunts and insults, and doesn't care even if he has to hurt himself to shield her.

Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Res- am writing so dare not stop but have to grab my spot or I'll end up on page 20 something 😆
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Viji 🤗

When you scrapped about writing a Drabble series, I was so excited and wanted to ask you when so my pleasure and excitement doubled when I saw you'd posted today itself! This was so cute and lighthearted, a real relief for me after not only the torture of the recent track but after intense writing for DK. Like Shruti said, for me too, the early phase of SwaSan's pretend marriage was by far the best phase in the show. The whole chemistry there and all that the writers managed to convey about their relationship, can never be forgotten. I am so glad this is set in that time!

Love All

I am not a tennis fan (football and cricket rule our house) but I so enjoyed this! I felt the nail biting tension of the match and by the time Sanskaar got irrationally but adorably jealous, I wanted to cheer! I was in stitches for most of this piece 🤣. The getting ripped in 30 days challenge was seriously making me clutch my stomach and especially combined with Swara's total oblivion as to the motivation behind her already gorgeous husband building his body up like the Greek God he already looks like, was the cherry on this cake! The humour was perfectly balanced as was the innuendo and the towel slipping reminded me so much for some reason of the famous Ranbir Kapoor towel dance from Sawariya 🤣

The Scars of love

OMG- I had read that scene when it was first described on the AT I think, before it made its way to the Khayali Pulao. Was it Nik's idea or someone else's? But reading it here made me smile and feel strangely satisfied at the one-upmanship over RagYa as they were so detestable in that phase. The lengths Sanskaar would go to for Swara- , no wonder he turned all of us into a gaggle of fan girls! Very cunningly described and loved the interweaving of care and tenderness on both sides amidst the humour there.

Really enjoyable read!
Love you,
S xoxo

Shru darling! 🤗 🤗

Thanks so very much sweetheart, it really made my day to know that you found this so cute and refreshing. I agree with you and Shruti, the pretend marriage, with all that cute nok jhok between SwaSan, the slow growth of an awareness between them (notably from Sanskaar's side, but from Swara's too, just that she wasn't ready to acknowledge it), was so very memorable and precious!

I'm just so happy you loved both parts of this Drabble set. I have 2 more, which I likely would try to post tomorrow or max Monday.

I just love Tennis, so couldn't resist the reference here. Sanskaar certainly wants Swara's attention all to himself. He just hasn't acknowledged that to himself yet, that's all! 😉 And that body building certainly paid off, he got a physique to match the Swiss Maestro. Let's call him a Greek God, as you say! 😆 😉 Apollo perhaps? Or Adonis? 😳

And the towel behaved the way towels do...Ranbir had his towel moment in Saawariya 😆, and Sanskaar the dude, has his when he is trying to impress Swara with his bulging calf muscles!! Waise, I'm sure Swara must have agreed that Bhagwan certainly made Sanskaar too, badi fursat se!! 😉

On part 2-- Nahi, re, not on the AT. It was my idea/scene 😊

You must have read this when I put that idea in brief on Kavya's thread back in September. We were discussing how the truth was certainly not going to come out soon, and speculating on what was the path ahead for SwaSan. 😊 I had put this brief scene there, and Kavya and Medhu had warmly suggested that I develop it further into a Drabble series. I finally did so! 😊

Sanskaar is certainly ultra protective of Swara, he is paagal enough to not care about causing himself harm, provided he is able to shield Swara from taunts and insults. This man's love...I tell you...

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: misaki
RES🤗
I swear I should just stick to Fiction for a while and not venture out. 😭 MAde me so mad 2n8s epi! 😭 Will be Unresing this one pretty soon though so that I don't miss out all the fun!😊

Hey Geethu sweetheart...🤗 🤗

I don't want to even think about yesterday's episode, it was headache and heartache inducing. 😕

So glad to have you comment on this piece Geethu. 🤗 Let me know what you felt, whenever time permits. Hope your workload has eased up a bit.

Love,

--Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: nisha_hc_bs_dd
Awesome !!

Thanks so much Nisha dear... 🤗 🤗

Glad you loved it.

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RUQAIYA10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Viji Dear this absolutely Fantastic!!!!!.🤣. Man I really miss those days of Swasan. Their scenes could lift any episode that were otherwise weighed down by a weepy moppy pathetic mess that was Ragini. Sanskar trying to get ripped 🤣. Did not know he would take Swara's fan girl moments so seriously. I also like Federer and for sometime I even had a girl crush on Maria Sharapova. The towel dropping scene was just hilarious. We should really be grateful to Sir Isaac Newton for discovering Gravity.

Urghh! Ragini .. she was such an insufferable maniac. Not that she is any better now. She is desperate and pathetic in her attempts to show Swara how she has finally triumphed in getting her Haq.

Sanskar in jeans and Vest. Loved the in your face retort to Ragini!. He never misses to hit her right where it hurts. And I loved the last scene. Stirrings of an everlasting love!😃

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