OS: Stop Crying Swara - Page 8

Originally posted by: misaki

Res 🤗

So excited that you have started writing as well. I so badly want to get home and read it

Unres - Shruti I am so very sorry that for this very late reply but kya karoon I feel like 24 hours in a day really aren't enough!

About the wonderful wonderful piece of work. It was seriously beautiful re! 🤗 It was so real and subtle yet powerful. Bravo!👏 The reading all the messages again and again - could totally relate. It's something I think all of us we have done once or twice na? Very very real. Like shruti said it made me remember our Medhu's writing. The parcel with divorce papers torn up and a very small note from our Very own sanskaar. Seriously! Brilliant!

You really should write more Shruti!🤗Loved Loved this one. Put a grin on my face! 😃😃😃 My Sanskaar!❤️

After the madness on the show and all the negativity here this was a much needed breath of fresh air!So more jhappis to you! 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: _akaur_

Beautifully written

The way you described Swara going through all their happy moments reminiscing them, and then carrying on her daily routine with courage not showing anyone her feeling was really good.

Sending the torn divorce papers and the other mangalsutra, along with a small message "stop crying Swara :)" was really touching as he knew that she would be crying.

Do write more please..

Happy New Year :) :) :) :)

Aksh

Lanny... 😆😆😆 I dont remember where I resed on this thread ☺️ so posting my comment here only 😳
A brilliantly written OS. You know very well..how I wished the track would have gone something like your OS. Those times still gives me shivers just be remembering them. Sanskaar's silence and Swara's crying 😭 (😆). Really loved the way you penned down Swara here. Her strong face for world and her vulnerable side only when she is alone that too with memories of Sanskaar. In a way its like the only person who have the HAQ (😆😆 did I annoyed you Lanny 😈) to see Swara without any pretense and walls is Sanskaar. 😳 Coming to last para... that was my favorite part... him sending the mangalsutra and those torn divorce paper... oh... how I wished that would have happened... It didnt ...but I really loved atleast it happened in your story. A logical and in-his-character thing Sanskaar could have done during that track...when I had first read this OS initially during that track I was almost sure that something like this will definitely happen but CVs gave us biggest bjkt which are tolerating till now But really very beautifully penned down piece Lanny...keep rocking...
Love
Nitzy😳

Originally posted by: ..NightDragon..

Lanny... 😆😆😆 I dont remember where I resed on this thread ☺️ so posting my comment here only 😳
A brilliantly written OS. You know very well..how I wished the track would have gone something like your OS. Those times still gives me shivers just be remembering them. Sanskaar's silence and Swara's crying 😭 (😆). Really loved the way you penned down Swara here. Her strong face for world and her vulnerable side only when she is alone that too with memories of Sanskaar. In a way its like the only person who have the HAQ (😆😆 did I annoyed you Lanny 😈) to see Swara without any pretense and walls is Sanskaar. 😳 Coming to last para... that was my favorite part... him sending the mangalsutra and those torn divorce paper... oh... how I wished that would have happened... It didnt ...but I really loved atleast it happened in your story. A logical and in-his-character thing Sanskaar could have done during that track...when I had first read this OS initially during that track I was almost sure that something like this will definitely happen but CVs gave us biggest bjkt which are tolerating till now But really very beautifully penned down piece Lanny...keep rocking...
Love
Nitzy😳

Wow what a beautifully written os...shruti...

Originally posted by: raaz19

Wow what a beautifully written os...shruti...

Can I just say the feeling of lose was lovingly described and the pain she felt of lose was nice to see...

I loved the way she communicated hee longing to be with him the numerous calls and longing looks at the memories they had made...

The ending was fantastic and one that I was so happy to read...yes he had saved there love and shown hee how much he cared...The tearing of the divorce papers and the return of her mangalsutra was a nice touch...

Must say a fab ready...

Thanks for sharing razia