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The.Lannister

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: akanjli
This was so cute !!!
Nicely written. Keep up the good work. 😊

Thanks😳

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The.Lannister

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...
Awieee..

such a heartwarmingly simple, sweet and absolutely gorgeous piece of story Shruti.❤️.

and that old mangalsutra bit was perfection.

and the end note.. the smiley smile transferring itself on Swara's face.
how beautiful is that..

what a way to break silence Sanskaar!
That's My Man!

Thanks Nimmi😳

the smiley was a reference to the sad face she had drawn. he acknowledged having seen it & sent her smiles to cheer her up😳

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The.Lannister

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: a_uma
beautifully written.. simple scene but so powerful.. 👏..

I could imagine swara before my eyes while I was reading it.. loved the way sanskar broke his silence.. I really hope to see this on TV..

Thanks Uma😳

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The.Lannister

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Omg!shruti!its fantastic.
Swara put a facade of bravery bt she broke dwn alone.she z loosing her hope.
Jst thn sanskar sent her anothr pair mangalsutra which he himslf put on her,also pieces of divorce papr with captn 'stop crying swara' & smily.
Ths gesture z enough 4 swtara.
Love it dear.

Hey Sonu

She is in a weird position. She knows Sanskaar is pretending because like us she knows he wont give her so much pain. He just cant! But she misses him terribly & hence the tears. She just cannot bear the distances.

And finally with the parcel Swara knows her faith in him is justified😳