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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: akanjli

This was so cute !!!
Nicely written. Keep up the good work. 😊


Thanks😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

Awieee..

such a heartwarmingly simple, sweet and absolutely gorgeous piece of story Shruti.ā¤ļø.

and that old mangalsutra bit was perfection.

and the end note.. the smiley smile transferring itself on Swara's face.
how beautiful is that..

what a way to break silence Sanskaar!
That's My Man!


Thanks Nimmi😳

the smiley was a reference to the sad face she had drawn. he acknowledged having seen it & sent her smiles to cheer her up😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: a_uma

beautifully written.. simple scene but so powerful.. šŸ‘..

I could imagine swara before my eyes while I was reading it.. loved the way sanskar broke his silence.. I really hope to see this on TV..


Thanks Uma😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Omg!shruti!its fantastic.
Swara put a facade of bravery bt she broke dwn alone.she z loosing her hope.
Jst thn sanskar sent her anothr pair mangalsutra which he himslf put on her,also pieces of divorce papr with captn 'stop crying swara' & smily.
Ths gesture z enough 4 swtara.
Love it dear.


Hey Sonu

She is in a weird position. She knows Sanskaar is pretending because like us she knows he wont give her so much pain. He just cant! But she misses him terribly & hence the tears. She just cannot bear the distances.

And finally with the parcel Swara knows her faith in him is justified😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: aamias

Hi shruti.

AWESOME post
.u should write more and give us the pleasure of reading.


Thank u😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

Lovely OS Shruti. I absolutely loved it.


Thanks a lot Nita😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

omg this was so beautiful
loved it


thanks prachi😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: deep_

omg too good superbšŸ‘


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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Shruti, (right)

The story was so beautiful and very touching. Loved reading it.


Thank u v much!

Yes I am Shruti & you are?😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: flora212

Outstanding piece of writing! How I wish it happens on the show !


Thanks a lot Flora

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