SwaSan Drabble series: Vignettes from the Past - Page 2

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Viji 🤗

When you scrapped about writing a Drabble series, I was so excited and wanted to ask you when so my pleasure and excitement doubled when I saw you'd posted today itself! This was so cute and lighthearted, a real relief for me after not only the torture of the recent track but after intense writing for DK. Like Shruti said, for me too, the early phase of SwaSan's pretend marriage was by far the best phase in the show. The whole chemistry there and all that the writers managed to convey about their relationship, can never be forgotten. I am so glad this is set in that time!

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I am not a tennis fan (football and cricket rule our house) but I so enjoyed this! I felt the nail biting tension of the match and by the time Sanskaar got irrationally but adorably jealous, I wanted to cheer! I was in stitches for most of this piece 🤣. The getting ripped in 30 days challenge was seriously making me clutch my stomach and especially combined with Swara's total oblivion as to the motivation behind her already gorgeous husband building his body up like the Greek God he already looks like, was the cherry on this cake! The humour was perfectly balanced as was the innuendo and the towel slipping reminded me so much for some reason of the famous Ranbir Kapoor towel dance from Sawariya 🤣

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OMG- I had read that scene when it was first described on the AT I think, before it made its way to the Khayali Pulao. Was it Nik's idea or someone else's? But reading it here made me smile and feel strangely satisfied at the one-upmanship over RagYa as they were so detestable in that phase. The lengths Sanskaar would go to for Swara- , no wonder he turned all of us into a gaggle of fan girls! Very cunningly described and loved the interweaving of care and tenderness on both sides amidst the humour there.

Really enjoyable read!

Love you,

S xoxo

Am so happy to hear you loved these 2 drabbles. Really made my evening. 🤗 Am going to have very sweet SwaSan dreams tonight. 😆

swara staring sanskar when sanskar is show her his body ..

and in that process the oops moment was awesome..

Rags got her haq..

wow..

aww,,, so sweet of sanskar to hurt himself to protect swara from more taunts of rags and lucky..

nice..

continue soon..

thank u for the pm..

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You dedicated it for me Viji , i am completely surprised by it .🤗 . And for you alone , i am okay with Novak winning on Sunday , atleast you will be happy with the outcome😊.

Lovely OS Or Drabble series . It was so good👏. Ofcourse i loved all the tennis reference , how can i not😆 but the whole Swasan part was awesome too ⭐️.

The whole US open final flashback . I was more like Swara , shouting Go Roger, Go Roger, just like i was doing yesterday 😭, i had this whole huge glow just like Swara when he won the third set too😆. But then the match was over and i am back to Murray Vs Djokovic. Honestly this was not my first preferance , you know that, dont make remind the first round shock i got because of Rafa 😭, then Stan on fourth round . Too much of tennis talk i think . Moving On to the Drabble series

So Sanskar wants to be like Federer because Swara said he looks great even when he is 34😆, Ofcourse how can one not admire federer game as said it has its elegance . Why does Sanskar like Novak , he wants his son to be like Novak too. If i remember correctly not sure on one of your tennis based OS we first started talking about tennis, wasnt Swasan son name Varun . So how did Sanskar let swara name him Varun isnt he jealous of the actor on TV. 😉

The whole towel scene was hilarious, poor Sanskar trying to show off his Fed like Physique .🤣 ,😆 . She covered her eyes, ofcourse she is Sanskarri girl afterall.

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Ragini got her HAQ even before her truth is revealed 😲, ofcourse with her determination and lakshya being unaware of her intentions this seems logical.

Loved the comfortable sleeping position of Swasan , we always hoped we get them sharing a bed for ages, and now with this marriage God know when it will happen , i dont know how long it will take to make them live in a single room together, i miss living together Swasan😊

Atleast we are getting Lakshya and Sanskar relationship back on track in the show. Ragini will never change . No one would share there private moments in front of others unless asked but this is ragini we are talking about, she is really bold and courageous masked in this shy bride act.

Lakshya wanted Swara to be hurt by it, you dont know dear , she moved on the day her sister married you , the love she has for her sister is much more than the crush she had on you .

Sanskar back in action, i loved how he follows the ideology of paying back what he gets, if someone shows him kindness, he will repay then thousand times. And for Ragini he is the perfect Guru . I loved that whole scene, i so wish to see ragini and lakshya reaction on that.

Loved Swara tears for Sanskar pain . Lovely Drabble series dear. Once again Thanks for the PM and the dedication , do write more tennis based Swasan drabble series. i would love to read them .