OS: Stop Crying Swara

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Silpa

@iam-in-love

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

OMG Shruti... This OS is jst awsm... So lovely...

I really want same scene in serial too...

so cute & wndrful OS Shruti...

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TRPS

@TRPS

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

very beautifully penned down OS!! those little details their messages, forwarded jokes, clicked photos in her phone, warmed my heart. hope, someday in serial we will see such casual yet beautiful and heart warming scenes..
nice idea it was for conveying his message by mangalsutra, torn divorced papers and sigh!!! that note.. :) in the end, with Swara I too had a large grin on my face after reading the note of not to cry. so sweet of Sanskaar!! )
really good OS it is and hope to see more of such beautiful works from you. :)

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Its really such a beautiful os...short but completely to the point!! Loved it

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akanjli

@akanjli

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

This was so cute !!!
Nicely written. Keep up the good work. 😊

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Awieee..

such a heartwarmingly simple, sweet and absolutely gorgeous piece of story Shruti.❤️.

and that old mangalsutra bit was perfection.

and the end note.. the smiley smile transferring itself on Swara's face.
how beautiful is that..

what a way to break silence Sanskaar!
That's My Man!

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a_uma

@a_uma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

beautifully written.. simple scene but so powerful.. 👏👏👏👏..

I could imagine swara before my eyes while I was reading it.. loved the way sanskar broke his silence.. I really hope to see this on TV..

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Omg!shruti!its fantastic.
Swara put a facade of bravery bt she broke dwn alone.she z loosing her hope.
Jst thn sanskar sent her anothr pair mangalsutra which he himslf put on her,also pieces of divorce papr with captn 'stop crying swara' & smily.
Ths gesture z enough 4 swtara.
Love it dear.