OS: Stop Crying Swara - Page 4

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

So lovely shruthi..

I'm no critic so I cant write a long reply, though I want to.
But do give us more of these.

Been a pleasure reading.

Originally posted by: misaki

Res 🤗

So excited that you have started writing as well. I so badly want to get home and read it

Originally posted by: --Anna--

Shruti 🤗

When I told you in WA that the title was hilarious, I had not thought that the OS would be just as contrary to it. This was so beautifully written and kudos to you for writing Swara so well. I know how much you love Sanskaar, but frankly, you have done justice to Swara here, completely. Darling, we need to send this to Sharad and Co., for this belongs in the show. This IS the Sanskaar I like. 👏👏 I really can think of no other beautiful way in which Sanskaar can let Swara know how much she means to him. Painful in the beginning but soul touching in the end. 👏👏

A very heartwarming OS. Touched the romantic nerve in me. 😉

Fabulous job Shruti! You need to write more. Really!

Love

Anna

Originally posted by: .FairyDust.

Shruti !!

First of all, I missed you so so SO much! 🤗

We've got to keep in touch yaar, I miss the fun we used to have.

Coming to the OS, This is so Beautiful!

I didn't know you write so well! The writing was so simple and the words flowed seamlessly and I could actually see all this happening before my eyes!

And Oh My God the ending! ❤️😭

Ah Sanskaar sends her a new mangalsutra and torn divorce papers - could there have been a better way to break his silence?

And aww that little note, those 3 words and that little :) ! It immediately transported me to that time when Swara drew a :( smiley on the window, it felt to me as if this :) was Sanskaar's reply, his assurance that everything will be alright! ❤️

Swara got a smile on her face after seeing that and on the other hand I was muttering incoherent things, smiling and crying like an idiot, It was so touching! 😭❤️

Damn it girl you're so GOOD at this! ❤️

I would love to read more from you!

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice Os... 😊

Originally posted by: iam-in-love

OMG Shruti... This OS is jst awsm... So lovely...

I really want same scene in serial too...

so cute & wndrful OS Shruti...

Originally posted by: TRPS

very beautifully penned down OS!! those little details their messages, forwarded jokes, clicked photos in her phone, warmed my heart. hope, someday in serial we will see such casual yet beautiful and heart warming scenes..
nice idea it was for conveying his message by mangalsutra, torn divorced papers and sigh!!! that note.. :) in the end, with Swara I too had a large grin on my face after reading the note of not to cry. so sweet of Sanskaar!! )
really good OS it is and hope to see more of such beautiful works from you. :)

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Its really such a beautiful os...short but completely to the point!! Loved it

Originally posted by: Dplee

So beautifully written!!