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The.Lannister

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: KawalArora
oh wowww it was vryyy nice. I loved it vry much n now just want the same to happen in the show. It was vry cute way to reassure Swara.

Thanks Kawal😳

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The.Lannister

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: patralekha24
Wow! sanskaar is smart, lovely os :)

That he certainly is!

Thanks😳

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The.Lannister

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: RUQAIYA10
Wow Shruti!! This is terrific. Wouldn't it be great to see Sanskar doing something similar in the show. All the pankhis here are desperate for that one sign. We all want to experience the immense relief and become free from this prison of uncertainty

I am glad that you commented on my OS Ruqaiya. I always love reading your comments on Viji's work😳 So I was especially glad when you commented on mine😳

Seriously its high time that we & Swara get some sign from him!

Edited by The.Lannister - 10 years ago

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The.Lannister

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
That was soo cute Shruti!😳
Loved it immensely. The end brought a smile to my face as well
'Stop crying Swara' How cute!!
Wish this happens in the show

Thank you so much Sakshi😳

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medha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Shruti😃----

Visited the forum after some AWOL time..its christmas eve and I have an off day tomorrow. Been online for the past two days catching up on swasan binge. Miss it nowadays...what with CFA and my first job playing tug of war with me😭

Have you by any chnce written anything in the mahabharat forum? Its just that I seem to remember this particular style of writing over there. I had written one wee thing once..read a lot of other works though.😊

This kinda OS is right up my alley. Adore the simplicity. Both you and me are anyway fond of the uncomplicated broad strokes..which somehow define the smaller details even more. Once broad strokes fade away--they somehow make the finer print even more stark don't they?

The quite assurance of that note---and the smiley face(a nice reminder of the smiley-cryey face she drew on the window...)...he knew she was spouting water..and in his usual word-sparse way, just said..stop crying.

Its somewhat of a hanky replacement from our Hanky man 😃

after all the mangalsutra was hers---and the divorce papers got torn up. You conveyed the huge impact with two short sentences Shruti----and I totally love it. Its way more effective than long sighing descriptions.👏

A very merry christmas and a happy new year😃

medha.

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The.Lannister

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: medhasankar
Shruti😃----
Visited the forum after some AWOL time..its christmas eve and I have an off day tomorrow. Been online for the past two days catching up on swasan binge. Miss it nowadays...what with CFA and my first job playing tug of war with me😭

Have you by any chnce written anything in the mahabharat forum? Its just that I seem to remember this particular style of writing over there. I had written one wee thing once..read a lot of other works though.😊

This kinda OS is right up my alley. Adore the simplicity. Both you and me are anyway fond of the uncomplicated broad strokes..which somehow define the smaller details even more. Once broad strokes fade away--they somehow make the finer print even more stark don't they?

The quite assurance of that note---and the smiley face(a nice reminder of the smiley-cryey face she drew on the window...)...he knew she was spouting water..and in his usual word-sparse way, just said..stop crying.

Its somewhat of a hanky replacement from our Hanky man 😃

after all the mangalsutra was hers---and the divorce papers got torn up. You conveyed the huge impact with two short sentences Shruti----and I totally love it. Its way more effective than long sighing descriptions.👏

A very merry christmas and a happy new year😃

--
medha.

so what is your opinion on the current track? both swasan & the other crap track.

I have never been on the mahabharat forum. but i have written a few OS/ SS on mahabharat. here is a link to my works in case you are interested😳 if you do read do let me know how u found it😳

http://archiveofourown.org/users/ALannister/works

yes even i like it better when it is short.

Hanky replacement😆😆 I never thought of it that way😆 But its easy to guess when Swara is crying, since it is almost always😆

A merry Christmas to you too Medha & a happy new year!

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The.Lannister

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: arshi21

Absolutely lovely :D

thanks😳

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medha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

so what is your opinion on the current track? both swasan & the other crap track.

I have never been on the mahabharat forum. but i have written a few OS/ SS on mahabharat. here is a link to my works in case you are interested😳 if you do read do let me know how u found it😳

http://archiveofourown.org/users/ALannister/works

yes even i like it better when it is short.

Hanky replacement😆😆 I never thought of it that way😆 But its easy to guess when Swara is crying, since it is almost always😆

A merry Christmas to you too Medha & a happy new year!

I have no idea about any other track..only what I figure out there is some hanky panky with Atariya aunty and Ragini suddenly being so powerful as to take over the entire business empire.I am guessing her confession CD has been eaten by a dog or something..otherwise itni majaal ki laksh ke arrest leke blackmail kare?

Wonder why she is never at office as well😆--the brothers and DP-RP too have lost interest in work.

I found that coat scene and yesterday's departure scene wonderful...and the post-it scene😳

sanky seems really cut up about their trust issues and cannot believe that she will fall in love so suddenly...but I can't buy that he believed she would demand alimony from him.

If someone one day wanted to hand me over to the police..and the next day realised that they love me--and won't leave me after spurning my advances for so long--i would be gun-shy too

If I was Swara I would concentrate on asking him out on dates and woo him before doing jassosi on atariya aunty. I mean businessman hain--loophole dhoondke he will overthrow rags by himself only without ur help. 😡one day she cries her heart out begging for his love--and the next day she is babbling about her nonsense mission. Poor sanky confused ho gaya ki wife pyaar karti hai--attention degi mujhe ya nahi.

Have only watched swasan scenes from Asha122's links...so whatever of the track I could jigsaw was this. of course divorce papers got signed somehow..no idea why or how😕---n even without submission to the court they have confirmed alimony claims😆.

Indian law ki toh ---and don't even get me started on biz laws. I lectured Viji on how mm waasis are an HUF--the only way rags can have so much kabza over everything.

I am gonna check out a few of these mahabharat works...its my favourite epic. I hate ramayana...never got why ram-sita ki jodi was supposed to be so auspicious.😕. spent half their lives in forest..bride got kidnapped..got her back--and insulted her with agnipareeksha--and finally after having twin sons..the wife got insulted again and committed suicide of sorts. YIKES!😡

Edited by medhasankar - 10 years ago

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Thank u v much!

Yes I am Shruti & you are?😳

You can call me Nyna😊

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RUQAIYA10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

I am glad that you commented on my OS Ruqaiya. I always love reading your comments on Viji's work😳 So I was especially glad when you commented on mine😳

Seriously its high time that we & Swara get some sign from him!

You are really sweet Shruti😳 I would love to read more of your works. So do let me know. After watching today's epi. It doesn't look like we will get the sign any time soon. Wonder for how long we will have to endure Sanskar's cold shouldering. 😔

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